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King vxx
New Peasant
Joined: April 13th, 2009, 8:45 am
Posts: 4
Gender: Guy
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 Home is near When Drew took off for his journey he thought what would happen to him and what he would do for a living. Drew wondered if he should stay but if he did he would be a chicken. Drew was a hired assasian if he quit he would be hunted down for quitting so Drew continued. On his journey he meet a person, he looked familar but he couldn't figure out who he was so he asked him who he was.
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| April 18th, 2009, 4:01 am |
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Wil
New DragonRider
Joined: June 18th, 2008, 5:49 pm
Posts: 369
Location: at the base of the Dark Tower, running through the fields of roses.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Elves
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Re: Home is near OOC: here's a tip:
description.
use a few vibrant, descriptive words when you write. make the first post a lot longer and describe settings. maybe go into some hypothetical about what could happen to him when he sets out on his journey. describe how he leaves, where he's headed (general direction's fine), and use dialogue. discretion is okay, but make it vibrant discretion that MAKES people want to write more of the story to figure out what happens.
sorry mods for stealing your job, but i figured i'd help out a fellow rp'er a little.
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| April 19th, 2009, 5:10 am |
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DuBrisingrEbrithil
Wise DragonRider
Joined: April 12th, 2009, 4:52 pm
Posts: 1205
Location: england
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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Re: Home is near yeah andalso you need to leave it a little more open ended do that and i'll join in
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