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Arget (edited)
Name: - Arget
Age: - 93 (looks 19-20)
Gender: - male
Skills: - he is pretty good with magic but compared to other he isn't that Great. A good swordsman and is good with a bow. Also he can play the Ocarina (yes it is a real instrument)
Race: - half human half elf
Hair: - like the color of the night sky (black blue)
Eyes: - silver
Home Village: - born in Ceris but moved to Ellesmera.
Parents: - his mother was an elf woman named Nirra and his father was a human named Drake.
Siblings: - none
Character Personality: He doesn't talk much not because he doesn't want to because he has no to talk to. Even though he really doesn’t have any friends Arget is a very kind selfless person. He would help anyone that was in need of help, if it's an elf or human was outnumbered by soldiers he would help the elf/human even if it was a solider against a bunch of humans he would help the solider. No matter how or why if someone is in trouble and outnumbered Arget would help. Even though he is very quiet when he is talking to a good friend Arget becomes very talkative. Arget is very defensive especially over family and friends. His fighting style is a mix offensive and defensive. Arget is very cautious when meeting someone new. You could say that he has a hard shell around him but if you manage to get past it he is a great friend. Arget has a good sense of humor depending on the joke. If you are telling a joke He will probably laugh but if you are making fun of someone as a joke he'll probably punch you or something. Arget believes in the balance of nature what does that mean? It means he will eat meat. Maybe it's because he was raised partly by a human that he can stand eating meat but he knows that’s how nature works the bigger animal eats the smaller animal.
Character History: Arget's father was a jeweler/blacksmith, and one day while his father was looking in the Edda River for jewels he met an elf women named Nirra. They fell in love and had a child. They named their child Arget because of his eyes (arget means silver in the ancient language.) Unfortunately Arget's father couldn't escape time and he died of old age when Arget was 57. Before Drake died Arget got his inheritance, his father's sword. Arget didn't have a "fun" childhood either. The elves didn't really like Arget because he was only half elf. When Arget turned 89 he decided to leave for Ellesmera to follow in his father footsteps and become a blacksmith. He went to Rhunön to become her apprentice. She accepted his offer so he can make rider swords (if more riders appear) so she doesn’t break her oath. In Ellesmera Arget go this first sword and bow and arrows. He has been mastering the art of swordsmanship, archery, and magic. After a few years being in Ellsemera Arget learned that Ceris was attacked by some of Galbatorix's soliders. After learning of this Arget went straight for Ceris. Ceris wasn't destroyed like Yazuac and only a few people were killed. Unfortunetly Nirra was one of the few people that were killed. Consummed by saddness and anger Arget found out who killed his mother and where he was. The man's name was Bret and he was in Gil'ed. After traveling to Gil'ed Arget finaly found Bret. After finding a privet place he swiftly killed Bret. Looking at the man lifless body Arget felt bad and gave the man a proper burial and left Gil'ed before anyone knew what had happened. After leaving he went back to Ellsemera and resumed his normal life.
Weapons: A sword that his father gave him before he died. Elven bow and arrows and an assassin's knife
Likes: - to learn about dragons and their riders. How to make swords and other stuff from Rhunön. When people talk to him and don't make fun of him. He also likes to play the ocarina and to learn how to fight.
Dislikes: - when people disrespect his father or him. People that start unfair fights
Animal Companions: - he has a horse named Rogan but he isn't all always with him.
Character's Physical Description: about 5'7 with a lean body. His hair is a black and blue color like the night sky while his eyes are are silverly color like the moon. His hair is short and spiky. Arget wears usually a tunic but when working with Rhunön he also has an apron/smock on. When fighting he has light armor. He has an earring in his left ear. On his right arm/shoulder he has a black tribal dragon tattoo. He usually wears dark clothes with no shoes. Not really tan but no pale. Not a lot of hair execpt on his head. He always has his sword with him in case someone needs his help. Usually has his ocarina with him.
Dreams for the Future: - to show the elves that made bullied him that he is just as good as they are and just because he's half human doesn't mean that he is weak.
Reason for Dreams: - because when he was younger the elves bullied him and made fun of him and back then he wasn't strong enough to defend himself.
Alignment/side: - unknown
Last edited by fanghur on February 14th, 2009, 12:52 am, edited 13 times in total.
February 4th, 2009, 9:13 pm
dracoaestas
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Re: Arget
This is an interesting charry, but there are a few things you need to fix up.
First, your Personality needs to be 12 lines, your History needs to be 15, and your Physical Description needs to be 5. Please add a few more lines to each of these to meet the requirements.
Also, there are some grammar/spelling errors that could use fixing up. Try running this through Word if you can, it'll take care of that.
And last, can you please put spaces under each section on the top half? (Like put a space in between "name" and "age" for example.) It makes it much easier to read.
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February 5th, 2009, 1:34 am
fanghur
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Re: Arget (edited)
how about now?
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February 5th, 2009, 2:38 am
fanghur
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Re: Arget (edited)
please will someone approve my bio?
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February 6th, 2009, 3:03 am
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Re: Arget (edited)
Looks good to me, just need some approval from other mods now.
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Re: Arget (edited)
Calm down, we're not on here 24-7. lol
I think this actually needs one more line on History and Physical Description, if I'm not mistaken.
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February 6th, 2009, 3:11 am
fanghur
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Re: Arget (edited)
sorry i'm a little impatient
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February 6th, 2009, 3:13 am
fanghur
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Re: Arget (edited)
better?
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February 6th, 2009, 3:57 am
dracoaestas
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February 6th, 2009, 4:10 am
fanghur
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Re: Arget (edited)
wooo!!! so do I need more acceptances?
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February 6th, 2009, 4:16 am
Aeraldi
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Re: Arget (edited)
One more, either by ILS, Star Gazer, or RiderEriel.
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Re: Arget (edited)
i'm tying so hard to be patient.lol
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February 6th, 2009, 11:10 pm
fanghur
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Re: Arget (edited)
urg. come on
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February 8th, 2009, 1:06 am
i-luv-saphira
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Re: Arget (edited)
Interesting character. He'll make a good addition to the RPG.
ACCEPTED!
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February 13th, 2009, 4:30 pm
fanghur
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Re: Arget (edited)
AHH! Finally! thank you ILS! thank you! woo!
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February 13th, 2009, 5:10 pm
Aeraldi
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Re: Arget (edited)
Well then, after all that patience (Or should I say impatience ) Your character is now Accepted!!
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