Name: Fanil Kalem

Age: 789(looks 29)

Gender: male

Race: Elf

Side: The elves, the varden, the dwarves.

Intelligence: He is very wise. He has been studying for many years all over alagesia.

Looks: Has Blue pants and shirt with a hood. Has a tan, is slim, wears black gloves a lot, very muscular, a scar on his back and a yawe on left shoulder. He wears black shoes. Has diamonds in ears. His secret about them is that he keeps some energy in them so he can use them in great need. CLOTHES IN BATTLE; Has Silver armor that is damaged all over,dragon head shaped helmet, and wears a long black cape that has hole in it. A belt with daggers in it and dagger tied on his leg. Black boots.

Face and head: angular like most elves. Scar on his jaw. Long jet-black hair

Eyes: Blue,deep with age.

Family: Ancestor of Eragon the first, Parents Leona (mother) and Gilderien (father) brother of Vrail and elf maiden wife Selena.

Home: Ellesmera

Good personality: Kind, understanding, is polite when people ask him for advice and ways helps the less fortunate. He doesn’t talk much. he thinks about his brother a lot. He likes too teaching.

Bad personality: Gets mad easily. What ever you do don't ask him about his family he goes ballistic. The only person he allows to is Eridor and his wife to talk about his family with him.

Skills: sneaking around, he is very flexible, swordsmenship, magic and dragon riding.

Likes: Ellesmera, his wife Selena, his friend Faolin, his friend's dragon Galador and dragon Eridor.

Dislikes: Galbatorix.

Dreams of future: Wants kill Galbatorix and go back on his quest with Eridor and his dragon rider friend Faolin.

Reason for dreams: Killed all the dragon riders and his brother. He liked being on his quest with Eridor and Faolin because he gets to talk with them a lot.

Specialty: Amazing swordsmen and Powerful in magic

Weapons: Rider sword, a dagger he holds in a sheath on his right leg and a bow of
finest make on his back.

History: Fanil heard at a young age that his mother died right after he was born
and that his father left Ellesmera the same day. His brother Vrail raised until he was
old enough to take care of himself. Fanil was always training his swordsmanship with
his good friend Faolin(who just became a rider in traing).One day a dragon egg hatched
for Fanil. Fanil started his training at the age of 20.Together Fanil and Faolin trained to become riders. Fanil and Faolin where the best students in there class. Fanil found out about his magical powers one week after Faolin did. Fanil and Faolin became riders after only 6 years because they where such good students. At the age of 201 he became an elder. He was called into a battle one day. The enemies who wanted to destroy the riders because they wanted to rule alagaesia had created an army. Fanil and eridor(his dragon) slew countless enemies. He even killed a Ra'zac. While he was in battle he saw that his friend was battling a shade and no one there to help. He and eridor flew Fanil so he could Faolin.( Eridor had to help some one (Faolin's dragon couldn't help Faolin because if he did the three other riders he was helping would have been killed). While they where trying to slay the shade a Kull was sneaking up on them. Together Fanil and Faolin killed the shade. Right after that happened the Kull made a big cut on his back (which is how he got his scar).
While Fanil was unconscious Faolin had carried him out of the battle area. When Fanil regained conscious he was in a bed. The battle was over. As soon as he was feeling better he got back into his position as a elder. When he came back to his position as an elder they talked about their victory and how Fanil and Faolin had killed the shade alone. Then one day two riders (Galbatorix and his friend) who just became riders went on journey. They hadn't come back. And then a year later a farmer summoned the riders. It was the same rider who went on the journey. While he slept for three days the elders talked about him and what happened to his, dragon, his friend and his friend's dragon. When Galbatorix woke up he went to the elders requesting another dragon. He and the other elders said no. After a few days he announced that he wanted to wanted to find his father.So he decided to go on a journey. Faolin asked if he could come with him. Fanil said that he could. So the two friends were out on a their journey when they got called back to ellesmera because Galbatorix killed all the riders (including Vrail). And since then they have been fighting Galbatorix ever since. And when Jeod and Brom went to steal the eggs from galbatorix he helped them. He found a place in the spine on one of his quests in where few dragons still remain. There Fanil's dragon mated with a dragon named Lenora. Because Lenora was one of there own friends the other dragons agreed to help the elves, human and dwarves to defeat Galbatorix.Eridor and Fanil were about to leave to Ellesmera with Lenora when Lenora had eggs. With the new dragon eggs they went to Ellesmera. They told Izalandi about the other dragons in the spine. That night there was celebration and feasts upon feasts. The elves sent 2 of the eggs to the varden and kept two for them selves. Now they wait for a dragon egg to hatch for some one.

Most embarrassing moment: When he said bringsr he got distracted and burned all his hair away.

Proudest Moment(s): His proudest moments were when Eridor hatched for him and when He and Eridor saved an entire village of 21,00 people

Companions: A blue dragon named Eridor and a werecat named Rin.

Height: 6,5


Dragon name: Eridor

Age: 769. The only sign that shows that he is old are his dark blue eyes.

Genders: male

Intelligence: He is very wise from all the time he has spent spearding his mind and studying the minds of animals.

Parents: Ohen(father) and Opheila (mother)

History: He trained with Faolin's dragon, when he finished his training he went on a quest with Fanil until they heard that Fanil's brother and his mom and dad were killed by Galbatorix. And have been fight Galbatorix ever since. He and Fanil found a place in the spine where dragons still exist and mated with a dragon named Lenora. Eridor and fanil were about to leave to Ellesmera with Lenora when Lenora had eggs. With the new dragon eggs they went to Ellesmera. They told Izalandi about the eggs. That night there was feasts upon feasts. The elves sent 2 eggs to the varden and kept two eggs for them selves. Now they wait for a dragon egg to hatch for some one.


Personality: Kind but gets mad easily. He is does not talk with any one but his mate Lenora, Fanil, Fanil's wife Selena, Fanil's friend Faolin, Faolin's dragon who is named Galador.
How they met their rider: While he was lined up to touch the dragon egg.

Color: Blue

Appearance: A huge dragon. He has a scar on his left with wing and another up his jaw.

Armor: Silver armor with scratches all over from the many times he has used it.

Size: 16 meters long and height is 10 meters high

Dreams of future: to destroy Galbatorix and go back on his guest with Fanil.

Reasons for dreams: Galbatorix killed his parents. He wants to go back on his quest with Fanil because they spent a lot of time talking. He really liked it.

Most embarrassing moment: When he was flying and tried to breathe fire. He didn't get any fire but the smoke made him start coughing. While the smoke was distracted him, he started falling. He fell upside down on his butt with one claw stuck in his mouth.

Proudest moment: When he and Faolin saved a village off 21,000 people.

very good

dont know why it wont get accepted

ask, and why did you make another topic for your character? Just politely PM Glenwing to get suggestions on improvement so it will be accepted.

You might want to copy the form EXACTLY, you're not in order and you have NO personality. Do not make another post for your character, that's just pushing it under people's noses. There are a lot of forms to go through, so it may take a while for Glenwing to get to your character. Also, you could always PM me if you want your character reviewd, politely, as you did. Just add a bit more to personality and history, and copy and past the form exactly.

YAH! lol well idk a thing about his but im agreeing

do u think my characters are good

They might be, if you used the curretn form . . .

Hey, are dragons names are almost the same. Your is Eridor. Mine is Erador.

cool it didnt know that, is urs a female

it has been 24 hours and i have added more history and personality could some one check it

Yes Erador is female. You need to use capitols.

Rin is my werecat's name!

Also, put it through MSWord and check spelling and grammar once more. Other than that, you'll have to wait for Glenwing.

sorry but i didnt know that ur were cats name was rin. i wa thinking about the name orrin and i thought about the end i thought that could be a good name for my werecat.

spelling and grammer

how do i check that

Go to Microsoft Word, copy paste your Character, and do spell check.

ok i did everything u guys told me to do can he be accepted

If he's the ancestor of Eragon I, wouldn't he be dead already? Wasn't that before the lengthening of elves' lives?

no eragon 1 is like his great great great great great great great great great great great great gandfather

I doubt there has been that many generations..mayby like 2-4 generations

yea true but thx for accepting him i have been waiting for a long time i am so happy