Name: Pan

Age: Ancient

Gender: Female

Skills: The Guradian of Ancient Lore before Serias, she had given up her position when her own powerful magic seemed to have killed her. She can speak to animals fluently. She has learned forbidden, unknown magic in the Heart of Voids, which includes stealing the soul of a nearby animal, and transforming into it, controling shape and size. She is a very great swordsman, but she uses magic a lot more than she uses her blade, although when she loses much of her magic energy, her blade is the only option. She can run between the 3 worlds; Nether, Under, and Living. Her eyes can see through a persons soul and their Giganips, which in the dark elf language means "Points of No Defeat." If anyone touches the target in one of these places, they can send magic though them and damage the organs from the inside. She is not godly though, and can be killed like any rider. She has been defeated many times by her own kind, but she has won many times as well.

Race: Archmec (A race lost to the Void. She was once dark elf. She may be also known as the fallen Dark Elf.)

Hair: Silver, and each strand can heal minor wounds and cure poison.

Eyes: Shining Gray, they can see the Giganips.

Home Village: The Temple of the Ancients

Parents: None, she was born from the ashes that created the universe, and [color=\red]used most of her power to create things.[/color]

Siblings: None, although Serias seems to relate to her in some way...

Character Personality: Rich with power and wise, she had many friends in the world before she was "killed" by her own magic. Life in the Underworld has made her uneasy and unpredictable. She was once a gentle Guardian, but her life has been ruined by countless times of chaos and greed for power. Those that are power-hungry should fear her, for she does not take greed lightly. She was also a great friend to the elves of Du Weldenvarden, and she was always happy to be with them. She will never be the same again and seeks revenge against all things that have caused her transformation.

Character History: Before the Universe was created, there was nothing but the Sands of Time, running through matter in billions and billions of particles. A meteor of compacted matter from another Universe exploded, causing the sand to burn and create the world. The heat formed the sand into a huge hourglass, in which the remaining ashes of the Universe were stored. But the ashes were alive, and with the last of their strength created a little girl. This little girl was sent to the edge of the void in hopes of creating a planet. The power coming out of the girl was so great, and the young Universe began to vibrate, the a planet was created. The girl's energy to control the Universe was taken, and made a box which held the heart of the first Ancient, Dremten. The remaining power from the box formed the Temple of ancients, and the ancients themselves with it. The girl, called Pan, now drained of most of her power, floated gently down to the Temple, where the Ancients took her in as one of their own. When the girl was five years old, the Ancients created the first race, dwarves, and then dragons, followed by dark elves, wood elves, and the grey folk. The last race, humans, were destined to be ruled by evil. Pan saw all of this happen before her very eyes. She saw the world created. Years went by, the girl was very old, as were the ancients. The races of the world, called Alagaesia, were expanding rapidly in population, and soon made temples of their own, which evolved into towns and cites as time passed. Pan was in her room, looking at a box that she couldn't seem to open. Once again, she looked down at the world. It was finally how it was supposed to be. Dragons, elves, and humans made an alliance as did the dwarves, who stayed in their mountain home. Over the next few years, another universe sent their Ancients to conquer Pan's. They were called demons, and their leader began a fight against the Ancients of Pan. Pan, in hope of locking away the demons, opened the box and ripped the Universe, which created a Core Hole, and sucked up all the demons. Pan came along with them, and the door to the Underworld was closed. Pan lived the next twenty years in the Underworld, where she learned more magic and new power. She found her beloved box in the Heart of the Couldron in the Underworld. She dived in and opened in, sending herself,and evil, back into her world.

Weapons: A spirit sword that channels her magic energy into a blade.

Likes: Living things

Dislikes: Greed

Animal Companions: Every living animal

Character's Physical Description: Wears a cloak over chronum armor, and under that she wheres a dress of chronum mail, followed by a tunic made from the leather of Cerberus. She wears greaves of chornum and chronum knee-high boots.

Dreams for the Future: To bring back the owrld as it was before she left.

Reason for Dreams: Her only dream is so that everyone can live in peace and the world would be whole once more.

Alignment/side: Good

cool not bad i like the part where he is ancient

lol, its a she

sorry u should check out my character fanil kalim

pretty good, from what I can tell.
all i need is for someone to take a
quick review. If i need finishing touches, plz tell.

there is one part where you put the wrong 'wear/where' in HAHA. lol sorry.. yeah this character is invincible lol.

In reply to your PM, this is god-modding a bit in my opinion. Sh's got a lot of powers with no corralation to the Inheiritance world, and she uses magic with a limitless supply of energy. Very well written, but a bit god-dy.

(If she was created from the Sands of Time, it does seem as though she is an all powerful, 1st being.)

I never said she was invincible, and can never run out of energy. In my history, i wrote that she lost almost all of her power when she created stuff, but ill change it. what do you mean it has no corralation? BTW, ill change the parts that you thought was godly.

If you want, I can go through and highlight the parts that were iffy.

That would be great. but plz don't take out any parts that would ruin the whole thing. such as her history. i mean, like ultra major details.

yea she does seem all powerful but i like the history

After a closer inspection, she does hae weaknessess. I have pointed out a few phrasings I don't hold with, but again, I'm not the final verdict on these things! She is a very well formed character, good job!

Ok, I changed them. Thanks Svit-Kona!

Much better! It's near perfect now!

ya it is much better now

Just home, sorry I didnt accept him before now