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Name: - Kurdon Neelix

Age:- Unknown, precedes the Du Fyrn Skulblaka or Dragon War

Gender: - Male

Skills:
Energy - Kurdon, and the rest of his race, had the ability to manipulate raw energy. They could do almost anything they wanted to with it: put it in objects, fire it, give it to others, heal the worst wounds, the list goes on. This was both a blessing and a curse for them, as Nurdans had to kill one another to gain more power, although it was rare for one to kill another, it did happen. There is a set limit to how much energy one Nurdan had, but this was increased by each other Nurdan they killed. Although he can manipulate energy, he doesn't know any of the Ancient Language, so he can't apply it to magic. However, he can counter certian magics if he can specify what kind of energy is being used faster enough.
example: someone elses Brisinger, he would counter by removing the energy that makes the flame hot.

example 2: someone uses a spell that compacts the dirt around him. He can't figure out what type of energy is being used, and there for can't counter.


Strength - Kurdon is strong. Very strong. With each Nurdan he killed, not only did his energy go up, but so did his strength. It is nothing more than brawn, but he is strong enough to pick up a fully grown dragon at most once, it is difficult but he can with the right provocation.

Race: - Nurdan, an ancient race that precedes the Elves and Dragons, but all of their histories were lost so no record of them are known to exist.

Hair: - Silver, should length

Eyes: - Pure white, no iris

Home Village: - Kilthren 'Tal, Captitol of the Nurdan Empire of old.

Parents: - Unknown/ forgotten

Siblings: - none

Character Personality: To say this man loves chaos is an understatement. He would set a house on fire to light a candle. He is insane in most ever sense of the word and thinks along the same lines as Galbatorix; everything must die and he must rule. He sees the Empire, Varden, Dragons, Elves, Humans, Dwarfs, and any other breathing thing as an enemy that he needs to kill. He has a soft spot for no one and nothing, and can kill in cold blood simply because they looked at him. Although, at the same time, he is a bit lazy. He prefers a different method of chaos. He would rather sow seeds of deceit and lies and then watch people tear each other apart, instead of getting his own hands dirty. Thats not to say he won't get his hands dirty with the blood of the innocent and guilty alike, he would just rather not. He is cruel, mean, cold, insane, with just a hint of psychotic thrown in for good measure. Since he loves chaos, large crowds work for him. The bigger the crowd, the happier he is, becasue this means that he can cause more chaos with less chance of getting caught.

Character History: When Kurdon was a young boy, he was taught how to manipulate energy. This was the beginning of the Ancient Language, before the actual makers of the language put boundaries on it with the words. He wasn't always a monster bent on world domination, once he was a sweet child with hopes for a bright future, but one day, he accidentally killed another Nurdan and gained their power. He became addicted to the feeling of gaining power at a young age, and made it his goal to become the single most powerful Nurdan there was, but to do this meant the doom for his race. So, one day, while he and his father were working in the fields, Kurdan took a field scythe to his back. The power he gained was great, but it wasn't enough. When he came of age and could own his own home, he killed his mother by suffocation, she couldn't over power him since he had his own, the man's, and his father's power, and now he had his mothers. From there, he went on to kill his neighbors and their families slowly becoming stronger and stronger until he was the only one left. During his killing, he began to loose himself, and see the world as evil and himself as good. When the Dragons came, he ignored them, keeping to himself on the outskirts of the land. When the Elves came and wared with the dragons, he watched happily, enjoying the chaos and death. He watched the rise and fall of the Riders with great interest, although he didn't really care. Now, he figures he has stood by and left the world rot under Galbatorix long enough, it's time to speed up the process.

Weapons:
Long sword - a simple steel long sword, but has been specialized by Kurdon to withstand his energy attacks without melting.
Long Bow - a simple long bow, but modified the same way his sword has been.

Likes: - Chaos, Death, Mayhem, Destruction

Dislikes: - Everyting that breaths

Weakness / Fear: - Fear, that he will die before he sees the end of the world. Weakness, he is vulnerable against close range physical attacks.

Animal Companions: - none

Character's Physical Description: 6 feet 8 inches tall with Shoulder length silver hair that is always straight. His face resembles the combination of a rugged dwarf while having a slight slant like an elf. Pure white eyes that have no irises. He typically wears a black leather coat with a brown shirt underneath and tan pants. He wears a simple black belt that he keeps his sword strapped to at all times. He doesn't always wear his bow and quiver, but if he does, he will wear it across his back with his bow always strung.

Dreams for the Future: - Death for all

Reason for Dreams: - he's insane?

Alignment/side: - None, he hates everything.


Last edited by Rathon on November 28th, 2010, 3:43 am, edited 2 times in total.

November 23rd, 2010, 3:32 am Profile
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Post Re: Kurdon Neelix
Sounds like a really interesting character Rathon. He sounds like a character that's going to give the good guys some trouble lol. Anyway, looks good, I accept :D

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November 23rd, 2010, 3:49 am Profile
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Post Re: Kurdon Neelix
well that was unexpected...I mean uh, thanks ^^
but he's not after just the good guys lol, the baddies need to watch out too

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November 23rd, 2010, 3:51 am Profile
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Post Re: Kurdon Neelix
I believe you need two more lines on Personality, Rathon. Also, before I accept, could you specify what he can do with magic (like generally)? Just so we make sure all that energy doesn't make him overpowered? Otherwise, this is looking cool so far. :)

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Done, and done
I added lines and tried to clarify what he can do with Energy.

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Excellent. That certainly works, then. I Accept. :)

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Post Re: Kurdon Neelix
Nice charry, Rathon. :D I Accept.

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Post Re: Kurdon Neelix
So, if I'm not mistaken, it's all good now? No more approvals needed?

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Post Re: Kurdon Neelix
Precisely. :D All that needs to be done now is let draco move your bio and you can start rping with Kurdon :)

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Post Re: Kurdon Neelix
whoo!
I can smell the burning buildings already :twisted:

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Post Re: Kurdon Neelix
:shock: Oh boy. I should be very, very worried, shouldn't I. :shock: lol :lol:

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Post Re: Kurdon Neelix
You and everyone else... xD
You read what he is like, insane, crazy, psychopathic, and sides with no one... like me when I'm irritated ^^

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Post Re: Kurdon Neelix
lol nice. Now don't burn down too many buildings, Rathon. Heheh. Have fun with Kurdon. :)

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