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Name: Silver Alice Deepmoon

Age: 14

Gender: Girl

Skills: Silvers skills were useful. One was excellent aim. She could take a bow and arrow and hit almost anything with it. Another skill was her construcktion work, she wasen't strong but she could build really well and instruct with hand motions wht to do too. She could build almost anything.

Race: Pale elf of Du WeldenVarden

Hair: Light blonde with shine like Silver.

Eyes: Deep blue eyes of the ocean.

Home Village: Carvahall

Parents: James and Leah Deepmoon

Siblings: 6 brothers, All with dark black hair like a moonless sky with no stars and green eyes like moss.

Character Personality: Silver had a very quiet personality. She never talked much, though she had little to say. She wonders away a lot. She never liked sadness, there was no laughter, it made her unhappy to see no hope for the village. She didn't enjoy friends at all. They took her time to keep to herself. She had many ideas. She loved thinking of new things. She wasen't vain and she wasen't selfish much. Though her least liked thing was talking. It kept her from thinking. She never said what she was thinking out of embarrasment. She was very self-concious. When someone made fun of her appearance she always let it get to her. She was very kind, though she never showed it. She loved to make others happy, though she never tried to, except her brothers and sisters. She would smile in pleasure. Silver often daydreamed. She would think of bright blue skies filled with the dragon riders. She even wished she were one. To have a dragon would be amazing. She thought that maybe that a dragon would make her happy, happy enough to smile, once more.

Character History: Silver was born April 4th. She wasen't born into her family, she was adoopted. Two humans, (now her parents) found her laying in a basket on a river floating by and they got her right away. They knew right away she was an elf. She lived with them not knowing of her past. When she was 6 monthes old, she knew how to walk. She could walk around the entire village without falling. At age 2, Silver could talk in complete sentences that were understand able. She was also very surprisingly polite. At age 4, she knew how to read. She read 9 year old books in 2 days. She also knew her numbers 1-100. Then she learned her multiplication, divition, and more math at 6. Then she was no longer educated, her parents knew no more. At age 7, began to drift into the forest, every day for longer hours at a time. Then, people began to talk about her and thought maybe she was too different for them. From then on she was not treated bad, but not treated well. So, she never talked at all. The years flew by. Every year like the last. On her 14th birthday, everyone tried to be the nicest they could because they wanted her to return to talking, the silence was ominous. They missed her musical voice. They wanted to see her smile at the thought of wonderful presents and always be happy. Though, she still lived with no words and no smiles, only blank faced for days and days.

Weapons: Silver's weapons were a dagger and bow and arrow. Her dagger had a bright blue stone in it given to her by her brothers for her 14th birthday. The handle was bright copper that shone in the sun. The blade was slightly curved at the end and shaper then anything else in the village. The second, her bow and arrows, she used for hunting, no one else was brave enough to go into the forest. It was pure white and the arrows were blue tipped. They were silent going through the air.

Likes: Her passion is dancing under the moon while shes all alone in the summer. She adores long walks in the forests that could last hours. She loved stories of dragon riders from Brom. She begged him every day for a new one. She loved more then anything books. Stories being said were not enough. To read them alone was her favorite thing to do.
Dislikes: She doesn't like to be with others much. Being alone is something she just liked. She hated noise more then anything. Most, she hated sadness. It made her want to cry. Anytime she saw tears she ran o the forest to keep from it herself.

Animal Companions: Silver's only friend was a small hedgehog. Her little friend had no name as she could never think of one. She wanted to call him Mirrin, though she thought it didn't fit.

Character's Physical Description: Silver wasen't very strong. She didn't lift things a lot and she neverworked on loading wheel barrels. She was very skinny. (she didn't eat a lot) Silver had very strong let muscles though. She could run quite fast and she was tough.

Dreams for the Future: Silver dreamt of going and becoming a dragon rider. She knew it weren't possible though, also to travel to the elfs. She was incrediably fond of them.

Reason for Dreams: Silver dreamt these things because she longed for adventure. She wanted everyday to be different. Not the same like thos boring village.

Alignment/side: Silver hoped that when she was older she would be able to go to the varden and help them fight the so-called king.

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Last edited by Rain on August 4th, 2008, 11:45 pm, edited 5 times in total.

August 1st, 2008, 3:37 pm Profile
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Post Re: Silver
Just so you know, when your write in the box it comes up with more lines than it does posted.
You'll need to extend your personality to 12 lines and your history to 15 lines.

There are also a few grammatical errors but I can look over those.

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August 1st, 2008, 10:32 pm Profile
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Post Re: Silver
Is that fixed?

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August 2nd, 2008, 12:11 am Profile
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Post Re: Silver
A couple of things; First, one more line on both Personality and History.
Second, take out the date of birth as we don't know the time period in which Eragon is set.
Third, put in the place where she was found because as I was reading it "I thought that she was abandoned and then picked up by another set of elves. Took me a while to figure out that her foster parent's weren't Elven. Just put in a few details that make the history a litle easier to understand.

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Polaris and Saiph
Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host)
Legion
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August 2nd, 2008, 12:46 am Profile
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Post Re: Silver
Does that make it a little easier? I should have thought of that from the start. :lol:

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August 2nd, 2008, 1:10 am Profile
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Post Re: Silver
That's great! If you get Star Gazer's approval then you can start RPing with us.

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Polaris and Saiph
Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host)
Legion
Kharsin


August 2nd, 2008, 5:30 am Profile
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Post Re: Silver
Yay! Thanks! Ill wait for Star Gazer then. :D

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Post Re: Silver
I accept


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