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Name: Bane (Real Name: Wyrda).

Age: 21.

Gender: Male.

Job/Specialty: Warrior and Leather Armor.

Race: Human.

Hair: silky black.

Eyes: Blue.

Body: Muscular.

Home Village: Unknown.

Parents: Unknown.

Siblings: Supposedly none.

Character Personality: Patient man, always willing to fight. He will do whatever it takes to kill the
king and whoever killed his parents. He also wishes to someday learn to bring the dead to life so he can bring his parents back to life. He is always angry but very rarely shows it outside battle. when not talking to his dragon he never talks to anyone else. He is a man that prefers to travel alone except his dragon. When he travels with someone he is always keeping them quite in case of a enemy sneaks tries to sneak up on him.

Character History: He was born in a one story log cabin. When he was three the King's Men came and killed his parents for not letting them stay in their house. The men felt mercy on the bow and left him with no harm except for a scar on his right eye. He started to fend for himself with all he had was some stuff his father hunted with. Then at the age of 12 he found a tanner that made armor and he learned the trade of that and of a blacksmith. 4 years later at the age of 16 he started training to become a knight. at age 18 he was done with his training and could beat all the other students. He left and ran into the forest building a small shelter and hunting regularly for food. One day when he was hunting he found a emerald that was very fine cut and later it hatched and it was a dragon. After a month his dragon which he named Destroyer took him to a spot were he found a green sword. He had heard of dragon riders carrying swords like this. He picked it up and said to himself, "I am a dragon rider.". a year later he comes to know of the elves and he goes there for training under Master Ormis. That is where the story starts.

Character's good personality traits: is very patient and also he is angry in battle.

Character's bad personality traits: Sometimes he pushes into battle and he is very strict about silence except from his dragon.

Weapons: A green sword he found that was made by an elf with a power only a dragon rider can unleash.

Likes: fighting for his life.

Dislikes: The King’s men, after they killed his parents.

Animal Companions: None (dragon not an animal).

Character's Physical Description: He wears a very tough leather armor that stretches and he made it himself, plus also he carries a emerald that was his mothers. He is very muscular and has a scar over his right eye from the soldiers that killed his parents. He has a pair of shoes also made of the same leather that is his armor.

Dreams for the Future: His dreams are to become the greatest warrior ever.

Reason for Dreams: He wishes to prove himself in this world.

Important things character has forgotten: His parent’s names and his real name (no he does not know his own name he gave himself the name Bane.)

Alignment/side: He currently sides with no one.





Dragon Name: Destroyer.

Age: 1 year.

Gender: Male.

Parents: Unknown.

History: His egg was found just after the king started ruling and was lost in a unknown forest and
was then found again by Bane The Warrior.
Personality: same as rider but he is a little bit of a pyro dragon.

How they met their rider: Bane found him in the forest by his little shelter.

Color: Emerald Green.

Appearance: Stealthy dragon that lurks around and can rarely be seen when he prefers not to be seen.

Amour: very tough leather that stretches as he grows made by Bane.

Dreams for future: With Bane becomes the greatest dragon and dragon rider ever.

Reasons for dreams: He and Bane are one of the last dragon and dragon riders.



Took me forever but I did it and I think I will write a book about this guy.

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March 12th, 2006, 4:27 am Profile
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Grammer, punctution, spelling, longer history, personality and appearance please/

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I used Microsoft word to spell check and grammar check this bio so it is all done if you have any more concerns or want to learn more just let me know

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some more in history and personality for both.

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Well i hope i understand to word correctly but if yes than I must say than patient man don't like fighting to much because its the easier way quite often... 8)

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em...what?

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Post Finnaly now is it good
ok here it is this is what i got.

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Let it be :(

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what are you saying i dont understand do you want me to add more or to you want me to just let it be how it is

????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?:



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Oh damn...you should jion some more informations!
Let it be was for Glenwing....

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ok and the first part i didnt understand plus i am glad glenwing said that because now i even think it is better plus it gives more of a back round also i had to fix somethings that i had overlooked

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Hmm...just put in a real name, nobody will know it till your charry finds out and reveals it. So that you dont make something randomly up...

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O come on this is a perfect story line. I will not change the name it stays even if i dont get it accepted ppl can still read it so hahahaha



WILL NOT CHANGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Just change it so you can RP! :roll:

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no i have built a perfect story line for this and i will not change it.


I have worked too hard to change now it may take me all of 2 seconds to change mind on somethings but not this is something i have worked on too hard.

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What's bad on his name? I like it! An Unknown Real name should be good idea a story of restoring his past throw his name should be amazing! :)

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i know that is what i was saying. and i have a name picked out for him so during his story he figures out his name. i just dont was to reveal till later is that so hard i mean i have changed alot of things and then glenwing comes up with this total bull **** and he thinks i am just going to change it no way

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Well, I'm sure Glenwing will understand so long as you have something good planned! :D

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i hope so i have worked to hard and if he still wont put it in i will just talk to Louis he i hope has rights to the whole who rps and that and he might be able to help me

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Hey glenwing this is just for you HAHAHAHA i am double posting

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I may ban you... also, put his name in so we know. Our RP characters dont have to. Oh and btw you need to put EVERYTHING in the bio, so you dont pull something special out your ass. So if his name is unknown then it stays unknown forever, to everyone in every RP.

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Wierd real name...accepted.

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"GRRRRRRRRRRRRR no double posting this is a warning" can anyone guess who i am?

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Heh **** you. Im an admin, and that was to alert you that it was accepted.

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sorry if you dont like it then i suggest not going onto forum games forum riddles just saying for my own saftey


again sorry about that

again i am very sorry (insert bow)

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