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Name: Adurna Orum

Age: 23

Gender: female

Skills: excelent survivor, weapons master, herbalist expert. she is also an incredible acrobat, and uses her skills in battle. She can also communicate with animals through telepathy. ANd she has a rare connection with nature, meaning she can see, feel, and hear things others cant, like the song that the rain makes as it falls to earth.

Race: human, but sometimes can seem almost elfin....

Home Village: some place in the hadarac desert.

Parents: sylvana and corinth Orum( both dead)

Siblings: one younger sister that travels with her. her name is Ravinia.

Character Personality: Determined and mistrustful. Adurna is a firece friend though, once you earn her trust she will protect you at all costs. she can be stubborn, but only about things that matter. Even though to most she seems icy, when it comes to her sister and her animal friends she con be loving and tender. she does not like men because of her past. her personality is a many layerd thing. she is most like a cat and an eagle, proud, fierce, and tempermental. She is very independent, and will rely only on her animal companions. Adurna is not afraid of dying, and would meet it gladly were it not for her sister. Adurna is very intelligent, she can look at you and read volumes from your body language, and she loaths liars. She will only lie when the situation calls for it, but tells her loved ones the truth. Adurna loves to sing and swim, and a love of climbing adn adrenalin seems burned into her blood through generations. she hates arrogance and will use her whip-like intelligence to puncture even the most swollen of heads. and if words dont work, she'll just let action do the talking for her.

Character History: Adurna grew up in the hadarac desert, and came to know that land better than anything through her adventures out into the dry land where she played with the lion cubs around the various watering holes. her family was small but loving, and her parents disliked the government. they spoke out about it often, and one day this got them in trouble. They had to move to a new town, but a troop of soldiers came and brutaly murderd all but her and her sister, whom they treated like tramps. when they were done, adurna vowed to take revenge on the kings men and the king himself if she can. thus she trained herself in all types of fighting, mostly from the animals around her by watching how they hunt and move, emulating her surroundings. Thats how she learned to use the forces of her body to counter her opponents brute strength. For weapons she learned from nomadic warriors who disbanded from the Kings army. and went on the road to begin her revenge by causing as much mayhem as she can for the king, and helping all who resist him. Usualy by getting them to the varden, who found her and her sister while they were fleeing from soldiers and wandering in the Beor Mountains. While on her way for vengence, she comes to discover talents like speaking with animals. And as such she came upon several animals that were in great need of help, and after she rescued them they became her most steadfast companions along with her sister who travels with her. and the people she travels with have also felt her gift at some point. All of them are ones who travel with her after saving her from some sort of peril. they defend eachother to the death.

Weapons: she carries an assortment of weapons. broadswords, bow and arrow, machete(sp), whip, you name it, she's got it somewhere. lol

Likes: swimming, singing, training, hunting, climbing mountains, sailing, all sorts of things.

Dislikes: traitors, certain types of men, winter, the king, soldiers, anything that harms her, her friends, or her family.

Animal Companions: one perigrine falcon by the name of Shahin, one emerald snake named kyragai, and one lynx named kitana

Character's Physical Description: tall and lean, she has a thin scar that stretches from her left temple down to the base of her jaw. she normally dresses in black leather, with a sleevles top so her arms can move freely, and a black metal band around her head, she also has a knecklace chain from which hangs a single snake fang, that was given to her by her father befor he died. Her hair is a deep golden brown that tends to darken or lighten with her mood, and her eyes are like molten amber held up to the sunlight with a ring of the purest emerald green around the pupil. the kind of green found in the shadows of fresh grass on a warm spring day.

Dreams for the Future: she has no dreams, just goals, the goal to live, the goal to bring down the empire, that sort of thing.

Reason for Dreams: what the empire did to her and her family.

Alignment/side: whichever side she feels will help her the most.

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Last edited by dragon lover<3 at hear on April 25th, 2008, 7:39 pm, edited 9 times in total.

January 17th, 2008, 8:48 pm Profile
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Post Re: Adurna Orum
Your chary has good base but could you please go back to the forum and use the guidlines? :D


January 20th, 2008, 5:37 pm Profile
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guidlines? what did i do wrong? *goes back and reads rules* .....oh....sorry :)

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January 23rd, 2008, 6:28 pm Profile
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ok, i edited it, the first post is the one im using now. it cant get much better than that.

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February 20th, 2008, 6:36 pm Profile
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History:15 lines
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February 21st, 2008, 4:26 am Profile
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ok, i did, i even counted everything!

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February 29th, 2008, 8:44 pm Profile
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When you are posting something and count the lines it is different than when you actually post it. It still lacks a few lines sorry. But I love the chary.


March 2nd, 2008, 3:25 am Profile
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rurlgfligginshviggenmckvarplarckydowhashmakatikcagurlenfirg! wah! ok, fine. Ugh!

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March 7th, 2008, 8:42 pm Profile
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NOw i truely am DONE! YES!

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April 25th, 2008, 5:31 pm Profile
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Looks good now! Approve!

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Good.


April 28th, 2008, 8:07 pm Profile
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Post Re: Adurna Orum
then could one of you aprove it or accept it or whatever so it can go into the next topic place? please?:)

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accepted by request from the rpg team

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sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. now someone needs to post a comment about it. please? :)


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Posting in someone else's character application is forbidden. The only exception to this rule is for RPG moderators.

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Post Re: Adurna Orum
oh.....heh heh...ok...*clears throat* sooooooooooo....nice use of the word forbidden....very effective...


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