53 elves are all the elves left in Du Weldenvarden. the empire has killed almost all of them. they are sending in the last rider to kill galbatorix. his name was Eragon. he was to fly over the empire and kill anyone of importence.

when he was flying over them it was enough to allow the elves to surprise the empire and attack them. then he rose. galbatorix. saphira flew over the arrows chasing her. galbatorix charged with hes sword drawn at eraon and saphira. they were so evenly matched that they soon grew tired. then eragon saw an opening and decapitated galbatorix's dragon. blow the elves were down to 27 warriors. it was almost like suicide but he knew he had to do it. they landed and were suddenly surronded by the empires warriors. it seemed hopeless. to make matters worse galbatorix was right in front of them. with a face like this only much much worse. how the heck could he do it?

"Stop," A girl (Me) said as she tore through the soldiers then she stood in front of Saphira and Eragon, "If you kill him I will die as well." She said, Eragon didn't think it would matter but to his amasment Galbatorix looked like he was about to loose the most precious thing he owned. Who was she? I thought then it struck me I had seen her before in Ellesmera...

as the urgul advanced i cut his head of waiting for the next to come. as soon as i could i looked around to see how many of us there were left. only 27! as i stopped to regain my footing i saw Galbatorix, Eragon and a girl i did not recongnize{sp}, i tried to run to Eragon, thinking i could shield him with my magic so he would be free to destroy Galbatorix once and for all, but as soon as i got close enough to see them all face to face i turned and looked at the girl. I tried to see who she was but Galbatorix advanced on Eragon and with all the strength i had left in me i fought to help him

"Stop," I shouted at Galbatorix, he paused enough for me to mutter something then A dark purple aora came over me and then I transported all of us (Good guys) out of harm and in Surda. Back on the battle field Galbatorix was enraged and shouted "NNNNNNNOOOOOOO."

i didn't know what to do other to wait for somthing to happen .....

one kill, two kill,three kill. Amarioyhi thought to himself as he emptied his quiver on the enemy soldiors. A great flash of light from ahead and he fell, blinded to his knees.
CRAWAHCH!!!
A huge soldior, atleast 7 feet tall carrying a waraxe covered witht he grime of war, brought his axe down to break Amarioyhi's bow. he swore vicously and drew his slender sword, moved with lightning speed and jabbed between the soldiors ribs. screaming, the soldior fell and did not rise. "what that flash?" he asked himself as he moved into the fray. He soon forgot because of a deafoning roar that sounded from across the battle field.