Name: Raft

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Job/Specialty: Merchant

Race: Human

Hair: Black Brown

Eyes: Black Brown

Body: Average, not muscular, not a slightly have a skill on any weapon, just like ordinary civilians.

Home Village: Small town in seaside

Parents: His parents are old, his father is 65 years old and his mother 53, their names are Catio and Sree

Siblings: Three brothers and a sister, he’s the youngest child. He has 6 nephews and nieces which all adore him.

Character Personality: He is often unlucky/ unsuccessful in almost all business agreements he deals with. Because he is a nice person and generous, he often gives lower prices to people in need but who don’t have much money. Nevertheless, he is always cheerful and doesn’t regret his way of life. He is full of spirit, funny, easy going, honest and brave, even though he prefers not to get himself in a conflict. He has curiosity and interest in science things, and loves to make friends along the road of adventure.

Character History: He spent most of his life in his home village, helping his father as a fisherman. After he was 15, he started to learn trading and helped his older brother to run his small store. When he was 20, a new family moved to their neighborhood, and there was a girl named Runia, which was like.. the lady of his dreams and so he fell in love with her. But sadly, not even a year after they pledged their love to one another, Runia’s family suddenly moved again without a word. Therefore, Raft planned to search and find the love of his life. He started to work hard and collected wealth, and after he was ready, he began his adventure over Alagaesia to find her.

Character's good personality traits: cheerful, has high responsibility, full of spirit, trustable, honest, brave.

Character's bad personality traits: Cannot fight (well—just like ordinary civilians), a little bit naïve, sometimes a loner.

Weapons: No weapons

Likes: Runia, science, fishing, books/parchment, meeting new people, trading

Dislikes: fights, conflicts

Animal Companions: a brown horse, needed for carrying him and his trade stock, its name is Lupus (Loo-poos)

Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc.) : brown pants, green-army shirt, maroon coat, pair of boots, and a hat (just enough to protect his eyes from the sun)

Dreams for the Future: Find Runia

Reason for Dreams: She’s the love of his life and he wants to marry her

Important things character has forgotten: Not forgotten, but what he doesn’t know yet is the reason why Runia’s family moved all of a sudden and what really happened. He hopes he can find some answers along the adventure.

Alignment/side: none / neutral

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I created a simple character because i never RP ing before..

its good, but a little hard to understand, on some things the wording is bad, try planning what you're going to say before writing it, like you wrote here, 'He’s often get unlucky/ unsuccessful in almost any business agreement he ever dealt with other party' I think that should say "He's often unlucky/unsuccessful in almost any business/agreement he's ever dealt with", you understand, I'm not trying to sound mean or anything, but it was hard to read...

I was planning it...!! *frown* Allright I'll try to fixed it *fixed*

It's very nice, complete and easy to read (because of the coloring.) Good job.

You'll notice I haven't changed any details, but I have fixed the wording for you.

Thanks a bunch for the editing...!! I know I'm always bad at grammar; not that i failed it on purpose... thanks a lot!
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caterpillar... u edited almost every sentence.. perhaps i shouldn't roleplay at all

Lol do you want to be accepted then? If so, its fine.

you gotta roplay cumon

you gotta spell...well ill accept you, PM me if you disagree :p

awww, you did good, and you got accepted!!!