A NEW RIDER AND FRIEND III

andrea was desperatly in love with eragon and did not know how to tell him.but one day she was thinking about telling him, and he read her mind. he in turn expressed his strong feelings for her. they decided to meet in carvahall at the same wall they first met. as they met they held each other i n tight embrace and asked each other how long they were feeling that way. eragon told andrea that he fell in love with her as soon as he lay eyes on her. she told him that she loved him as soon as she saw him as well. he then hugged her again and they both mounted their daragons and flew away in to the sunset.

This is in the wrong section, I think.
Perhaps the fanfiction section would be a better place.