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 Maxx(EDIT)(AGAIN!!!) 
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Post Maxx(EDIT)(AGAIN!!!)
Name: Maxx

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Skills:

Race: Human

Hair: Black

Eyes: Lime Green

Home Village:Hedarth

Parents:
Dad: Joseph
Mom: Anna

Siblings: None

Charater personality: Maxx is just a wonderer, doesn't care about the dangers of anything but want to go somewhere. He is strong, thinks before striking, smart, kind, is an all right person that you would make friends with. He is sometimes a loner and where he doen't want to talk about stuff he would climb a really high tree and stay up there until be feels hungry or a little bit better. Maxx also likes to read anything that is readable. (Yes that is a word thank you). He will fight to survive. Also caring for people that he cares about. He is a light sleeper that means that he would wake up easly. He sometimes hunt if he wants to. Enjoys watching battles behind a tree and in a way like to enjoy someone elses pain. Hangs with family and friends. Funloving. Likes to hang out at different places. Loves food but not eatting all day kind of love. If Maxx would get mad, it would be about someone that he really cares about got hurt or he/she got killed from someone. That is all of his personalities that I could think of so that would just be about eleven lines.

Charater History:Maxx was born in Hedarth with his mother and father. He was an only child with a few friends that he fights with. At age ten, he started training to fight. Maxx learned at age eleven where are the points where they can't move a certain body parts to order to not fight. At age twelve he learned to fight with only one sword and mastered that. When he was fourteen his master taught him how to use to swords because it was very important because at the time was when Eragon was alive and urgals were attacking the Valden. Maxx mastered that part three months later and got two black swords.

When he was fifthteen, he told his parents that he was going to leave town and travel to fight.(Not on Galbatorix side). He saw a dragon flying above him ten days after he left Hedarth heading north towards Ceris. He followed them but walking and not riding a horse or something.

A month later he made it to Ceris and bought a black horse with a white dot on the head of the horse and food. He ate food there and started his traveling again from Ceris to Kirtan. On the way he got attact by urgals and killed them. He ment some people and never got to know them as like in want to be friends. Three months that he left home he ment a guy that wanted a fight so he fought him until the guy gave up because it was hard for to get Maxx to get tired and does not give up that easy. After the fight he left the area and again back to his traveling. That is just it. Now is just the continue for Maxx's story.

Weopons: Two black swords- He got them and mastered the two blades when he was thirdteen years old and killed many urgals with them.

Skills: Mastered two blades, can shoot with a bow and arrow, also he tought his falcon to break wooden spears, and could use only one sword if needed.

Likes: Exploring and getting kicked out of places.

Dislikes: Over hearing that they're going to kill someone and doesn't like urgals.

Animals companions: A Falcon

Charater's Physical Desctription:Maxx is five foot and nine inches tall. His hair is spiked down wareds towards his right side. He normally wears a black shirt and black pants. Has light tanish skin. Maxx has a scar on his back about a foot long. He is normal weight normal size.

Alignment/ Side: Normal(between)


Last edited by maxx on June 5th, 2007, 3:10 am, edited 3 times in total.

April 14th, 2007, 3:41 am Profile
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Watch your spelling, and watch using phrases like "or something." It's nothing major though. YOu need to finish the "Skills" section, and explain what you mean by "he got them and master the two blades." Actually, now that I look, I think you just meant to say "mastered." Fix some little typos like that, and you're accepted. Great character!

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April 27th, 2007, 5:56 pm Profile
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Post Re: Maxx(EDIT)
I just edited yesterday May 25, 2007.


May 26th, 2007, 8:59 pm Profile
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