Name: Brandy Tops

Race: Human

Age: 34

Siblings: Two Brothers, Four Sisters. the eldest siblings Allan, and Michael. the eldest sister, Sarah, and his three youngest sisters, Leah, Valery, and Fuuko.

Likes: songs of old, epic stories, watching children play on the grassy fields of the Seezar foothills. Fresh cheese and a good slab of venison.

Dislikes: criminals, cheaters, drunks, and necromancers.

Dreams: has dreamed of someday flying as high as the clouds ever sense he saw his first dragon soaring high in the clouds. Dreams of getting rich and feeding the poor in the many towns and cities he’d visited.

Alignment: Good, Light. Serves the great Goddess Azura, and the God Ashura

Weapons: battle spear, round shield, twin dirks, compound bow, small quiver of arrows(dozen shafts), enchanting harp.

Personality: kind hearted, polite, well mannered, shrewd fighter, cautious yet fun loving, sober when the occasion arrives. Very thoughtful of most things he was raised to contemplate his problems and act when he found an answer. When he was young he watched his uncle burn to death as a result of dark magic use, which led him to a deep fear of necromancers and the dark arts. He is strong willed and stubborn in a fight but is wise enough to know when to quite and retreat.

Profession: Bard, storyteller, craftsmen, and soldier.

Description: Tall, nearly six foot four, very broad at the shoulders. short, curly, brown hair. hazel, brown eyes. well tanned complection. clean traveling pants and saddle breeches. ruff, worn cotton shirt and long brown leather cloak. large traveling pack strapped on his back and a black felt hat. shin high boots, a knock off from his soldiering days.

History: born in the mountains of Seezar. grew up in a ruff yet middle-class environment, he was raised by every woman and man in his village. He schooled by every traveling bard, wizard, and scholar the elders could find, up until he was twenty when his clan rights were engraved upon his body in the form of seven tattoos. Each tattoo was a symbol of a weapon or animal and an eight tattoo was later added as his right to leadership within the clan. He had learned to hold a weapon at twelve, and was proficient with a spear by sixteen, it was soon obvious that he was naturally talented with a spear. He put his skills and talents to use and joined the Imperial Legion and after four years of service he was promoted to Elite Guard. From then on he trained, night and day with the Imperial Elite for three years after his twenty-fourth summer. After leading the surviving a brutal skirmish with neighboring Barbarians he earn the rank of Elite Commander. After leading a regiment on a campaign into a neighboring land, he retired after three years of bloodshed and destruction. Returning to his village and clan he could not face his family, he had seen too much and taken too much from others. So in an attempt to renew his soul in the eyes of his beloved God and Goddess, Ashura and Azura, he took up the pack and harp at thirty-one and gathered every story and song of and Epic Tale, Blood Thirsty Barbarian Hordes, and Legendary Adventures he could hear and repeat for the next three years, and still travels strong today.

I can't fill in for the RPG team, but while you wait for them..
You left out siblings, likes, dislikes, dreams (and reasons for them), and alignment/side. You also have some extremely obvious grammar errorrs, and a few spelling errors in your applicastion. Also, you'll probably need a little more in personality, and a bit in History. Like I said, I can't fill in for the RPG team so these are just some suggestions.

Hope to see you RPing soon!

thank you very much! i wil be sure to edit my post now!

Great character, but you'll still need more in personality and history. Personality is supposed to be 12 lines, and history 15, just to give you an idea. Also.. by "enchanting harp," do you mean it's actually magical?