OOC: Ok First i'm going to ask the mods to give this topic a chance because i don't think anyone has done anything like it yet. I could be wrong

Second i'm going to have to give a brief explantion
This is a topic of wars and battles. It is set in Ceris the elven village. So all characters will have to start off by saying they entered the hall
You type in that you have seen an enemy force heading somewhere and that you need allies to fight them off.Anyone that wishes to help will agree and tell you there forces and what they can bring to the fight
When you think you have enough troops you enter the battle Topic and provide a link so your allies can join in the glorious battle.

here is my example

IC:Fenor entered the empty hall and walked up to the dinning table leaded with foods and drinks for the weary ,Rima close to his heel.
Fenor searched for any sign of life in the Great Dinning Hall
Fenor then drank deeply and refilled his wineskin while Rima went to the corner and climbed up the stairs to the rooms above
Find me a bed in the corner he asked Rima as her tail whiped around the edge of the wall.
Fenor removes his swords and lay them across the table, he then looked out the window"It has been a long and wearsome road now i should rest while i am able" He sat down and watched the door,eating an apple and running his hand along the hilt of his sword.
As Fenor waits for the others to arrive his thoughts return to the troops he had just seen.25,000 Empire troops and at least 3 Dragon Riders. I will need many more soilders to fight this battle but it is a small village why would he send so many his thoughts were interubed by Rima
Rima's head slowly came around the cornerI hear footsteps. Someone is coming

OOC: First off, I don't have too much trouble with this. Characters can call troops to fight for them as long as they can explain why the troops are fighting for the character. It needs to be a good explaination as well. For example, in 'A Dark Gathering', I've had Nilarek call a Draconian army to help him for which he has promised a new homeland.

Now your style of writing is good but I would ask that you have your writing set in past tense. So instead of saying "He drinks deeply and refills his wineskin while Rima goes to the corner to and climbs the stairs to the rooms above." I would ask you to say;
"Fenor drank deeply and refilled his wineskin while Rime went to the corner and climbed the stairs to the rooms above."

I'm sorry if I'm harping too much but your grammar could also do with a bit of touching up.

OCC: no thats grand i'll change it now
and to everyone else Do as he said aboout why the troops fight fo you

all i need now is others to join in

Yeah, you're grammar could do with some revision. Otherwise, same thing as Aeraldi said.

OOC: Would you mind if I was on the other side of the battle? The only character I can think of in this situation is my evil one.

OCC: I start a topic in the Empire for Evil or characters that would prefer to fight aganist Good

OOC: Fins, It seems every new topic I want to join you're already in lol.

IC: Go. Danagon told Andep. He was bruised to the bone. Andep was only alive because Galabratorix's men were afraid of him. Danagon didn't have the energy to speak, let alone heal himself. I know you want to explore everywhere in the world, but don't you think it was a bad time to come here? Keep moving. We can't stop. 10 men, Danagon can handle, even 50 men he can. He and Andep can easily take 150, but a thousand? No. They chose the worst time to enter the elven kingdom, especially Crecis. When Danagon saw he was losing, he used magic. Now he was dieing because of it. His training with Fenor was going well. He was trying to find Quaser still. But now he and Andep had entered a building, and turned a corner into a hall. A hall which must've been great at one point. Others. Andep warned Danagon. If anything happens, hide. As they turned another corner and finally saw the preson and animal, Danagon said one word. "Help." he said, and fainted, not even knowing if he had just asked help from Galabratorix or Queen Islanzadi.

Andep watched his rider faint. "Fenor, what a coincidence." He thought. It was Fenor Danagon and Andep had ended up meeting in the hall. He then watched Rima run away back into the forest and heard Fenor's message. "So this is the Battle Hall." he thought.We were traveling again. We had just left the Beor Mountains and on our way to the village..... Andep paused I don't know how many men their were, but we must of killed 100 before a man came and struck him with an axe in the leg. Then they all started coming, thinking this was their chance. Danagon had told me to fly but I wasn't leaving without him. He gathered his strength and got on me. They were too afraid of me to do anything to me. They knew if they killed Danagon I would die. Thats why I am fine. He looked at his rider, now healing. He explained how they got here quick and looked at his rider. He then saw Danagon open his eyes once more.

"I don't die that easy." Danagon whispered as he opened his eyes. He laughed at his own joke. He still laughed at inappropriate times. He then turned his head to see his friend, Fenor. "Thank you." he said, now feeling the spell healing him. A sudden thought occured to him. "Where's Rima? Did any men follow us? Where are we?"

OOC:
I think I'll come in. Technically, Fenor has met Ella and Zeke already.

IC:
Zeke snarled as shape-shift-golden-eagle-Fenor sent out a message. I and my Rider will help. We aren't far from you. he said in return. Ella ran to him and jumped into the saddle, Felecia did the same with Ebony. Zeke bellowed and jumped into the air, snapping his wings open mid-jump. They quickly flew to the Battle Hall and landed in front of it. We are here. he said. Ebony, Felena, and Midnight alighted next to him.

Ella jumped down from the saddle and strode into the Hall,"Fenor, we heard your message. We're here to help." she said. Her sapphire eyes watched his carefully. It had been awhile since she'd last seen him. It had been a mission that Queen Islanzadí had sent them on, about two or three, maybe even four months ago. Time went by so fast to her. Her black blue hair was down, cascading down her back to her waist like a rippling stream. A leather band kept it out of her face. Ella let Hannah have a little control of the body. Just enough to make her eyes become a mix of sapphire and ice blue. Hannah used the little amount of control she had to change her hosts voice so it sounded like her speaking,"Fenor, it is good to see you again. How fares your Fire Talk?" Hannah said, then Ella inserted her control over the body and changed the voice to make it sound like her,"Hannah, a major battle is almost at our front door, and your talking about Fire Talk?" she said, exasperated. Hannah snorted,"Calm down Ella. Fire Talk could come in handy in battle, probably much more than Ice Talk or Water Talk." she retorted, though not unkindly. Ella sighed,"You got a point there Han. Alright, converse about it if you must." she said, and let Hannah have complete control. Her hair shortened and turned light brown, then her eyes turned completely ice blue. Hannah shuddered violently. Ella, I hate it when you do that half control thing. she said to herself. Hey, I thought it was the best thing to do, and plus to be able to speak at the same time? Not even Felecia and Zana can do that, and their both older than us. Yeah yeah. I know. But Zana isn't that much older than me. Hannah replied. She shifted her sword,"Sorry about that. Back to the beginning. How is your Fire Talk?" she asked Fenor again.

Felecia stood behind Hannah,"So this is the famous Fenor I've heard so much about." she said,"My sister has told me a lot about you." she said,"Don't worry, it was all good." she chuckled softly. Her sapphire eyes danced with merriment as she smiled,"My name is Felecia, Rider to Ebony and here to help defend my people." she said, a certain ring in her voice. It spoke of untold wisdom beyond her years, her love for her people, her home, and most of all, her dragon. Felecia's black blue hair, like her sisters, was up in a pony-tail, revealing the pointed tips of her ears.

Ebony and Zeke extended their necks inside windows so they could participate in the conversation. Hello again little one. Zeke said to Fenor. Ebony snorted heavily, stirring some dust on a table nearby and moving every one's clothes slightly. I don't think we've met. My name is Ebony.

Felena shifted to an exceptionally beautiful elf. Her hair was the color of molten amber, her eyes a deep blue, darker than sapphire, but lighter than navy. She smiled pleasantly,"My name is Felena, but you can call me Fel for short." she said. Her dark maroon cloak shifted as she leaned against a wall, revealing her emerald green dress, which contrasted strongly from the cloak. The dress accented her flat stomach. She crossed her arms and looked at her dragon mate. Eb, are you okay? You seem a little flustered. she said to him. Eb looked straight at her snorted again, making her cloak and dress flutter around her legs. You know I hate it when you show off your body like that. What if you got a mate in one of your other forms? It would be really weird. he said, disgruntled. She sighed deeply through their link. Eb, you should know after two years of being your mate, that my heart belongs to you, and you alone. I could never leave you, even if it was in one of my other forms. And whats the problem with flirting with other boys from other races? Don't think I haven't seen you flirting with Phalynx. It's natural Eb. she said, and he winced. Ah. I'd hoped that you'd missed that. Okay, I guess it is natural. Just don't go to far Fel, you know I hate it. he said firmly. Her smile widened. Don't worry Eb. she said.

Midnight snorted heavily as he landed, panting slightly from flying so far. He folded in his wings and they disappeared from sight, so he appeared to be a normal horse. He walked into the Battle Hall, his hooves making sharp clops on the stone, and stood next to his friend and rider, Felecia. She set a hand on his neck,"I'm glad you could come Midnight." she murmured. He nickered softly. I go where you go. My herd is on it's way here as well. he said to her.

Magic jumped over a fallen tree. His gold/orange eyes burned with hatred toward his pursuers, one Raz'ac and one Lethrblaka. He sent a message to the people ahead of him in the Battle hall. I'm being pursued by a Raz'ac and Lethrblaka. Be prepared for a fight when I get there. he said calmly, despite the situation. Magic burst through a clump of bushes, his golden hide getting scratched and cut from sharp thorns.

OCC:Ok with Dragonslayer hear we have enough characters but i think will wait for one more person so if you know any that will like a big battle RP against the Empire PM them about this then i'll put in the battle topic

IC:Turion shouted through the mind-linkSíoc look it's the Raz'ac chasing that horse but the horse is heading to the Battle hall Quick my friend before they reach Fenor
Síoc did not reply to partner-of-his-soul for their was no need Turion knew Síoc's reactions and thoughts as well as he knew his own. Síoce tugged his wings in and dropped towards the Lethrblaka. Before the creture knew what had happened Síoc smashed into it's side with enough force to smash down a castle wall.
Turion's teeth jarred at impact as quick as he could he removed Tua,his axes of Brightsteel, and slashed at the Raz'acFenor Raz'ac are coming was all he could say as he battle upon Dragon back with the evil mence.
Síoc drove his claws and fangs in to any of the Lethrblaka that he could reach but ebentually he had to release it before they both hit the ground.He roared a mighty battle roar and flooded the creature with fire-from-his-belly before he took off againIs fenor forwarned of this attack
Yes i contacted him but could not wait for a replyTurion placed Tua back into his belt and withdrew Narce his Rider's Blade


Fenor faced the masses and those that had gatheredlooks like we're in for a fighting chance aganist these vermin of Galbatorix"Welcome friends of old and new,I see that our mission was not as secertive as i once believed, Ella"He glance at the Rider/Shade a smrik on his lips "I'm gald so many of yous answered my call.Galbatorix has gathered an army to fight against us and to infiltrate the forest...."Fenor Didn't get to finish his sentance as a horse galloped into the room and a almighty roar was heard from out side"It seems will have to contiune this chat later"Fenor said as he ran out side whan he heard Turions voice in his head."Raz'ac"Fenor shouted this word over his shoulder

OOC: I hope to have Danagon's brother, Drenor, accepted and be able to join

Now Danagon was fully healed. You owe Fenor your life I owe him a lot of things. He then heard the cry. Fenor raced out of the room. Danagon hooped on Andep and followed. Ra'zac He has only heard of the creatures. They worked for Galabratorix, and weren't human, elf, or dwarf. Now he we furious. I thought you loved a good fight I do, I don't like the Ra'zac He then saw the filthy creatures, against Fenor, another, and a dragon. Andep dove into the battle, using his tail, while Danagon used his bows. Nothing could kill them it seemed.

OOC: DS4, its your turn.

OOC:
Oops, sorry.

IC:
Magic bucked, catching a Raz'ac square in the chest and sending him several feet away. Without stopping, he galloped right next to Hannah, she grabbed a chunk of mane and leaped onto his back. She drew her bow and shot an arrow embued with amethyst fire. It thudded into the flank of a Lethrblaka, it shrieked in pain, a unnatural, high pitched sound that made you cringe.

Zeke bellowed and lashed his tail. Get out of the way, he said calmly to everyone. He took a deep breath, opened his maw, and deep amethyst flames burst forth, incinerating small bushes and anything else that got in the way. A Raz'ac shrieked as it found itself in the inferno. It's dieing screams were ear piercing.

Felecia let Zana have control of the body. She drew Deyja and ran to the battle,"Garjzla!" she barked, sending a jet of light straight into a Raz'ac's face. It screamed and covered it's face,"Don't hurt usssss! We're here with a messsage from our Masssster! Pleassse! Mercy!" it cried in anguish, backing away into the forest. It seemed everyone halted what they were doing to hear his words. Zana hesitated. Keeping a wary eye on the Raz'ac, she turned to her companions,"Should we listen to his message?" she asked.

Ebony snarled as the Raz'ac cried out. Oh? And what if your lying? he asked it privately, but it shook it's head and repeated it's words in the Ancient Language. May I tell you what Galbatorixsssss wanted usss to convey if they kill me? it asked, Ebony nodded. Alright: My friends, I know of where your at. I have a small army of two thousand soldiers going toward you, myself and Murtagh included. I don't, however, wish to battle with you. I want to unite Alagaësia under one banner and have no more need for war. Please, send the one in charge and second command to meet us by noon tomarrow. We're camped six leagues from you to the north. Thatss all, it said. Eb nodded. I say let him speak,

Fel drew her bow and aimed it at the head of the Raz'ac that had spoken,"Let him speak I say." she said.

Midnight snorted as he shuffled his wings. I say let him speak, he said.

OOC 2: DS4, I couldn't find all your bios
OOC: Drenor was accepted. Here he comes.

"Then Hurry it Up!" Danagon said, now drawing his sword and pointing it at the Ra'zac from behind. "You serve Galbratorix, the one who killed my father!" Danagon was enraged. He was so close to finally killing one of Galbratorix's Ra'zac and they wanted to talk with the creature? Then the twig broke behind him, and he gathered all of his magic. All that escaped him was a gasp.

Drenor has gone through all the forests, the rest of Hadarac desert, everywhere to find his brother. The rock was warm. Great, now I'm becoming dillussional." he thought. No, it was actually warm. Finally, there it was. The building where Danagon was. He was so close to his brother he could even sense his brother's presence. He opened a doorway. He walked down the corridor and turned to the right. Brother. He suddenly took another step, and a twig broke. All of a sudden he saw his brother's face. But he saw more. There was an elf, 2 shades, 3 dragons, a horse, and some others. But his brother is the one who shocked him. He was much more muscular, and was even taller then when he left. Drenor hadn't known how much brother had been changed A green dragon stepped behind Danagon,and it took a while for Drenor to realize who it was. Andep? Yes, Drenor. The sound burst into his head. "Brother!" Drenor yelled and ran to Danagon. Then he realized that there was Ra'zac behind his brother. He quickly drew his bow and a arrow, hiding the pouch with the rock. "This discussion is for another time." Danagon said, and turned back around.

OOC:
Felecia and Ebony
Ella and Zeke
There ya go. Though I must warn you, I haven't yet updated them, which I need to do soon....