Name: Cassandra

Age: 17

Gender: Female
Skills: Seeing the future, swordsmanship, archery, preparing camps and is practicing magic

Race: Elf

Hair: Silver

Eyes: Wide and silver (common in seers)

Occupation: Elvin seer formerly taught by Ellistine

Home Village: None

Place of birth: She was born on the Eldor travelling on a ship called the Gedwey Wyrda or shining fate

Parents: Mother Hljodhrdraumr meaning silent dream and never knew her father

Siblings: None that are known of

Character Personality: She is timid but is beginning to get the confidence to stand up for herself. She is untrusting due to a bad experience with Ellistine. She is determined to help those in need. She is the type of person who would rather die than fail and is willful to a fault. She is unknowingly on the brink of insanity and is becoming reckless. She knows nothing about the nature of living things but that of animals and of the dark hearted Ellistine and of brief memories of Brom. She remembers little of her old life and knows only what she sees in her dreams and the tales that were told to her by Brom, making her a terrible judge of character. She is beginning to fight against the world her main quest for peace around her and inside her making her patient on the outside but not where it matters, on the inside.

Character History: She has been training in the Beor Mountains since she was 7 with her teacher
Ellistine. She used to try and see who her father was but always failed, and is now haunted by her mothers death which she foresaw and made her an orphan before her first birthday. She practised all the skills she needed for travelling in a cave so she could prepare herself for the right time to leave the mountains. So she continued to learn the art of a seer while building up her body and getting ready to run away at a moments notice. She foresaw Eragon getting a dragon and his journey up to his arrival in Surda and decided to meet him after he arrived. She told never told Ellistine anything about her which caused Ellistines darker side to come forward, Ellistine attacked Cassandras mind while she slept; Cassandra fought back by finding out that Ellistine had sacrificed her baby daughters life to save her own and was not an elf but a human. Now she has run away from Ellistine and is heading for Broms grave to pay her respects.

Weapons: Inherited from her mother she has a bow and arrow as well as a sword.

Likes: Water (due to being born in a boat or perhaps in her blood.)

Dislikes: Anything that has not been properly planed out and believes it is doomed to fail

Animal Companions: Lucifer a white wolf

Character's Physical Description: She is very slim from eating little and straining her body in fierce training exercises for example hitting the wall none stop for a week. She has the slight hint of muscles on her arms and legs showing that she is physically powerful even for an elf. She has a silvery complexion and could be compared to a stray moonbeam. She has deep bags under from her eyes because she avoids sleep, this is because she fears what she will see because she has never dreamed anything that has already happened or will come to pass. She wears black mourning clothes because she believes that you can not stop mourning until the person do it for has been avenged.

Dreams for the Future: Revenge against her mothers killer but mainly peace and the fall of Galbatorix. On top of this she also wants to find out the identity of her father and to pay her respects to Brom.

Reason for Dreams: Her mother was killed when she was a baby with a poison arrow, the pain increased with the failure to make the elves understand her baby talk, while she saw her mothers death in her dreams again and again until her mother actually died. Galbatorix was the reason her mother died because it was his men and she would like peace so she can live a normal life near the sea. She wants to find out who her father is because she does not know if he is alive or not as well as having never knowing what her parents are like. Brom was one of the few people to treat her kindly.

Alignment/side: Eragons, but will help any against Galbatorix

i need help
where'd i go wrong?

AAAAAHH!!! Dont double post!!! More personality and appearance please. Also a little patience.

what glen said, look at the accepted ones to see how long they need to be.

ioksok read the sticky topic on this forum...

i've added some more but can i ask...
is my history ok because lots of people histories are to short.
oh and what else can i add to personality and appearance?

Its all fine, just pur capital letters in where they should be really...

Thank you!!
And I've done it.

Awsome character. It's going to be accepted. Very nice work.

Accepted!