Name: Aashand

Race: Elven

Age: 77

Gender: Male

Personality: Aashand is adventurous. This is both good and bad, exploring around has helped him a lot with scrying even though he is young. But it has put him in many a bad situation. He also is Loyal but only to his dragon. He keeps to himself and Gale for the most part. When his parents died he became quite and still to this day he talks very little and tends to go weeks without talking, but stays to his thoughts and Gale's. Despite his quite nature he does love to have fun, you just have to know how to get him outside his shell. Once you get him talking then you will have trouble keeping him quite. the silence gives him alot of time to organize his thoughts so once he starts he will have plenty to talk about. He enjoys nature and loves to ride Gale over Du Weldenvarden and watch the emerald ocean roll by.

Appearance: He's tall and wiry. His appearance hides his strength. He has shoulder-length Hazel hair. High rosy cheekbones his complexion is pale. He has almond color and shaped eyes. He wears an emerald tunic with forest green leggings. He is silent sometimes you can't even hear him approach you. While walking through Du Weldenvarden he caries a small pack he sung from plants to hold his discoveries. He also carries an elven bow sung from yew and 24 goose feathered arrows. Also a thin-bladed sword

History: Aashand's childhood was wrought with disaster. His parents died fighting Galbatorix during The Fall. He despised Galbatorix after that for the loss of his parents, Megal and Teras. When he was 36 while practicing his swordsmanship with a fellow elf he bested him and took the tip of his sword to his friends breast. As he was doing that he heard his name called and accidentally jabbed the point of his sword into his friends heart killing him instantly. However the tragedy ended when he was 77. He found a dragon egg, which hatched, for him making him one of the legendary dragon riders. The dragon hatched and he named her Gale. He began his training immediately. He first started learning more and more magic as he already knew the basics but never bothered to become advanced in it prefering the blade. While learning magic he tended to Gale as she became larger and Aashand began to ride her on short trips. He learned how to fight with a blade on dragonback by himself, but he needed to be taught the finer points of fighting with magic while with a dragon such as the immense source of energy.

Dragon:

Name: Gale

Gender: Female

Color: White with gray streaks along the wing membrane and each side of her spikes

Personality: Calm and Rational but with a playful side. She balances out Aashand and brings the good out in him.

Appearance: She is a shorter dragon in height but is very long and agile. An excellent flyer but needs more training in ground combat. Her fire is a light blue flecked with white at the tips. She has ivory claws except for her middle claws, which are gray.

I would write more but then that would take away from my stories. You must read them to learn more about Aashand and Gale.

Please tell me how you liked it any improvements you would make and how good it was I'm always looking to improve my writing

Also Weapons, Alignment, Dreams for the Future, and Reason for Dreams. As Aeraldi said, Personality 12 lines, History 15 lines. And watch the grammar.