Name: Ramrälf
Age: 130 years old
Gender: Male
Skills:
Ramrälf is a very versatile elf. First and foremost he is stronger than most elves, which has been helpful in many of his daily tasks. He is so strong he feels that shades seem weak. His arms are very strong so he can move weapons, like a sword, faster than most other elves and shades, but this does not mean that he is the best warrior, even though he strives to become the best warrior. He is also very strong with magic because he enjoys to study the Ancient language and creates shorter and stronger spells. Ramrälf strives to be an excellent spellcaster because he believes that magic can benefit the community and the economy. He can make a track star jealous with his athleticism because he can jump very far and very high. Then after that he can keep up with any cross-country runner because he has trained for years to become an excellent long distant runner, he can out run a kull and he will still be ready for battle. He is also an excellent sprinter, he has the ability to keep up with a racing horse that is running as fast as it can. Then he cannot be intimidated or influenced against his judgment, and he always has his mind guarded because many different people try to break into his mind.
Race: Elf
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Blue, almost grey
Home Village: Ellesméra
Parents: Parents died when he was a baby, and has always had to take care of himself.
Siblings: Also because his parents died he has no siblings.
Character Personality:
He is a quick thinker, and this has been useful during numerous battles and magic duels. He is very moral because he is religious because he believes that the vault of souls is proof of higher powers, and this has helped direct his life in the correct direction. Then when his moral values could not help him make the correct decision his logical thinking has helped him make the correct decision. He is intelligent because he has had many different experiences from many different people, and also because he has had to take care of himself for his entire life. Then when he has to hunt he is very quiet. He is hyper and spontaneous but he is always focused. Even though he is hyper but he is always quiet, and even at times he may seem to be mute. He is always considered polite no matter if he is with humans, elves, dwarves, or even urgals. He is always humane; even though he hunts animals he never hunts needlessly. He also does not believe urgals and kull are inherently evil. Then he is just and fair when he has to give people advice, or helping the monarchs of different races make the correct decision.
Character History:
Ramrälf is a very versatile person, he has done many different things. He learned how to make swords from Dwarves and Elves, and enjoys mixing the different sword designs from the two different races. Then he has also run a fencing school, but he had to sell the fencing school because he had become a rider and had no time to run it during his training. He is one of the few elves to eat meat. He helped create new types of dragon armor for the riders and he improved them by making them lighter and stronger even though his dragon has no armor. He enjoyed exploring the spine and enjoyed the challenge of not getting hurt in the spine. He creates new spells for his own purposes. He studies about the different magical creatures and how they effect the other major races, such as the elves, dwarves, humans, and urgals. He does not only create new spells, but also he improves spells by making them shorter and/or stronger. His favorite spell is one which he could temporarily breath under water so he could discover new types of sea animals and if they had magical powers, such as giant sea serpents. Gets ancient scrolls from abandoned libraries and studies them and brings them back to the Varden to discover ancient spells. He believes that he should learn the trades from all four races and mixes there trades together to improve them in his opinion. He learned all four languages of the races: the ancient language, Dwarvish, English, and the Urgal Language. He learned all of these languages by first living with the Dwarves for twenty years, then he moved into the Empire and lived there for ten years, and then he moved again to Surda lived there for a year and then he traveled outside the empire to the Elves. During this travel he met a group of kull and learned about their culture and language. This is how he learned different trades from all four races, and was able to discover new species of animals and taught about them to the elves.
Weapons:
Sword:
He has a dragon rider sword, and the blade is clear like a diamond because he has a white dragon. Then since it is a Dragon Riders’ sword the sword cannot dull or break. The swords’ pommel is made of a diamond gem, so he may store energy in it. The swords is forty-two inches overall in length, the blade is thirty-six inches in length, and the sword weighs around three pounds. The design is similar to a Roman Spatha.
Knife:
His knife was reflective mirror so he can see around corners if he needs to without being attacked. Then his knife never breaks and the blade never dulls, he made it when he was with the elves learning how to become a sword smith and a black smith. The blade is seven inches in length and is twelve inches in length overall. The design is similar to a Ka-Bar.
Likes:
He enjoys studying animals, and he likes training with magic and sparing with other elves, and enjoys learning new things like spells, trades and battle tactics. He also enjoys the company of different animals, especially his dog and his dragon.
Dislikes:
He dislikes injustice acts against innocent people, and he attempts to correct them.
Animal Companions:
He has a very large silver furred dog (even bigger than wolves in Beor Mountains) his dog needs to be that larg to guard against all races including kull, and his white dragon which is also very large.
Characters Physical Description:
He is stocky like a body builder, which distinguishes him against other elves. Because most elves are really lean and elegant. He has blue almost grey eyes that have a very penetrating and intimidating gaze. He is six feet six inches tall, he chose this height because it is tall enough to fight a kull and short enough to fit through door ways.. He has pale white skin, and it is impossible for him to get a tan no matter how hard he tries. His skin is very tough like dragon hide from numerous hours of hard labor.
Dreams for the Future:
He wants to become the best warrior in Alagësia.
Reason for Dreams:
So he can protect everybody from any future madmen like the forsworn.
Alignment/Side: Elves, Varden, Dwarves, and the Dragon Riders.
Dragon Profile:
Dragon Name: Edoc’sil
Age: 139
Gender: Male
Parents: Died before he hatched
History:
He was one of the only egg to survive outside the King’s control after the fall of the dragon riders. The only thing known about his parents is that they were both wild, and he had to survive on his own while Ramrälf was a boy. He first breathed fire when he was only five months old. He was one of the only dragon’s who trained and succeed to fly around Alagësia in just one week. He invented new ways for a dragon to become stronger and faster. Also he discovered how Dragons can grow faster and larger than they would have without it. He was named after the Dragon Rider Hold.
Personality:
He is Brave, even if he was fighting an entire army of letherblaka and fanghar. He is a quick thinker, which has saved him and his rider from death many times over. He is intelligent, and he helps his rider make the correct decisions when Ramrälf is confused. He is kind and just and honorable to help the elves and the varden. He is also logical and always make the right decision.
Appearance:
He is one of the largest dragons with a wing span of over a thousand feet. Even though he has a gigantic wing span he is only fifteen feet tall. He is very muscular for a drangon, even at his size. His scales are gigantic and are the size of shields. Then he is pure white that reflects like a gigantic diamonds.
Armor: Scales so hard he doesn’t have or need any armor. It would just weigh him down.
Dreams for the Future: To become the strongest dragon.
Reasons for Dreams: To protect other Dragons and their eggs.

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