name: Brom

age: 13

gender: male

skills: can wield a sword better than most aldults
can use a little magic
great bowman

race: human

hair: short and black

eyes: as black as a moon less night

homevillage: he was born in the hadarac dessert but lived in Uru'baen

parents: he never knew his parents, but was found by a group of travaling murcnats

sibalings: none

character persinality: very stubern.head strong.reclas.deadly.at points can show no emotun.kind.gental.caring.over protective.cuarage.honner bound

character history: was bourn in the hadarac dessert, and left for dead only to be found by traviling merchants. he was sold to a gladeator owner and lurned how to fight.at the age of 10 he escapted and flead to the mountans.the varden found him fighting a wolf in the forest and took him in.after a year with the varden he returned to Uru'baen only to find a young girl his age.she was running from the imperal gards.they both flead to carvahall only to find they had nothing there.they then flead to Terim only to be cought by imperal gards.he spent a year in prisan only to escape promissing the girl he would return and get her.he spent four months fighting aginst the urgals befor he returned to the varden.he took part in the fight on the burnt plains.he was ascined a place umong the king of Surda's finest men. he acepted hopeing to kill as many enimany solders befor he died.he has not forgoten his promes. he was pormoted to genral stats after a skrimis agints galbatoric's forces.his armor is blood stained from all the men he has killed.

wepons: he wealds a longe sword
an elven bow
and his shield is a scouare with a point at the bottom

likes: the sent of the perfume the girl wears

dislikes: galbatoriks

animal conpanions: he rides a hourse and a giant talking wolf follows

characters phyisacl descripton: he is tall with broad sholders. he has medeum mussals and calaced hands.he has a scare running down his back and one on his face. his legs are good for running and can take good beatings. his skin is as wight as a vampiers.

dreams: to save the girl and marri her

reason for dream: he loves her

side: Surda

II think your person sounds really good, so what if you have spelling is a little off, any way I do think that you should NOT have picked Brom I mean Brom is my fav person and its like your mocking him...Sorry if that sounded rude please for give me

I'm gonna have to agree with Aeraldi on this. You have to change the name, first of all. Then solve all those grammatical and spelling errors. Also, I think you should offer some things that will make your character unique to other characters. Just a suggestion, but what makes your character something special, somebody worth epic deeds? Ask yourself this.