just so you know this is my Rp character too. Ok here it goes.

A Chance At Fate
Chapter 1: kveykva

There it is......Rhunons Forge. Dont get too excited Verdel your just getting your DragonRiders sword, it is no big deal all of the Riders have one. Your right, but this is my riders sword and I've waited years to get this and now im getting it. I get your excitment now lets just go get the sword. Ok than lets get it ,Zeridor.

As Verdel walked into Rhunons Forge all he could hear is the constant banging of steel hitting steel and there sitting by a work bench was Rhunon. Hello young rider how are you today? Good now let me tell you why I am here. There is no need I know you are here for your DragonRiders sword. Hmm i wonder how shw knew that. Oromis obvously told her zeridor how else would she know? Ok Rhunon so are you ready to make a sword? She pondered for a moment and then said....Rider I am always ready but the question is are you? Of course I'm ready or I wouldn't be here. Then lets get started.....ok first of all what is your name? My name is Verdel and this is my dragon Zeridor. OK now what style sword do you use Verdel? I use a sword that has a hilt about an inch bigger than a Hand-and-a-half. Ok I will begin immediatly and Zeridor I need you to stay here. As you wish Rhunon. Verdel you may go now I will have it ready by morning.

Then Verdel went to his home and had a peacful nights rest and woke up in the middle of the night. I should Probably go see how they are doing, he thought to himself. So Verdel went to Rhunons Forge to see how the progress was going and just as he walked up to Rhunon Zeridor opened his mouth and shot a roaring stream of fire onto what looked like a sword with out the hilt. How is the sword coming along Rhunon? Oh it is going well you can sit over there if you get tired or you can go home. Thank you Rhunon you are very kind. Just when Verdel was about to fall asleep he heard Rhunon slam her hammer into the glowing metal and then she sat back in her seat and wiped the sweat from her brow and said very tiredly "it is done." Then Verdel walked up to the sword and looked at it. It was a beutiful work of art and then Rhunon haned the sword to Verdel. It had a light green blade the color of light emralds and it reflected the light like a mirror and the hilt was made of metal with the design of thunder going up it and the thunder followed into the blade and went all the way to the top and then split in different directions. What is its name? Then Rhunon said "as I have told every other DragonRider you name the sword for it is yours. Verdel thought for a moment and then burst out right as the sun came up "I got it!" Then Zeridor said, Well what did you name it? I will call it kveykva. Then Verdel Held it up and the sunlight shined of of it like the shining emrald in the pommel.

well that is chapter 1 and im sure how many i will do but i will make more.

Edited: better?

hmmm. its a good start. I would recommend adding a little more detail on what the sword looks like perhaps or a bit more dialogue. It depends on your writing style of course but that could be an idea on how to make it a bit longer. but then again, i might just be randomly blathering on about nothing. lol