Name- Elle

Age- 17

Gender- Female

Skills- Good communication skills with animals and nature. Elle is able to call apon creatures both magical and non and is able to communicate with them to a point where she is able to ask for requests and give them commands. They trust her, and will obey her. She has also very good archery skills, and is excellent with a bow. She has trained at this for most of her life, and is very comfortable and skilled with a simple bow and arrow. She is able to add a huge amount of speed to her arrows's shot, and has great aim. She is okay with a blade. She is still working on these skills, and is increasing her knowledge and power with a sword everyday. With that being said, she is also gaining her power in her magical ability.

Race- Elven Werewolf

Hair- Her hair is about waist length, and is made up of different shades of blue.

Eyes- Her eyes are light blue, so light that they almost appear as being metallic silver in color.

Home Village- Ellesmera

Parents- Her father's name is Link, and her mother's name is Zelda.

Siblings- She has two older brothers, Brandon and Brock.

Character Personality- She is very shy and timid. Quiet would also be a good word to describe her. She trusts very few people. She is a little self-concious, and sometimes questions herself. She doesn't like to believe in herself and she has low self-esteem to some extent. Even though she doesn't like to believe in herself, she does anyway. This is what keeps her going, motivation from herself. Not many people actually know the abilities that she posesses, and usually under estimate her. She keeps to herself, and perfers to be alone. She has very few friends. Her family means a lot to her. She is insecure, but she demonstrates self control. She is wise, but does not like to acknowlegde that she is. She likes to be different from others. She is easily emotionally hurt, but she holds all of her feelings inside. Because of this, on the outside she seems to be completely fine and normal, as if there is nothing wrong. But on the inside she is hurt, and she feels ignorned and abandoned. She finds comfort in nature. She communicates well with animals, and enjoys spending her time in the forest, away from everyone else. She has strong physcological powers, along with physical ones as well. She is gaining in her intelect, and is also trying to control her emotions so that she is not as vunerable. Even though she is shy and timid, she is suprisingly outgoing, and is willing to try new things. She sometimes just follows the crowd without realizing it, and makes choices that are not her own. She has strong beliefs, and can be stubborn at times. Overall, she is loyal, caring, devoted, a bit secretive and mysterious, but simply she has a good heart, with good intentions.

Character History- Elle the youngest, and only girl in her family was born seveteen years ago. She was born on the tenth of June in Ellesmera. At that time, her father Link, and her mother Zelda, were both Dragon Riders. They already had two children, Brandon and Brock. After the birth of their third child, Elle's parents decided to move into a small village in the forest just outside of Ellesmera's border. But when Elle was five years old, major changes occured. Galbatorix ordered a messenger to go to their house, and ask them to join him. (Link, Zelda, and both of their dragons.) Of course, they were against this. They told the messenger that they would not side withGalbatorix, that their loyalties lied with The Varden. After recieving this news, Galbatorix became enraged. He then sent his followers to their house, and ordered them to be punished. No, he did not want them to be killed, he wanted them to be cursed. So, instead of sending Ra'zac or Urgals to the elven house, he sent werewolves. But before doing this, they were instructed to kill both Link and Zelda's dragons. They did as they were told. After both dragons were slain, they continued on to bestow the curse onto both parents. Brandon and Brock were old enough to understand to run away, they knew that they had no power compared to that of the werewolves. But Elle was too young to understand, so she got in the way. She tried to protect her parents. Unfortunetly, by doing this, she was bitten also. After they had completed bitting the parents as well, the werewolves fled. Something that Galbatorix did not know, was what reaction between the elf and werewolf blood that would occur. Normally, if a human was bitten, they would change into a werewolf at every full moon, and they would not be able to control their actions. But when combined with elvish blood, the reaction was slightly different. Yes, they still turned into werewolves at full moons. But incredibly they were able to control their actions. So all was well... at least they thought. But instead, the family started to fall apart. Elle's parents were never the same after returning outside after they had been bitten, and having to see their dragon's lifeless bodies. It changed them. They were no longer the loving parents as they were before, they were quiet and distant. Over the years they got worse and worse. Elle and her brothers then were raised by their grandparents until Elle was thirteen, because both of her grandparents had passed away by then. After that, Elle herself changed. She became quiet also. Her oldest brother Brandon, had moved out by then. He was a sucessful black smith in Ellesmera. But Brock was still at home. He tried to cheer up Elle, but nothing ever really worked. As years went by, he eventually moved out also, he went to join Brandon in Ellesmera. That left Elle to herself. Being alone, she learned to communicate with the animals. She also started to practice with her brother's old swords and bows. Elle even started to work on her magical skills, studying, reading, and learning. But shortly after she began to work on her communication, fighting, and magical skills, she had reached the age of seventeen. And on her birthday, her parents seemed to come out of their trance... But only for moments. They handed her a silver egg, and told her to travel to Ellesmera to see her brothers. She did as she was told. When she arrived they told her that she was grown now, and that she was to begin her journey. They gave her a sword, Zilver, a shield, armor, a bow, and arrows. She didn't know what they meant by "journey" but she felt as though this was her destiny. She said her good byes, and returned home once more, to experience the hatching of her dragon.

Weapons- A sword, bow and arrows, shield, armor, and an ocarina. Her sword was made for her by her brothers and given to her on her seventeenth birthday. It has a long, light-weight, yet extremely strong and sharp blade. The blade itself measures three feet long. At the bottom length of the blade, there are silver angel wings, that stetch into the handle. The handle is encrusted with various gems, and is centered with a heart shaped diamond. Her bow and arrows were given to her along with her sword. Her bow is made of the finest wood, and her arrows measure in one foot, not counting the spear. The spears are made of the same light-weight yet strong material used in the sword's blade. This material is also used in the making of her shield and her armor. She carries a silver ocarina along with her everywhere. She uses it to call to her animal companions, and to communicate with them. She has had this ocarina as long as she can remember.

Likes- Playing her ocarina, the forest, being alone, dragons, unicorns, faries, phoenixs, any other type of magical creature, her family, advancing in her fighting and magical skills, darkness, nature, moonlight, and rain.

Dislikes- Gallabotorix, and any other relation to evilness.

Animal Companions- Elle has four animal companions: Remus, a silver dragon, Epona, a white unicorn, Navi, a blue fairy, and X, a black phoenix.

Character's Physical Description- Elle has long waist length hair that is made up of different shades of blue. She has wide expressive light blue eyes, so light that they have a metallic silver look to them. As for her body type, she is slender. She is 5' 5" tall, and weighs 110 pounds. She sometimes wears dresses, usually that are blue, silver, white, black, or gray in color, but she perfers to wear a fitting style of tunic. And because of her race, she has pointed ears. Elle has several distinctive features. She has seven piercings in each ear, she has a tattoo of elvish writing on her right shoulder blade, and she has a sapphire ring on her middle finger of her right hand that she never takes off.

Dreams for Future- To find and kill the werewolves that cursed her and her parents. To defeat Galbatorix, for the Varden to sucess over evil, for Eragon to become king, and for her fighting and magical skills to grow and flourish.

Reason for Dreams- Because she seeks revenge, and she believes they should pay for what they have done, also so they do not continue to curse other innocent people. Her reason for the Varden to sucess over evil is because she is against Galbatorix.

Alignment/Side- The Varden

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