Name: Asmana - - Originally Asmaani

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Job/Specialty: Magic - - Sorceress - - Messenger

Race: Shade - - Possessed by the 2 Spirits: Anki (Fate) and Shin (Truth) - - Originally A Human

Hair: Red, Which Shades From A Pale Red From The Scalp To An Almost Violet At The Tips - - Originally The Natural Hair Color Red - - Falls Just Over Shoulders - - Is Usually Kept In A Long Tail That Falls Between Her Shoulder Blades

Eyes: Violet, With Accents of Red Within Them - - Originally Green - - Long Lashes - - Wide, Angled

Body: Pale, Pasty Skin - - A Small Nose - - Height: 5’4’’ - - Small Hands and Feet - - Long, Smooth Nails - - Relatively Thin - - A Scar Over Her Right Eye

Home Village: Aroughs, Alagaesia - - Now Lives In The Hadarac Desert

Parents: Mayna, Mother, A Merchant’s Daughter, Lives in Aroughs - - Fareid, Father, A Sailor, Deceased

Siblings: 2 - - Brother: Akrahm, 20 Years Old - - Sister: Celestina, 15 Years Old

Character Personality: Asmana is often sadistic and cruel. She is cunning and sharp, which can make her incredibly dangerous. The mortal life means northing to her. She hates herself, for being what she is, and this causes her to fight against her own will and instinct. She is often indecisive, vindictive, and raves to the point of madness. She has a habit of speaking in rambling gusts. She has compassion for animals and those she respects. She is often seen as an evil being, however she is truly indifferent.

Character History: As a young girl of 13, Asmaani the villager began to study magic. She learned with her master in the day, and helped her poor family at night. And then, the dreams started. Terrible voices, never more than two, interrupted her consciousness and sub-consciousness, telling her truths of the past, and the fate of the future. She tried to ignore it, but Anki and Shin had interrupted her being. In an attempt to rid herself of the disturbing dreams, Asmaani performed a powerful spell, calling on a rift in the Spirit World. That was all Anki and Shin needed to complete their possession of her. She was now Asmana, Shade, Messenger, and Slave to the Spirits. Her hair and eyes changed color, her skin grew pale. Her family noticed this change and tried to help her, but what could they do? One day, two years later, Asmaani, now Asmana, had completely forgotten who she was. She told her family she was leaving. Her father was outraged, and in a struggle between them, he was killed.

For the Next year, Asmana would wonder Alagaesia, falling deeper and deeper into her path of lost voices and lost souls. She forgot who she was. Shin and Anki were not truly evil. They, too, had a hard path, as messengers from the spirits to the living. They needed a vessel. So, Asmana became a messenger. She would seek people out, tell them their fates and pasts. She was always honest. She had no choice. She also became a Messenger of the Mortals, carrying letters and messages between people. Often, she was attacked because of her Race and the frightening nature of her messages, such as the one she delivered often, “You Will Die Soon.” So, she took up her Claymore Sword and Poison-daggers. It was necessary.

Asmana could not see into the future. She merely did what the spirits controlling her told her to. The spirits themselves got the messages from a higher power, but it would be impossible to say what that power was. Eventually, Asmana set up a home made of stone in the Hadarac Desert. She liked it there, and, every so often, she’d get up and leave, on another mission. This was the way she became a messenger for the Varden as well as Galbatorix. She always spoke the truth, but never took sides. She lacked the ability. She was indifferent to life.

Shin and Anki did not always get along with each other or the weak shadow of Asmaani’s mind lurking within Asmana. The three bickered and struggled for power within Asmana, threatening to tear her apart. Eventually, she set off on a quest to find her lost identity, even though she was not fully aware she had one. During her quest, she was still the Bearer of Messages, the Shade of Indifference.

Character's good personality traits: Kind To Those She Trusts And Respects - - Calm - - Strong Minded - - Intelligent - - Cunning - - Courageous And Bold - - Has The Qualities of A Leader - -Reliable - - Honest

Character's bad personality traits: Sadistic - - Cruel - - Mad - - Quick To Anger - - Indecisive - - Impatient - - Too Honest At Times

Weapons: A Claymore Sword (A Two-handed Sword, about 55” in length and 13” at the grip with a 42” blade, it is lighter than most two-handed swords, making fighting with it quick and agile. the sword was set with a wheel pommel often capped by a crescent shaped nut and a guard with straight, down-sloping arms ending in quatrefoils and languets running down the center of the blade from the guard.) Asmana’s Calymore has a black grip and a charcoal-grey blade, with a violet strip along the center of it. - - Two Daggers with Compartments for Poison in the Hilts, They Hang From A Belt On Asmana’s Waist - - A Magic Amulet the Size Of Asmana’s Fist (Heart) Hangs From Her Neck. It Is Shaped Like A Teardrop and Is Carved From A Garnet. It Contains Certain Spells and Energies.

Likes: Animals - - Family - - The Spirit Realm - - The Desert - - Heat - - Honesty - - Elves - - Dragons - - Weaponry - - The Colors Red and Purple

Dislikes: People With Similar Personalities To Herself - - Other Shades - - Herself - - The Color Blue - - The Ocean - - The Cold

Animal Companions: Rin, the Red Tabby Were-cat - - Rin is a small, shaggy red-tabby cat in her feline form. She has amber-green eyes and pointed fangs. - - In Human Form, Rin is known as Yane, The Grinning Maiden. She was short, with Tan Skin and A Round Face. Jagged, shaggy red hair fell to her shoulders; her eyes were the same as those she has in cat form. Her teeth were fanged. She always wore a wide grin.

Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc.): Wore an open-fronted, trailing, hooded black robe over black leggings. - - Asmana also had a grey, camis-like, ¾ sleeved shirt lined in crimson - - Black Leather Boots that reach the Knees - - Grey, Fingerless Gloves - - A Urgal-Horn Horn, Painted White and Lined in A Paint Made Of Crushed Opals - - Ruby Earrings - - Her Heart Amulet - - Her Claymore Sword Across Her Back - - Her Daggers On A Silken, Red Sash/Belt Around Her Waist

Dreams for the Future: To Continue Life As Its Always Been, As a Messenger - - In Reality: To Rid Herself Of The Spirits Within Her

Reason for Dreams: Life Has Been Hard, Yes, But Not Unreasonably So - - The Struggle Between the 3 Forces Of Her Body Is Threatening To Kill Her

Important things character has forgotten: Who she was before she was possessed by spirits. When and where she began her endless wandering, and why she wandered.

Alignment/side: Neither. Asmana delivers messages to both sides, regardless. She always tells the truth, and tells people their fate when she meets them for the first time. She does not care about the Fall or the Coming War, she’s helped both sides, so her position would not change.

Woah Bravo Bravo. Time well spent here. Writting style is impressive and length too for this isn't school. A great story in it self it could be.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

If anyone finds anything about my character that contradicts the book, please tell me so I can fix it!!!

wonderful, accepted.