Name: - kyra allenva

Age:- 25, in human years

Gender: - female

Skills: kyra has a talent for interacting with nature. she knows how to survive in the natural world and understands animals and their basic instincts and feelings. she is also mildly skilled with magic and because of her unique interaction with nature, she can draw energy from objects around her and not harm them at all and she has less trouble getting things done with magic, because the natural world cooperates with her. she is gradually learning swordsmanship and is highly skilled with daggers, and bows.

Race: elven

Hair: - black as midnight

Eyes: - hazel, with flecks of gold

Home Village: Femasdhar

Parents: Ellema Stormhand and Tom Cloudmind

Siblings: 1 sister, Amina Stormhand, who is 20

Character Personality: kyra doesn't let people run over her, but she tries to be nice and open to critisism. she is a playful elf when she is in a good mood, and brooding when someone messes with her or picks on her. she likes to have fun and likes to expirement with different things. she gets in a fair share of trouble for her playfulness or her aggressiveness towards foes. but overall, she is a light-hearted elf. kyra will not head towards trouble and will not encourage it.

Character History: Kyra was born in Femasdhar, and has never left there.she knows that a war is going on in the outside world, however. she hopes to help win for Alagaesia to be free again. Her mom is an only parent, and at times may be a little strict. her dad was killed in war when she was 6, and she has sworn vengence against galbatorix since she was old enough to understand why her father died. but if she has learned anything from her mom, it's to make the best of anything, because u won't have it forever. she always looks for the fun in any situation, but can be a warrior when she needs to be. she is training and awaiting her chance to avenge her fathers death always.she has grown up with her sister and mom so she tends to be unfamiliar with any men or boys. she mostly avoids them.her mom has always taught her that it never hurts to have alot of friends. she is used to seclusion.

Weapons:an elven bow that she herself sang out of a tree, and many dwarf-made daggers

Likes: fun and practicing with her daggers and bow, which is also how she vents her feelings. she also likes writing and reading, and she also sings.

Dislikes: pushy people or "popular people" who think they rule the world(for instance, Galbatorix).

Animal Companions: a leapord, cheetah, and panther

Character's Physical Description: kyra is 3 foot nine.she has long wavy black hair, stands proudly, likes dark jeans and lighter shirts, and wears boots.her ears are pinted like any elf and her face is exotic, not as slanted as most elves.

Dreams for the Future: to restore peace in Alagaesia

Reason for Dreams: so the elves can come out of hiding, and she can explore the world without threat of danger

Alignment/side: the elven side, opposing Galbotorix

Wow! That is very well thought out. Great job.

i have just changed it. i hope this is more satisfactory. and how do i know if it has been accepted?

Hmmm, not bad. I would like to see more lines on personality and the history, though.