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Da Charr Killer
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:49 am Posts: 1568 Location: Sitting by the fire enjoying a Monster
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Moris Vandir
Name: Moris Vandir
Age: 100
Gender: Male
Job/Specialty: skilled axe man, swordsman, and good with a bow and arrow. He also is a very good blacksmith
Race: Elf
Hair: Silver as the moon
Eyes: Silver as the moon
Body: Slim but muscular like all elves with a scar on his back that goes from his neck all the way down his spine that he wishes to keep as a souvenir of a battle
Home Village: Ellesmera
Parents: Vandor and Tiffany Vandir
Siblings: None
Character Personality: He is a tough elf that defends for him self. He always walks alone or with his dragon. He is an elf that gets angry quick but cools down in an instant. He also likes to fly whenever possible but sometimes he will walk when it is not necessary so he can stay fit. When in a very bad mood he will go to a training arena and spar with someone. When sparring or fighting he always brings back the pain of his scar to make him a better warrior. Whenever he is in a happy mood, he will usually do much for the poor whether they are evil or good.
Character History: He was born on the very day that the blood-oath celebration started. When he was born his parents rarely spent time with him. He usually spent time with his dad by learning how to make swords. He then started to train in magic with some of the best spell casters in Du Weldenvarden. At the age of 10 he was very skilled in both magic and blacksmithing and was brought to the dragon eggs. When brought to them a green dragon hatched for him. He named him Adin. On that day he started to train to become a dragon rider. Unlike the traditional ways of the rider he crafted his own sword and enchanted it himself. He was the perfect sword that was ever made. At the age of 16 he also started to train in the ways of an axe. He made an axe out of the same material he used for his sword and enchanted and colored that also. By the age of 30 he was one of the best dragon riders ever. Him and his dragon would go around town and fly everywhere. On his 50th birthday he got a scar on his back fighting a Forsworn dragon rider. He killed the rider and the dragon also died. He kept the scar on his back as a remembrance that there was still evil afoot. At the age of 75 he traveled to the Boer Mountains to learn more about the axe and blacksmithing. He learns it all from Hrotharg himself. Now it is his 100th birthday and he celebrates at the Menona tree. He dances and dances and at the end of it all he travels to the Hardarac Desert to go defeat Galbotrix.
Character's good personality traits: He is quick to cool down and always fights like it is to the death no matter who he is against.
Character's bad personality traits: He is quick to get mad and can really be stubborn.
Weapons: A Emerald sword with the one of most perfect emeralds in its hilt named Edon that is slung on his back., A mighty Emerald axe with another beautiful emerald in the handle named Lief sits on his mighty leather belt, and also a pair of twin emerald daggers that have yet another emerald in each with poison injection at the tip named Nig and Gin, the daggers are always hidden in his boots.
Likes: He loves his dragon and also his weapons that are always handy. He also likes nature and all around.
Dislikes: He hates the empire for what they do and did and especially Galbotrix
Animal Companions: None (as said before dragon not an animal)
Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc.):he wears emerald color armor which he crafted himself and has a mighty leather belt around his waist. He also has his back sling that holds his knife. His boots are made out of the finest leather that he could get without killing an animal that also have sheaths built in for his daggers.
Dreams for the Future: To kill Galbotrix and free the dragon that is under his spell.
Reason for Dreams: to free that dragon and also Galbotrix must pay for what he did.
Alignment/side: He is with all that oppose Galbotrix
Dragon
Dragon Name: Adin
Age: 90
Gender: Male
Parents: Barda and Jasmine
History: He hatched exactly 10 years after the Blood oath celebration. When he was 20 he was one of the best dragons around in the whole Alagaesia. When he turned 40 he helped destroy a forsworn and his dragon. When he was 75 him and Moris travelled to the Boer mountains. Now he is 90 years old and ready for battle
Personality: He always has a joke to tell and is always giving advice to Moris. He prefers to be in company of only his rider and sometimes another rider and thier dragon. He is adventureous and skillful in flight and will take any foe down.
How they met their rider: He hatched for Moris in the palace of Ellesmera.
Color: Emerald
Appearance: 50 spikes going down his back to the end of his tail and at the end there are spikes surrounding the whole tail for about 2inches that he uses as a weapon. He is the most magnificatn emerald color and he also wears a strap of strecthing leather on his head that has the finest emreald in all of Alagaesia on it.
Armor: He wears a leather armor that can stretch to his size so it never has to be replaced
Dreams for future: To kill Galbrotrix
Reasons for dreams: Galbrotix brought evil to all of the world.
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Last edited by Da Charr Killer on March 23rd, 2006, 8:06 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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March 19th, 2006, 4:18 am |
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Incomer
Master DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:27 pm Posts: 2066 Location: Somewhere between screen and chair...
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Isn't having poisonous daggers in boots dangerous?
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March 19th, 2006, 7:40 am |
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Firetongue
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Joined: November 28th, 2005, 3:44 pm Posts: 10150 Location: England
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Unless they come out the front of the boot, so when you kick people they get stabbed!
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March 19th, 2006, 1:02 pm |
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Svit-kona
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Joined: January 26th, 2006, 4:43 am Posts: 594 Location: Ellesmera, Du Weldenvarden . . where else?
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Your character is very 'mighty,' isn't he? (I say this only as I noticed you used the word alot. Also, is his father's name Vandor Vandir?) More personality, and perhaps a bit more history.
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March 19th, 2006, 3:13 pm |
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Da Charr Killer
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:49 am Posts: 1568 Location: Sitting by the fire enjoying a Monster
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with the daggers they are kept in a sheath in the boot and they only let out poison on my command hense the part Poison Injection and yes his fathers name is Vandor Vandir and his mothers name is Tiffany Vandir
_________________ The Brisingr Family of Sites
"One part Brave, Three Parts Fool"
-Brom, Eragon the Movie
"Don't Blame me, I voted for Gore."
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i am the awesome one in your sig lol Duck 1
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March 19th, 2006, 3:22 pm |
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Hadarac
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Joined: March 10th, 2006, 11:55 pm Posts: 997
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I like your character, very long discription, it took me a while to read
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March 19th, 2006, 6:08 pm |
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Da Charr Killer
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:49 am Posts: 1568 Location: Sitting by the fire enjoying a Monster
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good that is how it is suppose to be. And also something i forgot about in last post is that he is not mighty only his stuff
and also svit-kona i did as you asked
_________________ The Brisingr Family of Sites
"One part Brave, Three Parts Fool"
-Brom, Eragon the Movie
"Don't Blame me, I voted for Gore."
DDG->->->
i am the awesome one in your sig lol Duck 1
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March 19th, 2006, 10:02 pm |
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Da Charr Killer
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:49 am Posts: 1568 Location: Sitting by the fire enjoying a Monster
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waiting ver patiently waiting very patiently man i am bored (again it has been 24 hours since i last posted on this subject so this is ok with rules)
_________________ The Brisingr Family of Sites
"One part Brave, Three Parts Fool"
-Brom, Eragon the Movie
"Don't Blame me, I voted for Gore."
DDG->->->
i am the awesome one in your sig lol Duck 1
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March 21st, 2006, 2:01 am |
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Svit-kona
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Joined: January 26th, 2006, 4:43 am Posts: 594 Location: Ellesmera, Du Weldenvarden . . where else?
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You could always just edit your previous post instead of adding another . . .
I like your character, but if your dragon was born at the Blood-oath, wouldn't he be alot older than 40 when he killed a forsworn?
_________________ "He touched his fingers to his lips and said, 'Arya Svit-kona,' using the honorific he had just learned for a woman of great wisdom." pg. 163 of Eldest
Did anyone miss me? Sorry, I was on a couple-week hiatus. Computer crash. I had to go to the library just to do homework . . .
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March 21st, 2006, 2:12 am |
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Eragon109
Wise DragonRider
Joined: February 22nd, 2006, 10:41 pm Posts: 1479 Location: Earth
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good character. the longer the better
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March 21st, 2006, 2:41 am |
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Da Charr Killer
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:49 am Posts: 1568 Location: Sitting by the fire enjoying a Monster
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no Moris not Adin and actually 40 sounds about right cause it would be about 40years after galbotrix took his spot as king so that would be about right only 60 years from present day say time during eragon books
_________________ The Brisingr Family of Sites
"One part Brave, Three Parts Fool"
-Brom, Eragon the Movie
"Don't Blame me, I voted for Gore."
DDG->->->
i am the awesome one in your sig lol Duck 1
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March 21st, 2006, 3:02 am |
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Hadarac
DragonRider
Joined: March 10th, 2006, 11:55 pm Posts: 997
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hes never had a steed ar other animal?
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March 21st, 2006, 3:04 am |
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Da Charr Killer
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:49 am Posts: 1568 Location: Sitting by the fire enjoying a Monster
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he got his dragon when he was 10 what do you think when he was 10 he was to young to really get one and he had his dragon plus elves dont really have steeds they call them from the land............... or stables
_________________ The Brisingr Family of Sites
"One part Brave, Three Parts Fool"
-Brom, Eragon the Movie
"Don't Blame me, I voted for Gore."
DDG->->->
i am the awesome one in your sig lol Duck 1
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March 21st, 2006, 3:12 am |
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Hadarac
DragonRider
Joined: March 10th, 2006, 11:55 pm Posts: 997
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1.yeah true
2.Eragon and his friends rode on steeds when they were travelign to Ellesmera
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March 21st, 2006, 3:16 am |
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Da Charr Killer
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:49 am Posts: 1568 Location: Sitting by the fire enjoying a Monster
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yes but he needed the steeds because he needed to keep his dragon a secret and couldnt just fly around yelling hi to galbotrix as he went through
waiting for glenwing to accept this do de da do de daaaaaaa waiting for glenwing to finally be on do da do de
_________________ The Brisingr Family of Sites
"One part Brave, Three Parts Fool"
-Brom, Eragon the Movie
"Don't Blame me, I voted for Gore."
DDG->->->
i am the awesome one in your sig lol Duck 1
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March 21st, 2006, 3:21 am |
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Hadarac
DragonRider
Joined: March 10th, 2006, 11:55 pm Posts: 997
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You wouldent want to give away Ellesmera's location would you?
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March 21st, 2006, 4:00 am |
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Da Charr Killer
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:49 am Posts: 1568 Location: Sitting by the fire enjoying a Monster
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no why in the world would i want to do that
_________________ The Brisingr Family of Sites
"One part Brave, Three Parts Fool"
-Brom, Eragon the Movie
"Don't Blame me, I voted for Gore."
DDG->->->
i am the awesome one in your sig lol Duck 1
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March 21st, 2006, 4:03 am |
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Hadarac
DragonRider
Joined: March 10th, 2006, 11:55 pm Posts: 997
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if you dont want to you would ride a steed in to Ellesmera
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March 21st, 2006, 4:50 am |
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Da Charr Killer
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:49 am Posts: 1568 Location: Sitting by the fire enjoying a Monster
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Yeah you just use the stables as you know elves let the steeds run wild in Du Weldenvarden
waiting for someone to check and accept it come on ppl i am very bored i want to start using this char i am waiting
_________________ The Brisingr Family of Sites
"One part Brave, Three Parts Fool"
-Brom, Eragon the Movie
"Don't Blame me, I voted for Gore."
DDG->->->
i am the awesome one in your sig lol Duck 1
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March 21st, 2006, 2:55 pm |
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Da Charr Killer
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:49 am Posts: 1568 Location: Sitting by the fire enjoying a Monster
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waiting for glenwing
_________________ The Brisingr Family of Sites
"One part Brave, Three Parts Fool"
-Brom, Eragon the Movie
"Don't Blame me, I voted for Gore."
DDG->->->
i am the awesome one in your sig lol Duck 1
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March 23rd, 2006, 6:22 pm |
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Glenwing
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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you MUST WAIT! Pestering me makes me take longer, and your dragon needs more personality, appearance and history. Go go go, its a person too.
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March 23rd, 2006, 7:58 pm |
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Da Charr Killer
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 12th, 2006, 2:49 am Posts: 1568 Location: Sitting by the fire enjoying a Monster
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I am done o great master Glenwing (bows in loyal manner)
_________________ The Brisingr Family of Sites
"One part Brave, Three Parts Fool"
-Brom, Eragon the Movie
"Don't Blame me, I voted for Gore."
DDG->->->
i am the awesome one in your sig lol Duck 1
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March 23rd, 2006, 8:07 pm |
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Glenwing
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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accepted...get louıs to add you I cant from here
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April 3rd, 2006, 8:56 pm |
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