Name: Zane Sheir
Age: 200 (looks 20)
Gender: male
Job/Specialty: mercenary
Race: elven
Hair: shaggy brown hair
Eyes: deep blue
Body: slender but strong looks can be deceiving ( he he he )
Home Village:Elven city
Parents: unknown
Siblings: none
Character Personality: never backs down from challenges. Has a calm demeanor but sometimes loses his temper. He is a mystery no background to see. He is a master of the blade and acts like it; very few can best him in battle. He feels that people who use magic to fight from a distance is cowardly.
Character History: Had his best friend erase his memory so he could start a new life. Now he lives his life as a mercenary in teirm. It has been a long 50 years since his memory was erased. All he has done since having his memories erased is make money. He acts as a mercenary and ship guard and since he doesn’t spend his money often except for necessities he has a lot of money. When he goes adventuring he always bring chocolate and expensive herbs since it helps to have both. The herbs for healing and chocolate boosts moral, smores anyone.
Character's good personality traits: Never backs down
Character's bad personality traits: never lets anyone know the real him, never backs down in a battle even if he is close to death
Weapons: long elven sword, and throwing knives that he is practiced in using, and a long hunting knife
Likes: quiet and battle
Dislikes: people who talk too much and people who get in his way
Animal Companions: Canis a dragon red headstrong and powerful
Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc.): Dark black baggy pants, Tight green shirt, and black traveling cloak. He has boots that have hidden rubies to store energy. Also a black scabbard hanging from a silver studded belt. Has a bag hanging from his belt with throwing knives, the bag is unripable and unbreakable.
Dreams for the Future: not to remember his old past
Reason for Dreams: to be free of guilt
Important things character has forgotten: his past but on purpose
Alignment/side: none
Hope he is good now that I edited him

I've said it before and I'll say it again, Glenwing will tell you to add more personality. I'm not sure if no history will work...

Try using the form I made, and firetongue, stop telling people what to do. Its my job

I'm sorry! I like to be bossy! And sarcastic, and big headed, and impatient, but still perfect!

Add more to personality, appearance and history. Im tired of these shoddy 5 minute efforts, put some work in to them if you want to RP!

Your personality and history should probably be longer than a couple of lines. This is role playing, not half-baked stroy telling.

i have no history i cant make it longer and what more could i pout in personality

You say he has 50 years memories, use that.

I edited it now is it good

A shaggy brown haired elf? odd, but neither here nor there. Just put it through a word proccessor to fix spelling and it should be ok.

that good

Done.