Name: Moric Darkblade
Age: 14
Gender:male
Job/Specialty: dragon hunter for the king
Race: human
Hair: short dark brown hair
Eyes: light blue
Body: 5'10" wide shoulders well muscled
Home Village: a farm around Carvahall
Parents: mother: Angela father: one of the forsworn
Siblings: none
Character Personality: gets angry fast, always sarcastic, when Ioksok gets mad things tend to blow up. loyal, smart well sort of, very impatiant. and has bad temper. Serious, can't stand noise. Love adventures
Character History: he was living with his aunt and her child, Moric helped around the house and in the fields. he learned how to cook from his aunt. He went to the Empire to find training when he found Shurk's egg. Murtagh tought Moric how to fight, the King tought Moric how to use his magic. Moric killed his first urgal when he was in Carhavall, the villiger has to defend them selves from a urgal raiding party.
Character's good personality traits: ok with a sword, can track well, can use magic weakly, great with his axe.
Character's bad personality traits: hot tempered, get into fights alot, berserk when fighting.
Weapons: axe he carrys only in saddle , rider sword called Cor' Roz , a knife in both his boots, behind his buckle, on both shoulders, one in the back of his belt.
Likes: good food, beer, and bar fights
Dislikes: ruining, loud people,
Animal Companions: dragon
Character's Physical Description: (in battle) red Plate armour, red cloak. (travel) leather jerken, leather pants, brown hooded cloak, black hat with a huge red fether, always has his sword called Cor'Zor and daggers on him.
for the Future: settle down in carhavall, raise a family and have a farm.
Reason for Dreams: unkown



Dragon Name: Shurk
Age: 10 months
Gender: male
Parents: Mother: Nerma Father: Graont
History: hatched for Moric and lived in the empire all his life.
Personality: like his rider
How they met their rider: Moric found Shurk's egg in a mine, the mine was in the spine.
Colour: black, eyes: gray
Appearance: 20 feet tall, 40 foot wing span, and 30 feet long, black talons and white teeth and grey horns.
Armour: none
Dreams for future: find a mate
Reasons for dreams: uknown

more on personality. history and appearance for both.

i think i fixed it

Can you fix the spelling, grammer and capital letter problems...and more on appearance and history...and fix personality please.

Yo, i fixed the things. i think

i think its good but it not up to me it up to glenwing

You should also make sure you have everything from the Dragon From in your app., and make it a few spaces down so its easier to read.

Why dont you edit it to help him with things like those...you are allowed ^^

Okay, I've edited it, now fill in the rest of the blanks!

do i need to add any thing els