Name: - Aren
Age:- 22

Gender: - Guy

Skills: At least 3 lines of elaboration for each skill type. Hunting- spends time hunting with his wolf each day, he hunts to feed his family, to sell, and for the sport. He also hunts with his brother.Fighting and stealing- he fights the kings men, criminals,bullies, and urgals.he steals from criminal suchas slave traders, pirats,and theives.


Race: - Man
Hair: - Dark Brown

Eyes: - Brown

Home Village: - Teirm

Parents: - Zadok and Elain

Siblings: - Eran(male)
Character Personality: At least 12 lines.
Aren has many hobbies including fishing,
hunting, exploring, spending time with his brother Eran, and playing with his wolf Silverfang. He also spends time practicing sword fighting, hand to hand, shooting his bow, and magic ( done in secret) with his brother. He also spends time reading if he gets a chance.He rides his horse Firemane, and enjoyes hunting with Silverfang. He dreams of having a dragon one day. He hates slavery and slave trading, and often steals from traders. He spends lots of time stiring up trouble with his brother, and playing pranks on people they dislike. He also helps his father, a tradesman, on his ship. He helps his mother with cooking, some thing he enjoys and is great at. He also is a good sailor, and spends time on his dads ship, and also goes on journeys with his dad to help trade crops, meat, tools, and other materials.


Character History: At least 15 lines.
Was born in Surda because his father was on a trading trip and his mother came along with Zadok. Two years later his brother was born, and Zadok decided to move back to their home in Teirm. His brother and him were close to each other and had a special bond between the two of them. As kids they would explore together, and would often get caught stealing food from the baker. As they grew up they grew closer together. Their father started training them at age 12 to fight dirty due to Eran getting in a fight, and he was bruised badly. A year later he started to teach them how to sword fight. They would fight with sticks and wold come home tired and bruised,but they would always enjoy them self. At age 13 Aren was also learning to hunt. This helped him be stealthy, a skill he used to steal from slave traders. One day Zadok told the two boys that he was going to teach them a new way to fight. Magic. He only knew little bits, but it helped the boys greatly. At age 19 and 17 the two boys had to survive on their own due to the death of his Father, and a year later the began helping the Varden fight. He found the varden while visiting his birth place in Surda, two months before the battle there. He and his brother both fought hard against the empire along side the dwarves and men of the varden. After the battle he left in search of a dragon egg. along with Silver Fang, Eran, and their two horses.



Weapons: At least a 2 line description for each weapon, if it isn't plain.
A bow made of yew,
two short swords(red, with elven writing, a gift from his father, has silver handel, a wolf head on the pomel, and two dragons on the blade) a hunting knife.

Likes: - hunting, fighting, stealing from criminals,


Dislikes: - slave trading, the king

Animal Companions: Horse-firemane, wolf-silverfang-

Character's Physical Description: At least 5 lines.
He is tall in stature/6 foot three inches strong arms neede for scaling walls, he has long hair(brown),brown eyes, strong legs, and big hands.
his skin is dark (olive, and sun tanned)and he has a scar on his left shoulder, and another one on his back, and two more scars by his waist.

Dreams for the Future: - to have a dragon and to help the destuction of the empire.

Reason for Dreams: - loves dragons, hates the empire(killed his parents)

Alignment/side: -Varden

yes sir *salutes* I made a ton of changes.

if you don't mind me butting in, Star, his short swords aren't plain if they have elven writing, obviously making them elven made, or at least by someone versed in the AL, so they should get 2 lines of description.

fyi, shadowbane, Star Gazer's a girl.

oops. my bad, sorry about that.

Looks pretty good, though I'd like you to go through it and fix all the spelling/grammar mistakes.