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arya sivitkona
New DragonRider
Joined: July 24th, 2006, 3:03 pm
Posts: 312
Location: exploring the spine
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 my story ok heres the fist copy tell me wich one u like better
I stared out the window of our family car. I had to sit in the backseat because my mom decided she`d rather come back and get my car than have me drive with her to Kansas City, Missouri from Gorgia. The morning befor the move my mom had given me the "Kary your not old enogh to drive long distances" talk so thats why i'm stuck here next to my twerpy little sister Bridget. During the first day of our trip Bridget kept saying how she would never have as many friends as i had back at my old school. I had to keep telling her she`l be making plenty of friends at Eastgate, her new midle school.
We just lft St. Louis and nowow its only a five hour drive to Kansas City. St. Louis is a great city. It has loads of parks and the arch. We got to go up in the arch, its so amazing. I wish we could have stayed longer but we had to get back on the road. It is soooo boring theres nothing to do. I tryed calling my friends but i couldent get a signal. My nintendo D.S has a low batery so i can`t use it.
comments plze
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may your swords stay sharp
-brom
I luv KCMO!
shraring
ill share your toys,ill share your money.
ill share your toast, ill share your honey,
ill share your milk and cookies too-
the hard parts sharing mine with you.
stone airplane
i made an airplane out of sone
i always did like staying home
Last edited by arya sivitkona on August 18th, 2006, 4:21 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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| August 17th, 2006, 3:43 pm |
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Shadowsong
DragonRider in Training
Joined: April 16th, 2006, 3:36 pm
Posts: 525
Location: On road of imagination
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Interesting and realistic if I may say. Keep on going in this direction 
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Through the solid air,
nature force of daydreams
and anger of fire
you'll dance dance of you're life.
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| August 17th, 2006, 4:37 pm |
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arya sivitkona
New DragonRider
Joined: July 24th, 2006, 3:03 pm
Posts: 312
Location: exploring the spine
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so do you think think i should use this one or the other one
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may your swords stay sharp
-brom
I luv KCMO!
shraring
ill share your toys,ill share your money.
ill share your toast, ill share your honey,
ill share your milk and cookies too-
the hard parts sharing mine with you.
stone airplane
i made an airplane out of sone
i always did like staying home
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| August 17th, 2006, 4:38 pm |
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Shadowsong
DragonRider in Training
Joined: April 16th, 2006, 3:36 pm
Posts: 525
Location: On road of imagination
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I'd say this one. Still it is your decidion.
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Through the solid air,
nature force of daydreams
and anger of fire
you'll dance dance of you're life.
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| August 17th, 2006, 6:01 pm |
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arya sivitkona
New DragonRider
Joined: July 24th, 2006, 3:03 pm
Posts: 312
Location: exploring the spine
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i think ill use this one but ill add some of the other one
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may your swords stay sharp
-brom
I luv KCMO!
shraring
ill share your toys,ill share your money.
ill share your toast, ill share your honey,
ill share your milk and cookies too-
the hard parts sharing mine with you.
stone airplane
i made an airplane out of sone
i always did like staying home
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| August 18th, 2006, 3:35 pm |
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Shur'Turgal Eragon
Peasant
Joined: December 14th, 2006, 12:06 am
Posts: 45
Location: camping with my dragon in Du Weldenvarden
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i would also say this is a pretty intersting one
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(\.../) This bunny may seem cute....Buts its...EVIIL!!
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(") (") the bunnys will someday rule!!!!
Thier weapons:spoons,using karate with ears,and their furry feet of doom!
I used to be a chimpanzee,i threw bananas at innocent people.
bunnys will invade my workshop of plans on how to make world domination easy
We are all doomed!!
O->-< stickman,he is my stickman! AkA "Evil Genius"
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SIEGEMASTER
Sovereign DragonRider
Joined: August 14th, 2006, 10:45 pm
Posts: 3190
Location: Fighting alongside Baldur ^^That Guy^^
Gender: Guy
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Is that a true story?
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Muchos Gracias, Nate.
Verd beh Aliit te Werda Verda~~Warrior of Clan Shadow Warrior
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chimra922
Sovereign DragonRider
Joined: August 21st, 2006, 10:51 pm
Posts: 3802
Location: in the eye of the beholder
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Elves
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its not...just bassed off of real life...and im thinking of not doing that story anymore...cuz there r limets to wat u can do with non fantasy books
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