This is a mini-vampire story i made up.Hope you like.
The vampire's name is Lemphis and the girl is Holly ( Lemphis loves Holly)
"Oh,Holly?" asked Lemphis quietly,shooing away a bee from his head.
"Yes,"replied Holly,cheerfully.
"Can i talk to you privately without your little friend?"
"Sure,"said Holly."Let me go tell him to fetch some necesseties."
So Holly did this and Lemphis waited.
"I"m back."
"Come into the bedroom,Holly."
So she stepped into the lightly lit room with Lemphis.
"Can i talk to you?"
"Sure."
"You know about vampires,right?"asked Lemphis nervously.
"No,why?"
"Because i want to talk to you abou them."
"Okay,fine."said Holly as she sighed.
So Lemphis told Holly the story.(Here it is !)
Vampires are from the underworld (better known as the spirit-world) and live in the country of Karakastahn in Lire Jewel.(Lire Jewel is from a story that i wrote.) They never need to suck blood only on a rare ocassion which seldom happens. (For Vampires to suck blood ,they must pull there fangs out and poke a hole straight through your wrist,in which the blood comes spurting out eveywhere and they drink it by putting there tongues on the stream of blood )When they crave blood, they do this to themselves.The only time they need it from somewhere else is when they love someone. If they fall in love with a specific person,they must drink that person's blood or shall perish. When they drink the blood of the person,that person doesn't become a vampire, they become love-struck with the vampire.(the story is finished)
"Hmm,interesting,now can i go?" asked Holly.
"No,i have more news."
"What?"
"I'm a vampire,and i'm in love with you,"
Holly was in shock.She looked at him with paranormal eyes and looked at his white teeth,but didnt' see his fangs.
"What are you going to do to me?"asked Holly.
"Can i bite you?"
"Well,okay but only if it will help Darfur,because i'm doing it for Darfur."
(Darfur is from my story,Lire Jewel)
"Want some wine?It helps ease the pain."
"No,"
"Suit yourself,"said Lemphis.
"I can't be sober if we're going to do this."said Lemphis." I need to rub some of this wine (the dragon's blood) onto my fangs," he hissed.
"Hurry it up," said Holly.
"Hop into bed and place the back of your wrist face-down on the sheet,"
Holly did this,closed her eyes,and waited.(this is the end of the story)
If you liked that,you can ask for more from my story ,
Lire Jewel,a voyage for ten pieces.

PS:for me to post some more of Lire Jewel ,you've gotta ask for
Jennifer Kitling (just ask for JK)
Jennifer Kitling is my pen name.

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I liked it , keep it up

so you really want more?

yeah, keep posting it. I'm really interested in it.

Here goes the prolgue: It's called "The evil deed is done"
It was late afternoon in Lire Jewel and King Hefter had set a romantic table adjorned with tons of jewels,and the flickering lights of the candles were infused with lavedar and rasperberries.This would be a night King Hefter would remember.
"Emerald,please,sit,"said Hefter.
"Yes,my dear husband,"Queen Emerald stated back.
So they both sat and Emerald devoured her chicken faster than a hungry bear would wolf down it's fish.Hefter touched a little piece of his chicken with his fork,but didn't eat it.
"What's wrong my dear?"asked Emerald.
Hefter started to fake-cry.Real tears ran down his cheeks,but he forced them.
"My, m-m-m-mother died,"stuttered Hefter.
He was lieing but he had to for his plan to work.
"Aww,honey,i'm sorry,"said Emerald.
Hefter nodded.She nodded back in sympathy.
"Why don't we go to the cemetery?"asked Hefter."So I can remember my mother."
"Sure,"said Emerald.
Hefter held Emerald's hand and they walked to the cemetery.
"There are probably ghouls here," whispered Hefter to himselft.
He brought out his hammer,and shovel and placed them next to him.
"It's so dark," said Emerald.
"Please,close your eyes," said Hefter.
She fell into the trap.Hefter gave her three good blows to the head with his hammer.
"Nooo! Help!"screamed Emerald.
But it was to late.Hefter had finished the evild deed.He shoveled out the dirt and placed Emerald's bloody body in the hole.He covered the hole and gave it one last,good pat with the shovel.He stepped on top of the little hill of dirt.He tapped it hard with his boot and then left.

yes, very interesting. keep going!!

here's the 1st chapter . i've written the prologue,the 1st chapter,the 2nd chapter and i'm almost done with the very long long long long 3rd chapter. i might post this 1st chapter in 2 sections because it might be to long

sorry it's been so long i've been very very very busy i will post it soon i promise. just wait.