Here's mine.

Name: Vladmir

Age: 83 1/2

Gender: Male

Skills: swordsmanship, archery, dragon riding, spell casting,

Race: ½ Elf, ½ Human

Hair: Black

Eyes: Evergreen

Home Village: Osilon

Parents: Mother: Naryu. Father: Korith.

Siblings: N/A

Character Personality: Quiet, shy, thoughtful, kind, caring, will go to any lengths to protect those he loves. He is very chivalrous and will help those in need (unless they tried to kill him or probably will).

Character History: Living in Osilon, Vladmir learned swordsmanship, archery, and spellweaving at a very young age. When he was 79, he decided to explore Alagaesia. He went deep into the spine to the ancient dwellings of Dragons. There he found a light teal dragon egg. It hatched for him on his 30th birthday. He named his new dragon Laenir. Vladmir then set out to make something of himself and to free Alagaesia of evil. He became a rider of the queen and is loyal to her, the elves, and the race of dragons. He acts as a messenger and unofficial ambasador between the elves, the Varden, and the Dwarves. He is often sent of dangerous missions needing of his skill.

Weapons: 2 rider’s longswords: elven-make, each with a large white teardrop diamond in its pommel and between the quillions, which were in the shape of two roaring silver dragon heads, has a light teal colored steel blade, 2 3/4 shakus in lenth, slowly tapering to a point and flared out slightly to the silver and gold hilt, the grip is made of black dyed shagreen leather, teardrop pommel; an elven yew bow: with silver ears and an elaborate design wrapping around it and an unbreakable string; 3-dozen elven arrows: each with a small crystal, steel heads, and enchanted with differing spells to ignite, freeze the target, pierce heavy armor, create blinding flashes of light, etc.

Likes: a good meal

Dislikes: Wrongdoers, especially slavers

Animal Companions: a female ware-kitten named Kara, who can sense danger

Character's Physical Description: muscular, but not overly muscular built, pointed ears. He wears fine, elven clothing and chainmail, over which he wears a white hooded cloak.

Dreams for the Future: a peaceful Alagaësia, and to make something of himself

Reason for Dreams: Who doesn't (unless your evil), to escape the monotony of life and to make a name for himself

Alignment/side: Good, Elves

Dragon Name: Laenir

Age: 3 1/2

Gender: Male

Parents: Father: Drathal. Mother: Varalil

History: His egg was given to the riders, just before the Forsworn attacked. The spell was just put on. Drathal died in the fighting, but Varalil escaped with her egg. She hid the egg in the spine, but she left it as to not attract attention to it. She was killed later by the Wyrdfell.

Personality: caring, humerous, loving, relatively outgoing, otherwise a lot like Vladmir.

Color: Light Teal

Appearance: Large, with ivory talons, spikes, and fangs. His scales are a light teal color.

Armor: Left in Osilon: Elven-make; steel with gold accents and a large white diamonds on the head plate

Dreams for future: Same as rider.

Reasons for dreams: Same as rider.

Can you fix spelling and punctuation and add a line or two for history and personality please, thanks!

Here is mine.

Name: Vladmir

Age: Eighty-three and a half

Gender: Male

Skills: swordsmanship, archery, dragon riding, spell casting, healing

Race: Half Human, Half Elf

Hair: Black

Eyes: Evergreen

Home Village: Osilon

Parents: Mother: Naryu. Father: Korith.

Siblings: N/A

Character Personality: Quiet, shy, thoughtful, kind, caring, will go to any lengths to protect those he loves. He is very chivalrous and will help anyone in need (not including people who will try to kill him later or have already tried to).

Character History: Living in Osilon, Vladmir learned swordsmanship, archery, and spellweaving at a very young age. When he was seventy-nine, he decided to explore Alagaësia. He went deep into the spine to the ancient dwellings of Dragons. There he found a dragon egg. It hatched for him on his thirtieth birthday. He named his dragon Laenir. Vladmir then set out to make something of himself and to free Alagaësia of evil.

Weapons: two rider’s longswords: elven-make, each with a large white teardrop diamond in its pommel and between the quillions, which were in the shape of two roaring silver dragon heads, has a light teal colored steel blade, 2 ¾ shakus in length, slowly tapering to a point and flared out slightly to the silver and gold hilt, the grip is made of black dyed shagreen leather, teardrop pommel; an elven yew bow: with silver ears and an elaborate design wrapping around it and an unbreakable string; three dozen elven arrows: each with a small crystal, steel heads, and enchanted with differing spells to ignite, freeze the target, pierce heavy armor, create blinding flashes of light, etc.

Likes: a good meal

Dislikes: Wrongdoers, especially slavers

Animal Companions: a female ware-kitten named Kara, who can sense danger

Character's Physical Description: muscular, but not overly muscular built, pointed ears. He wears fine, elven clothing and chain-mail, over which he wears an enchanted, white hooded cloak, which lets him blend into his surroundings. He has black hair and evergreen eyes.

Dreams for the Future: a peaceful Alagaësia, and to make something of himself

Reason for Dreams: Who doesn't (unless your evil), to escape the monotony of life and to make a name for himself

Alignment/side: Good, Elves

Dragon Name: Laenir

Age: Three and a half

Gender: Male

Parents: Father: Drathal. Mother: Varalil

History: His egg was given to the riders, just before the Forsworn attacked. The spell was just put on. Drathal died in the fighting, but Varalil escaped with her egg. She hid the egg in the spine, but she left it as to not attract attention to it. She was killed later by the Wyrdfell.

Personality: caring, humorous, loving, relatively outgoing, otherwise a lot like Vladmir.

Color: Light Teal

Appearance: Large, with ivory talons, spikes, and fangs. His scales are a light teal color.

Armor: Left in Osilon: Elven-make; steel with gold accents and a large white diamonds on the head plate

Dreams for future: Same as rider.

Reasons for dreams: Same as rider.

how about this???

A lot more history and personality plz.

he said a line or 2........ and I can't describe him much further..... ugh...... i'll try to expand....

is this good now?

IS IT GOOD???!!!! I'm kinda loosing interest, so like in another week if i haven't been answered I'm gonna lose interest...

well calm down and never triple post! I eats you otherwise heh. Like fix punctuation and change numbers like 11 to eleven.

actually, one was 11 days from one and the last one was 7 days from that one. it was WAAAAY over 24 hours difference. cool.

*fixed*

I dont care, im going to change the rule for this section then so over a month is when you can double post, and fix what I said.

i DID fix it. i fixed the second one i posted. not the piliminary one.

how's it now. i know Glaedr hasn't been on lately, but i want it PERFECT when he does get on.

You need a lot on personality and history just look at the accepted ones

ladyofthelost, please don't post in other people's character topics. Thanks.

i'm not making a new character. i've already played this one on other sites, so i can't make 2 much stuff up.

Alright, *Accepted*