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RPG Team   Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
 RazadaHeres a book i just started about a few months ago. im not sure how good it will be though
Edit Last edited by dark dragon on January 4th, 2009, 1:52 am, edited 1 time in total. |
| October 16th, 2006, 10:02 pm |
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Sovereign DragonRider   Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
outstanding son (military term) a few adjustments i say but good over all.
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| October 16th, 2006, 10:03 pm |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
Thx i would have someone revise it but Austin is taking long enouf as it is with the book we're writing
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| October 16th, 2006, 10:06 pm |
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Sovereign DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
you mean the one you posted here right?
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| October 16th, 2006, 10:08 pm |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
No this one im doing my self
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| October 16th, 2006, 10:09 pm |
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Sovereign DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
okay. well this topic is where we just talk about this book and this one only alright?
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| October 16th, 2006, 10:14 pm |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
right then.
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| October 16th, 2006, 10:16 pm |
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Sovereign DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
now well see if anyone else replies.
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| October 16th, 2006, 10:17 pm |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
Alright then
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| October 19th, 2006, 1:49 am |
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DragonRider  Joined: October 17th, 2006, 5:56 pm Posts: 854 Location: somewhere, there's no gravity, and common sense has died, guess where i am cause i don't have a clue |
It's good, you've set the scene and made your main evil.
Now all you need is a hero/ heroine/ heroic group _________________ Where the gods fear to tread That where evil makes its bed That is where they grow and grow and that is where you must go (\../) (O.o) (")(") Help me take over the world!!! we took a wrong turning it's nobodies fault we followed our hearts and now we're lost we kept on going no thought of cost and this is the consequence please read and comment on my story http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?t=3206 please read and comment on my songs http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?t=4283 Aren't i demanding after several painful attempts i stopped getting Vivi!!! Which Final Fantasy Character Are You? Final Fantasy 7 |
| October 19th, 2006, 5:20 pm |
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Sovereign DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
You heard the woman (right?) get workin.(jk) Besides, im looking forward to reading myself.
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| October 26th, 2006, 10:04 pm |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
Good im on chapter 3. (i stared some chapters over.) question if i post another chapter do i put it in the same one or not.
 _________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara Neutral: Snare Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night" Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy. |
| October 27th, 2006, 12:08 am |
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Sovereign DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
no i think its okay. it isnt double posting or breaking rules so i think its okay.
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| October 27th, 2006, 12:09 am |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
ok im not done with this chapter yet but, i want to see how it is doing i finished the chapter tell me if the dream sounds to much like Eragon
edit _________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara Neutral: Snare Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night" Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy. Last edited by dark dragon on January 4th, 2009, 1:53 am, edited 4 times in total. |
| October 27th, 2006, 12:16 am |
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Sovereign DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
nice job. two thumbs way way up!!
_________________ Forever Honor-bound, Forever Strong |
| October 27th, 2006, 12:18 am |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
ty off topic did i do my sig rite
_________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara Neutral: Snare Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night" Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy. |
| October 27th, 2006, 12:19 am |
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Sovereign DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
yeah but why did you put that?
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| October 27th, 2006, 12:20 am |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
couldn't think of anything eles and it was funny and it just radomly came to my head.
_________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara Neutral: Snare Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night" Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy. |
| October 27th, 2006, 12:21 am |
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Sovereign DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
okay but please stay on topic. trust me. firetongue gets really high tempered when you do this so no more foul tempest!!
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| October 27th, 2006, 12:23 am |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
Right then
_________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara Neutral: Snare Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night" Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy. |
| October 27th, 2006, 12:39 am |
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BAD EMAIL  Joined: November 10th, 2006, 4:01 am Posts: 21 |
Pomfret wrote: outstanding son (military term) a few adjustments i say but good over all. I think you need some adjustments... _________________ Blades will bleed. Shields will shatter. But as the light fades... will the hero rise? "You can shroud my world in darkness, but darkness shall not be my world!" |
| November 11th, 2006, 1:05 am |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
what kind of adjustments
_________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara Neutral: Snare Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night" Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy. |
| November 13th, 2006, 9:17 pm |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
im not this far but these were somethings i thought of for it and i was wondering if they were good and the battle part isn't the whole battle.
edit _________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara Neutral: Snare Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night" Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy. Last edited by dark dragon on January 4th, 2009, 1:54 am, edited 1 time in total. |
| December 2nd, 2006, 9:49 pm |
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Sovereign DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
its alright. even though it may just be me but maybe a couiple of small tweeks.
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| December 2nd, 2006, 10:20 pm |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
It just came in my mind when i was playinf fire emblem. Its near the end of the last book so there will probably be some changes. Most of the misspeled words are basicly magic
_________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara Neutral: Snare Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night" Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy. |
| December 2nd, 2006, 10:24 pm |
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Sovereign DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2006, 5:22 pm Posts: 4742 Location: Hint: i belong in the air. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders |
then youre mind needs some miner tweeks.
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| December 2nd, 2006, 10:38 pm |
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RPG Team Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here! Gender: Guy Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Avadius |
Perhaps but i still need to think of the beggining of the battle. And its not the whole battle theres three parts that part the main part with thee two armies fighting and the third par at the shine of the leopard >anarea i thought of wich was a shine wyverns went to before the massicre
_________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara Neutral: Snare Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night" Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy. |
| December 2nd, 2006, 10:42 pm |
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