OOC- Knights of Sammii are always male, rudanika's knights are always female. This is an edited version of a book by me and my cousin. May be published if we r lucky!

Sammii is a great god and his only rival is his wife- Rudanika. They, being immortal have nothing to do but look after earth so they decide to make it more exciting. The kingdom is now over conflict over which god is more powerful with the Knights of Sammii looking over most of the cities or safety. There is one other reason, in 5 cities across the kingdom their are stones. Whoever holds all of these stones will be the winner. The dark knights of Rudanika are out to infiltrate and steal the stones but have so far been unsuccesful.
In the desert a knight of Sammii is near to his goal, the stone of power is almost within his grasps, after a bit more searching in the dunes he finally comes across the stone he is looking for. Now all he has to do is get it back to the great kingdom of Sammii. The stones of stealth, health, light and trust already being in their posetion they are near victory after years of toil. The knight starts the long journey on foot back to the city of Sammii- the worlds most advanced city. Here the scholars are smart and the food is grown is lovely and sumptious, the only problem however is the pillar of power is empty there is a slot for a stone about 1 foot wide and 2 inches thick. This stone will finish the power circle for the better of the world. The knight however is ambushed by a knight of Rudanika on the way back and is close to dead, he stumbles away and luckily runs into a boy in the woods called Carsaib.
"boy, where do you live?"
"Kirlaz" he replied, he then pointed to a bunch of lights about a mile away.
"Make sure this stone gets to Sammii." he looked around scared. "You are in great danger go now!"
Loud footsteps then followed and carsaib leapt up a tree. The Knight of Rudanika tanted in her feminine voice before killing off the Knight of Sammii with a fatal blow from her thin rapier. She then searched the body elated, this turned to anger as she stormed off looking for the stone. Carsaib then eyed it, it was a stone! He could see the ingravements on it. He jumped down the tree and then heard a branch snap behind him. He hid the stone in an inner pocket. "Who is there?"

OOC- No dragons coz aint dragons this world, and pleas join! this is same times as LOTR and eragon type thing- no major weopons just swords etc

hmmm sounds great. U say u made a book? cn I read it?

OOC- are u gonny post or not? And the book is writin not typed and is very long

OOC: if u mean rpg, yes i will be but i think i told u in wyrda i'm trying to get hold of the book and reread it first cause i haven't read it in some months and details are fuzzy. not that i need to read it, but dont worry it shouldnt take more than two days or so.
If you have a scanner you just have to scan the pages and send to me. plz

OOC- take too long lol anyway u dont need the book many people havent even read it, only basic outline is ever really needed, and a map wouldnt go a miss

OOC: alright. tell me more bout the story briefly anyway

what does the OOC mean

You wrote a book good for u!

OOC stands for Out Of Character

Nearby was Oomar. He was hunting for his family back in Kirlaz. He had come out this far because there were many animals in this area. While he was walking in the forest and serching for game, he heard the Rudanika warrior talking to the brush asking who was there. He just hooped into a tree to see how it would turn out. Then he saw it was Carsaib! It was one of his friends back in the city! So he knocked and arrow and readied his sword in case it didn't kill the warrior. Then he shot the arrow. It hit the warrior in the side. Then he jumped from his perch and stabbed the warrior in the back before she could react. He then made sure noone was around and shouted out to Carsaib, telling him to come out.

i thnk samii should get a divorce lol just jokin

OOC: Can I join. for info on my RPG go here> http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?t=832

As I was running trhough the forest, I saw two boys and one dead night of Samii and the other a night from Rudanika, "Help," I shouted at them, the thing that was chasing me got so close it drew a sword and was about to plung it through my back when...

dude, no offence, but ur book sounds kinda crummy. Its not typed yet you expect it to be published? and the start sound like a fairy tale. its just my opinion, you dont need 2 worry about it but this is what methinks