Name: - Mesaraih

Age:- 17

Gender: - Male

Skills: Mesaraih's skills consist of:
1. He is extremely fast and has a lot of endurance for both mind and body. He can run and move very fast,without getting tired for a very long time. He has very quick thinking. Most of his plans he makes them up as he goes.
2. He is very good with swords. He moves his sword swiftly, and also strongly and confidently. He knows a lot of sword moves and combinations, which he puts to good use against enemies. He also knows how to use his sword defensively. However, he mostly just attacks instead of defending.
3. He can make his sword shoot fire, an ability he calls the Flare. He can control how the fire blast moves, how big it is, and how powerful it is. He doesn't usually use it in presence of humans. This move causes a little fatigue
4. He can turn into a wolf whenever he wants. This does not cause him fatigue, although he will get tired if he uses the wolf's ability, which is also a blast of fire. He can stay a wolf as long as he wants.

Race: - Human, with special abilities gained from falling on a bog

Hair: - Black

Eyes: - Dark Brown, with a red rim around the pupil

Home Village: - Belatona

Parents: - Thenes (father) Melissa (mother) (both dead)

Siblings: - One dead brother and a sister

Character Personality: Mesaraih learned at a very early age to be independent, so he never asks for help. He is solitary and on his journeys and most of the time only interacts with animals. He is very brave and if it's about someone he cares about, he is very willing to make any kind of sacrifice. If you really get to know him, and win his confidence he can be very friendly and funny. Winning his confidence isn't too hard, but if he discovers that someone is betraying him, he gets mad and tries to get even at all costs. He gets angry very easily, but even like that he is a kind and generous person. His independence does not mean he does not know how to act in a team. He is very good at being in a team. He is very stubborn and almost never says he is wrong unless the truth is undeniable. He is also very determined and never gives up. It sickens him when someone gives up easily. He has a very adventurous mind, always thinking what he can do next. He loves adventures, and also likes the wild. He is the type that likes attack over defense and always takes the choice of fighting straight on, no matter how reckless. In this, if someone holds him back, he can be very impacient. In summary, he's a kind, high-tempered, adventurous, and stubborn person.

Character History: Mesaraih has an eventful past. After his parents and brother both get killed by an Urgal attack, he corners one of them and found out that the king was their leader. After that, Mesaraih hated the king so much that anytime he saw any of the king's alliances he beat them up so much he killed them. Mesaraih's attacks became a menace because the king's number of servants started to diminish quickly. The king sends the Ra'zac to kidnap his sister to draw the young man to him, seeing that his determination might rouse one of his dragon eggs. So the Ra'zac go after his sister, but Mesaraih is able to escape and save her sister. After that he hides away with his sister in a forest near Lake Tudosten, but the Ra'zac find him and take his sister. While chasing them, he falls in a strange bog, and gains all the abilities he has. After healing his wounds and thinking about it a while, he decides to go to the Varden and find out where he can find the Ra'zac to save his sister. He has to go to many towns to find out how to get to the Varden, and on the way he finds a wolf. He befriends the wolf and together they set out to find the Varden. During his journeys, he sees the cruelty of the king's reign all over Alagesia and decides to also help as much as he can in the Varden to end the king's reign. One day he passed by a forge in Bullridge and an old man said he saw some great pain and destiny in his eyes, and gave him the sword that can shoot fire. He finally gets to Surda and finds out where the Ra'zac are. He goes to find them and manages to rescue his sister without leaving a trace behind. He doesn't attack the Ra'zac because of the advice they give him with the Varden. On the way back home, his sister meets a man and they fall in love. She goes to live with him. Now Mesaraih, a proud member of the Varden, goes around helping people as a wanderer. He does any work and goes anywhere he wants with his wolf if it is useful to the Varden.

Weapons: Mesaraih's only weapon is his sword, which is of very good craftsmanship. It has the design of a wolf's head on the hilt with a red gem embedded in it too. It can blast fire.

Likes: - He likes honest people and the wilderness, as well as animals, especially wolves. He loves adventure.

Dislikes: - Dishonest people, big cities, and staying in one place with nothing to do.

Animal Companions: - His wolf named Rubya

Character's Physical Description: Mesaraih is relatively tall, very fit, and has great eyesight. He has black hair, neither bushy nor thin eyebrows, a medium mouth, and has a slim but muscular build. His hair is rather long for he never cuts it, and he has a huge scar that runs from his right cheek, down his shoulder to his forearm. His eyes are seem to be flaming all the time, flickering back and forth. He has a ready kind of look, not a person that looks like he wants to be messed with. He stands in somewhat cool-looking postures but somehow manages to be elusive enough at the same time to avoid too much attention. He has a somewhat attractive face.

Dreams for the Future: - Mesaraih dreams of ending the king's reign and loving a girl and having a family with her.

Reason for Dreams: - He hates the king and likes the idea of love and family.

Alignment/side: - He's on the side that opposes Galbatorix.(The good guys)

Your description could be longer, and you have some spelling mistakes

there i edited it a little. I hope I found all the spelling mistakes. do you think its good enough to be accepted?

Looks good to me, everything the right length.

Accepted