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eragon43135 New Peasant Joined: January 12th, 2006, 4:43 pm Posts: 34 Location: dragon valley	bjartskular name: bjartskular age: 224 race: were-dragon(human to dragon) gender:male hometown: none(i was born in the Spine) siblings: none parents: unknown(abandoned as a newborn) mission: to destroy the empire and anyone that interferes appearence: human- 6 feet tall, gold hair, blood red hawk eyes, sharp teeth. dragon- 10 feet tall, 13 feet long, gold skin, 15 feet wingspan, emerald green eyes abilities: breath fire and poison gas(when dragon), magic(quite strong), speak each language fluently, i am an excellent sniper, master swordsman traits: loner, easily angered(i was betrayed by everyone i ever got close to.) likes: competions and people who want what i want dislikes: people who get in my way or misuse dragons history: i do not know where i am from and i don't care, all i care about is where i am going job: mercenary equipment:(when human) riders sword, elven bow, two daggers of dwarven make side: the varden dream: to free alegaesia from the evil glutches of the evil king galbatorix reason for dream: galbatorix took away my memory forgotten: galbatorix made me forget everything i knew about my heritege companions: none cool huh _________________ i was breathing fire by two Last edited by eragon43135 on June 29th, 2006, 5:31 am, edited 12 times in total.
March 1st, 2006, 4:58 pm

Bridie Peasant Elder Joined: February 26th, 2006, 6:32 pm Posts: 118 Location: Du Weldenvarden	its good, but if you want to be accepted, and please note, this is only a suggestion, make it a little longer and include stuff like character history and why the personality is the way it is... Okies its good anyway! _________________ "Eka draumr abr onr wyrda..."
March 1st, 2006, 5:02 pm

eragon43135 New Peasant Joined: January 12th, 2006, 4:43 pm Posts: 34 Location: dragon valley	i was runing out of time and the traits is his personality _________________ i was breathing fire by two
March 1st, 2006, 7:23 pm

Glenwing Expert DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow Affiliation: Dragonriders	Read the application topic that is pinned to the top. _________________ http://s13.invisionfree.com/Chronicals_ ... hp?act=idx Colt 45 and 2 Zigzag
March 1st, 2006, 7:36 pm

eragon43135 New Peasant Joined: January 12th, 2006, 4:43 pm Posts: 34 Location: dragon valley	how does it look now _________________ i was breathing fire by two
March 2nd, 2006, 4:53 pm

Glenwing Expert DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow Affiliation: Dragonriders	A lot more on history, fix the spelling, fix the tense, make it third person. What else... Personality and more appearance, Im looking for coherant sentances if that is okay. _________________ http://s13.invisionfree.com/Chronicals_ ... hp?act=idx Colt 45 and 2 Zigzag
March 2nd, 2006, 4:56 pm

eragon43135 New Peasant Joined: January 12th, 2006, 4:43 pm Posts: 34 Location: dragon valley	ok _________________ i was breathing fire by two
March 2nd, 2006, 4:57 pm

Hadarac DragonRider Joined: March 10th, 2006, 11:55 pm Posts: 997 Gender: Girl	yeah you need more detail also you might want to make it a little more confusing _________________ http://www.booksnmore.co.nr <---Join or die..bwahahaha
March 21st, 2006, 12:58 am

Eragon109 Wise DragonRider Joined: February 22nd, 2006, 10:41 pm Posts: 1479 Location: Earth Gender: Guy	too much unkown it has to be longer _________________ Respect a dragon and it will respect you [url=http://www.pickle-green.com/egraphics/main.php?id=eggs][img] http://www.boomspeed.com/egraphics/91787.gif[/img][/url] http://world3.monstersgame.co.uk/?ac=vid&vid=38038410 [CENTER]Take the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz.[/CENTER]
March 21st, 2006, 2:43 am

Hadarac DragonRider Joined: March 10th, 2006, 11:55 pm Posts: 997 Gender: Girl	seperate the dragon self and the human self more also use the right form _________________ http://www.booksnmore.co.nr <---Join or die..bwahahaha
March 21st, 2006, 3:00 am

eragon43135 New Peasant Joined: January 12th, 2006, 4:43 pm Posts: 34 Location: dragon valley	Re: bjartskular eragon43135 wrote: name: bjartskular age: 224 race: were-dragon( human to dragon) gender:male hometown: none(i was born in the Spine) siblings: none parents: unknown(abandoned when i was a newborn) mission: to destroy the empire and anyone who gets in my way appearence: emerald green eyes (when dragon)spiked tail, six inch claws, ten foot wingspan, ten feet long, seven feet tall, silver,(when human)five feet tall, dark brown hair abilities: breath fire and poison gas(when dragon), magic(quite strong), speak each language fluently traits: loner, easily angered, i am an excellent sniper likes: competions and people who want what i want dislikes: people who get in my way history: i do not know where i am from and i don't care all i care about is where i am going job: mercenary equipment:(when human) riders sword, elven bow, two dagger of dwarven make side: the varden dream: to free alegaesia from the evil glutches of the evil king galbatorix reason for dream: galbatorix took away my memory forgotten: galbatorix made me forget everything i knew about my heritege companions: none cool huh what else? be more specific about what you want to know. _________________ i was breathing fire by two
May 1st, 2006, 6:08 pm

Firetongue Global Moderator... Joined: November 28th, 2005, 3:44 pm Posts: 10150 Location: England Gender: Girl Affiliation: Surdans Dragon: Llyelia	You have to use this form: http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?t=984 copy and paste. _________________ . . . . . .
May 1st, 2006, 6:10 pm

eragon43135 New Peasant Joined: January 12th, 2006, 4:43 pm Posts: 34 Location: dragon valley	anything else? _________________ i was breathing fire by two
June 28th, 2006, 4:51 am

skulblaka DragonRider in Training Joined: June 22nd, 2006, 2:57 pm Posts: 566 Location: hereford, UK	wow your guy is short if he is only 6 inches tall 6'= 6 inches an your dragon form is small too 10' tall, 13' long, 15' wingspan _________________ never judge the many by the few I HATE ARYA AND THINK THAT VANIR WILL BE THE NEXT RIDER
June 28th, 2006, 9:18 am

Shade of Fear RPG Team Head Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Lamp Shade Dragon: DrAgonPhD	Dont post unless your a staff member!
June 28th, 2006, 4:34 pm

Glenwing Expert DragonRider Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow Affiliation: Dragonriders	make it much longer! also follow the correct format please _________________ http://s13.invisionfree.com/Chronicals_ ... hp?act=idx Colt 45 and 2 Zigzag
July 11th, 2006, 7:32 pm

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