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Falor103
New Peasant
Joined: April 6th, 2006, 12:11 am Posts: 2
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Samor
name: Samor Druvita
age:578(looks 23)
gander:male
race:elf
side: elven,varden, dwarves
intelligence: very wise has been studying in Elesmera and across alagaesia
looks:wears khaki pants, blue shirt,skinny, has light fair skin,wears gloves often, muscualr, has yawe tattoed on back,daggers in boots,Battle Clothing and armor:silver armor with talons, greaves, brown steel studded boots.
face : angular with pointed ears
eyes: brown green with golden flecks in them
family:realative of eragon parents Nazuda(mother) and ValnorI(father)
home: Ellesmera
personality: kind understanding,not angered easily, and very good with animals,likes to read and doesn't talk to other elves unles spoken too.
skills:smithing, very fine swordsmanship,adn archery
hopes: destroying galbatorix and saving lives of many
specialties: Strong in magic, and able to match Galbatorix with his swordsmanship
History: Samor was raised as an orphan because his mother left and his father had suddenly dissappeared. He grew up with his friend Zamora and trained in swordmanship skills. He was trained with the best of riders and elves.He soon found a dragon egg in the forests near his house. he was surprised to find that the dragon egg hatched for him . He had only heard rumors about them. the dragon was red and strong. by 3 months the dragon could no longer fit in his house.Even though he was praised for being a rider soemone ratted him out to Galbatorix.the Ra'zac attempted to destroy his home city only to be stopped by Samor and his dragon Nigrian. He left soon to slay galbatorix and avenge his slain companions.he travled across the hadarac desert and soon found an outcast dwarf who would help him slay galbatorix.they met many hardships along the way and they atempted to rally the Varden and the dwarves only to be imprisoned because of the outcast dwarf named Hiinagra. they escaped with Nigrian so they could continue their journey.soon they reache urabaen and attemted to defeat Galbatorix only to be thwarted by an enemy rider. They reatreated back to Izlanzadi and reported about the enemy rider.he again visited the varden and once they saw the power of his 1 year 2 month and 4 day old dragon they decided to help defeat galbatorix. They vardenhad found 3 eggs hidden in their abandoned tunnels and Samor transported them to Ellesmera so they could remain hidden. They now only wait for one of the eggs to hatch so they may begin the taining with a new rider.
Proud moments: when Nigrian hatched for himm and when he was able to rally up the Varden
height:6'3"
Dragon description
dragon name: Nigrian
gender:male
intelligence: very wise from the time he spent observing the minds of animals
History: sired by the great dragons Galadre(father) and Saripheena(mother) he was fond a dragons who existed in a special area of the hadarac which had forests and a manner of other plants. he found them and mated with a female named Linneria.his parents were killed by galbatorix.
color: red
size: 23 meters long and 13 meters high
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April 6th, 2006, 10:44 pm |
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Falor103
New Peasant
Joined: April 6th, 2006, 12:11 am Posts: 2
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i hope my post is good
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April 6th, 2006, 10:45 pm |
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Glenwing
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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Dont double post for a start.
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April 6th, 2006, 10:48 pm |
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Eragon109
Wise DragonRider
Joined: February 22nd, 2006, 10:41 pm Posts: 1479 Location: Earth
Gender: Guy
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you got some names like glaedr and saphira and extended them didn't u.
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April 9th, 2006, 3:47 am |
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Glenwing
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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Everbody makes different plots for the world...it gets stupid.
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April 9th, 2006, 12:01 pm |
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DurzaKiller26
Wise DragonRider
Joined: February 14th, 2006, 11:18 pm Posts: 1364 Location: my own, not so sane, head
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hey, falor, you have gander not gender, just telling you, i was lookin' through some of these and noticed that
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April 10th, 2006, 9:12 pm |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Lamp Shade
Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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They are out of order and you could do with a few more lines of personality. Other than that, it's pretty good. I also agree with Wing about the plot. I mean, 3 eggs under the tunnel? It seems kind of weird.
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April 11th, 2006, 1:01 am |
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Glenwing
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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fix spelling please
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April 11th, 2006, 12:24 pm |
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Eragon109
Wise DragonRider
Joined: February 22nd, 2006, 10:41 pm Posts: 1479 Location: Earth
Gender: Guy
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a wing this guy who made this character is my friend from school and he said he won't come to this forum again so i think u can lock this if u want
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April 12th, 2006, 12:44 am |
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