Darkness

What is darkness, is it just simply the lack of light or is it something more?
What is darkness?
It has no define shape or size.
Is it truly evil or dose it mearly get in the way of the light?
People define it as something of evil, but is it that way becuse we don't understand it of becuse, the evil reached it first?
Within darkness there's light and within light there is darkness.
Are they really opposite or one in the same?
That is up to you.

Pain

When I first lost you I was hopefull,
but over the past few years I fell into despair,
my memories elsewhere,
and every once in a while I go home and cry,
at the memory where I almost didn't say good bye.

Memories

I have forgoten the memories of the past,
as I have grown up fast,
I have even forgotten your voice at last.

Gone

Even when i'm gone i'm still with you,
we will never part as long as you remember,
and even if you have forgotten,
I will never forget you.

Nice, but short. Simple and refined. Nice and enjoyable.

Thanks, I think it's quite boring though, just plain and nothing really sticks out about it at all.

NICE.. you just made them up?? cuz they were really good.. i like the part about the darkness and it makes ALOT of sense.. i could never do that.. im not the writing type.. i justl ike to read

Yeah, I wrote them becuse it was raining and my best friend just when to Alabaina for the summer to visit his family. But the one about darkness I wrote becuse the light bulb in my room burned out and it was really dark. lol.

oh lol nice.. i suck at writing poems.. like i couldnt wright one to save my life.. lol but you are verry good at writing them

Come on I dought it's that bad, my brother is probably worse on the count of he wouldn't read a book or write a story if he would get all the money in the world for doing it. And he LOVES money. If I asked him to write a pome i'd probably some thing like this:

Money.

And there you short and simple. And that's how his mind works, I actually taped on it once and it sounded hallow. S-C-A-R-R-R-R-Y!

LOL how old is he??

14, and nothing in his noggin, sad I know.

lol your pretty funny making fun of your brother.. lol but were off topic.. soo about the poems.. i had to write on in school.. lol i got a C on it cuz im so bad

That's actually pretty good compared to my bro.......you don't want ot know what he got on his pomes he wrote for school, i'll tell you anyway, a G becuse it was sooo bad a F just wouldn't cut it. lol.

LOL a G?? lol man he must be really bad

Naw ya think, no he's the best writer in the world! (VERY VERY sarcastic!!!!!!!!!!)

lol sure.. well im going to bed.. cya tomorrow maybe

K, keep on writing and you'll eventually get better!

There reli gd!!
I rite poems i got one in my sig but compared to everyone elses they seem reli bad lol.
Write more!!!!!!!!

They're great!
What do you think of mine it's on an attempt at poetry
have a look
please...