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The Beggining, Book one in the Tigerlily Chronicles
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Dreamer
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 The Beggining, Book one in the Tigerlily Chronicles -This is a story i've been working on for 3 years.
Prologue
When Nonoby Naclair had his finest witchs and wizards create the santain jewel, he intended it to be like an egg. He knew not what would hatch, only that it would be wiser than the most intellegent dragon. That it would posses more magic than the most mystical unicorn, and that it would be more powerful, have more courage, and be more beautiful than both welded together.
He cast powerful enchantments around it. To protect it from thieves in case the many dragons and unicorns who agreed to help protect it, failed.
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Hang on, i think I have to post his somewhere else. Sorry. I need to find the rules and guide lines.
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Last edited by Dreamer on April 14th, 2007, 11:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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| April 12th, 2007, 9:33 pm |
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rpm12345
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i like it. to be honest though im not really crazy about the name nonoby naclair but other that that it seems like its going to be interesting
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fronzz
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I agree with rpm. It sounds really good, but that name is a lil different, lol
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Dragonzroc
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The name is interesting and its one u dnt reli forget its a good prologue its sounds amazing.
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| April 13th, 2007, 9:59 am |
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Dreamer
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I started writing this book when I was in third grade and I haven't really gotten around to changing any names though. I probably will end up changing Nonoby's name, his first name only though. Thank you for being honest. 
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My mommy says i'm special.
When the shadows are closing in around you, turn on a flashlight.
Would you please help me find my sanity,
Never mind.
I forgot I never had it.
Books are the key to knowledge.
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