Name: - Talias

Age: - 400

Gender: - Male

Skills: Talais is skilled in both magic and sward play as any elf would be but his true skill lies in archery. He hits the target every time and can do it from far away. He has discovered many spells to us on his arrows and has mastered the skill of archery.

Race: - Elf

Hair: - Talias has slightly long blonde hair.

Eyes: - Blue eyes.

Home Village: - Talias lives with his brother by themselves in Du Weldenvarden.

Parents – His father, a dragon rider, was killed by Galbatorix near the beginning of the the end of the dragon riders. His mother, Essala still lives nearby in Ellesmera.

Siblings: - He has one brother named Talamar. He is slightly older than Talias.
He fought with him before their father died but after he did Talamar didn't want to fight anymore

Character Personality: Talias is very generous. He is always trying to help people in need. he wants tthere to be very little death so he helps people so they wont. He is very wise and smart and gives out advice a lot trying to help people with the difficult things in their lives. Before a battle he is always silent. He is never casual about killing and usually wants to be alone before and after a battle. But in battle he is never hesitate about what he has to do. He never talks too much though he likes to think to himself about the future. He loves seeing his friends. He is as good a friend as a archer. He knows that a friend is allways some one you can trust so he makes as much as he can. Talias loves nature and all of its bueties. When ever he is lonely he allways thinks of his father. He allways looked up to him and addmired his work and he was devestated when he died.

Character History: Talias was born in Du Weldenvarden 20 years before the fall of the dragon riders. He admired his dragon rider father and all of his work and skills. While still young he became very interested in the art of archery and became a soldier to help make peace. He quickly became very respected by his fellow soldiers by his skill. When the fall of the dragon riders had just begun him and his comrades were heading back to there homes in Du Weldenvarden when they were attacked by Galbatorix’s soldiers. They fought hard to repel the attack but one by one they fell until only he was left. With only a few soldiers left he used a spell on one of his arrows and killed them. Since the fall of the dragon riders had just been beginning he did not now what was going on and decided to find his father to tell him what had happened only to find him dead, killed by the forsworn. He found his sword under his father’s dragon’s foot and took it up and swore revenge on these enemies. He fought for many years until it was too late and the dragon riders had ended. He went back to Du Weldenvarden to his brother and lived peacefully until word reached his ear of the Varden. Thinking about his father he decided to head of to the Beor Mountains and joined the Varden and continued to fight for his revenge on the empire. With all of his skills he bacame a hero of the Varden. He was once set to the burning plains to fight in Eragons army agains the empire. He was badly wounded and had to return home to his brother for healing. After time to get better he set out to fight the empire once more.


Weapons: - Being a master of archery he carries a very good bow. It is made a very special wood that he found near his home. He stringed it and it has been hitting the target for many years. His sword is his rider father’s sword, a usual rider’s sword with a silver gem, the color of his father dragon.

Likes: - Talias loves a nice peaceful walk through the woods and observing the amazing animals around him.

Dislikes: - Talais hates seeing the death and sufferings of others.

Character's Physical Description: Talias is slightly taller than most elves and he is very fit. He wears green clothes and light leather traveling armor when fighting. He always keeps his bow and quiver on his back and his father’s sword in its scabbard on his waist. Talias was hurt when fighting Galbatorix’s soldiers and has a scar on his right wrist and one on his left leg.

Dreams for the Future: - He dreams to live a life of peace and harmony.

Reason for Dreams: - Although he has great skills in archery and fought in many wars, he hates killing and seeing deaths. All he wants is the world to live in peace.

Alignment/side: - Good

sorry if its to short microsoft word has shorter lines than sf


pm me with what you think

special thanks to gryndal 2006 for all the help

Hmmm, the personality COULD be a bit longer, maybe 6 lines more?

Few spelling mistakes, such as "clothe" must be switched to clothes.

Galbatorix's has an extra "e" in physical description.

Thats all I can find. Any suggestion, Osthato, Star?

ok ill fix them. why ou say star shes not a rpg team
edit:oh wait she is congradulations!

I think you covered it Shade, except for I think his physical descriptions could be longer, and he just a few spelling errors. Other than that it was really good.

thanks its short because i was using microsoft word an they have much shorter lines

man i hate character personality its so hard. hmmmmm.... dang i cant think of anything
its a little more than it looks because for some reason the lines really are long on this page
i added a little

Try to describe what feats he did to earn his personality. Thats counts too

ill try its just that personality is so hard and the lines are so long onn this page
ok i have 9 lines is that enough?

Osthato needs to comment.

Sorry - haven't read it completely through, but as I've said to everyone for a long time, watch typos. (Found a bueties or something instead of beauties). Anyway, looks good. (Accepted)

done!

yay thanks time to get rping! aw man i have to get off in 10 min o well something to look foward to tomarrow.