OOC: this is about Tiago's past as you can tell by the title. Tiago is one of my RP characters so this is a more detailed version of his history. right now he's 2 but to a wolf/dog 2 is like 14 so yeah.

IC: Chapter 1: Death in The Family

My dream was peaceful. It was so simple yet lovely, me sitting with my mother, father, and brother laughing and having a good time. My dream was shattered when my brother Sota's voice started to yell. "Tiago! Come on wake up!" I really woke up when he started to bounce on me. I pushed Sota off my body sat up, and stretched my arms while yawning.
"Come on!" Sota yelled as he ran out of my room, which is like a thicket. I followed, it was a beautiful day barely a cloud in the sky. I rubbed my eyes and let out one more yawn before saying "Hey.."
My dad was a big guy. He had milk chocolate fur with light spots around his eyes, like stupid sunglasses. While my mother was just a bit shorter then my dad, mom had light brown fur like me. Sota was the spitting image of my dad built strong and milk chocolate fur.
"Good morning sleepy head." mom said
"Hey kid! You ready!?" dad asked more excited then usual.
"Ready for what?" I asked sleepily still rubbing my eyes.
"What you already forgot!? I'm going to teach you how to use fire!" after saying this dad ran off into the forest yelling back to me "You'll know where to find me!" I ate breakfast quickly and followed my father's sent to an open part of the forest, there wasn't any grass and a;; the rock were black.
"Alright Tialgo before you learn how to create fire you must first learn how it is possible we can create fire." I sat down as he started to explain. "Now there is magic in everything Tialgo, the magic we naurogarms have is that to create and sustain a flame. You see we take heat from our body and the heat around us to create the flame, our body heat can get up to one hundred and thirty degrees fahrenheit so we have a lot of body heat to spare. The more energy you use the hotter the flame. Does that make sense?" he asked after explaining.
I could feel my face had either a confused, shocked or a mix of those two expression on it. "Yeah that makes perfect sense." I reassured him.
"Okay good, now each fire is different because all of us are different. You see my fire wont look the same because we're different people." Dad said as he continued to explain.
I was getting excited, all this knowledge was coming so easily for me. I jumped up from up sitting position and yelled "Awesome! Lets get started!"
"Okay, first focus your body heat,focus the energy into your paws"dad was doing this as he spoke. "When you get enough energy release your flame!" The second dad said this a dark red fire escaped from his paws hitting a rock and blackening it. "Just like that." he said seeming proud in his fire blast.
I followed my father's instruction exact. I focused my energy into my hands. I could feel it flow down from my arms to my paws. I released it just as my father did but only a flicker of orange flame cam out. I was disappointed, I wanted to prove that I was just as strong as strong as him.
"Hahaha, don't worry Tialgo it takes awhile to get a flame like mine."
After a few hours of practicing I started t get a little tired so dad and I took a little break. I peaceful quietness was disturbed when a loud flapping broke through. Dad quickly stood up, "Tialgo run back to your room." his voice was so serious I had never heard him like this. I didn't move I guess I was to scared to. "NOW!!" when he said that it was like his angry voice brought my legs back to life I did as he said running as fast as I could back to my room. When I got back Sota was in here, "Sota what are you doing..." my mother interrupted me when she popped her head in.
"Tialgo, Sota stay here. No matter what you see, hear, or even smell DO NOT LEAVE!" her voice was just as serious and angry as my father's. I curled up next to Sota with my hands around my legs. Suddenly the ground shook as if something really bug and heavy landed. My mom gave a both a kiss on the head before saying "I love both so much." she retreated her head soon after. I clung to Sota when the sound of loud roaring broke the uneasy silence. Tears started to roll down both of our faces when the loud roaring continued and when the sent of blood and smoke filled the air.
After what seemed like five hours, though it was probably just a few minutes the roaring stopped. I waited for mom or dad to pop their head in to tell us it was alright, but they never did. I clung even tighter to Sota and started to wish this was all just a horrible, horrible dream. The raging sadness, anger, and horror eventually put me to sleep. Before drifting off into my dreams one terrible thought jumped into my head, Sota and I... are orphans.

Amazing! I wanna learn more about the flames!

what else do you need to know!? lol

OOC: yes Silv they are a species I made up! Later on in the story It'll tell how they there created. Alright this chapter has two parts because of a time skip.

IC:
Chapter 2 part 1: Aftermath

My dream wasn't as peaceful this time. It was me in the middle of nowhere, my parents were arm in arm far away from me. I tired to run to them with my arms out so they could grab me and start to kiss me and say that they loved me, but no matter how fast I tried to run I never got any closer.
I woke up alone. Sota must have left to see what happened. I left my room to go find him, he was sitting on a logg staring into space. Blood covered the ground, rocks were blackened, and the grass was burnt. There weren't anybodies... I couldn't even think of it.
"So..." I couldn't even finish before he interrupted me.
"Tialgo." he seemed startled by presence. "Tialgo...were leaving soon." his voice was a strange mix of sadness, worry, and seriousness.
"What...were are we going!?" I asked shocked that he wanted to leave so soon.
"Away from here. Those dragons could come back and kill us too." his voice was still in that weird hybrid tone.
It took me awhile to realize that this wasn't the loving care-free Sota that woke me up this morning. This was the holy-crap-my-parents-are-dead-now-I-have-to-take-care-of-my-little-brother-now Sota., it was kinda scary. After talking about where exactly where we were going, we left what used to be our home.

Chapter 2 part 2: Hope in the shape of a man

Time heals all wounds. Whoever said this never thought about it. True if you get a cut it will heal, but the pain received from that cut never leaves. Like the sound of your parents screaming in pain trying to protect you. Or the smell of their blood filling the air. No, no that, that never heals. It stays in your head to hunt your dreams, which are more like nightmares.
I couldn't tell if I was either going to sleep or dying. Its been months since my parents died and Sota has been my parent. I barley talked, there was nothing to say. It was coming now, sleep or death. I was actually hoping for death, at least that way I wouldn't have those nightmares anymore. But a male voice came in, it felt like it was trying to pull me out of the darkness.
"Hey... hey are you alright?" the voice was talking to me. I opened my eyes to seen it wasa human. Brown wavy hair and hazel eyes, he was smiling. I reached out to him, I don't know why it felt like someone was whispering in my ear "Go Tialgo, this man will help you and Sota."
"Alright come on." he said as he picked me up. I felt a wave of relief flow through my whole body the second he picked me up.
"Don't worry. I'll take care of you." He told me as he started to walk away.

WOOOOO! Awesome. I want more lol

you want to much lol.

No i want more just enough lol

Chapter 3 An Offer

I woke up in a bed with Sota next to me. He must have gone back for him. I thought. I looked around the room to see some food on plate with a note. I got out of the bed and went over to the table were the note and the food was. The note read: "Here is some food, eat up and get some rest." I felt happy, and emotion I haven't felt in months. I ate some of the food and saved some for Sota. I continued to look around the room when I heard two voices coming from outside.
"Dante, I love that you want to help but..." The woman's voice trailed off.
"Jenna, you said you always wanted to be a mother." it was the same voice of the man that helped us.
"I know but they're-"
"That doesn't matter." Dante interrupted "They'll be different,we can raise them to be good." Dante pleaded. There was a moment of silence.
Finialy Jenna spoke "Alright, lets go meet them."
I ran back into the bed so it didn't look like I was eavesdropping. The bed moved a little when someone sat down. "Hey kid you wake?" Dante said quietly.
I tried my best to look like I just woke up, but I wasn't a good actor. Dante let out a small laugh and smiled at my attempt to look sleepy. "Hey, my name is Dante and that is my wife Jenna." Dante said still being a little quiet so he wouldn't wake up Sota. I looked over at Jenna she had her arms crossed as if disappointed yet she had a I'm-glad-your-here smile on.Jenna was pretty, with long curly brown hair and loving green eyes.
My natural instinct told me not to tell them anything, but it felt like....like...like I should "Hello, I'm Tialgo and this is my older brother Sota. I must thank you for your generosity. I gave him a head nod while I spoke.
"Your welcome Tialgo, now me and Jenna were wondering if you and your brother would like to live with us." He asked hoping my answer to be yes.Even though I knew this was coming it still caught me by surprise when he said it.
"I would love to but....but I have to talk to Sota about it."
"Of course, I understand. We'll leave you two to talk." Dante left with Jenna soon after.
I didn't want to wake Sota up, he needed his sleep. But after about two hours of waiting I decided to help Sota wake up. I started to shake him gently and say his name. He responded by turning over and letting out a grunt.
"SOTA!!! WAKE UP!!!" I yelled in his ear.
"WHAT!?" he yelled back sitting up.
"Sota we have been made an offer." I said in a serious voice.
He ignored me looked around the room. "Where are we?" he asked still looking around.
I sighed "I'm not really sure, but this guy named Dante asked if we wanted to live with him."
"What!?" Sota yelled shocked by what I said.
"Yeah he gave us some food, and he let us sleep here."
"Hmph that was awfully nice of him."
"Sota come on. Think about it free food, free place to sleep."
He knew I was right, he couldn't deny that. "Alright lets met this Dante."
Dante must ave been eavesdropping because a moment later he poked his head in seeing that Sota was awake he walked in. "I see your awake. Hi I'm Dante."
"Hey names Sota. Tialgo's brother."
"Its a pleasure, so have you two discussed about my offer for you to stay?" he asked with a big goofy smile on his face.
"As a matter of fact we have..." Sota said as he jumped out of the bed. "And..." both me and Dante we eager to hear his answer. "We accept."
"Really? Oh you guys will love it here! Come on lets introduce you to the rest of the village!" Dante said excitedly.
Sota gave me a look when Dante spoke, I returned a hey-he's-a-human look, and followed him to meet the village.

wooo! i want more! but seriously its really good

but wasn't it boring? come on admit it

oh yes it was >.^

fine it was the greatest fricking thing ever writen ^.<

I'm done with Chapter One, and I can see already that I'm going to like this story. The one major piece of advice I can give you is to slow down and describe more. A Chapter in a printed story normally is around six pages long, you need to add in a lot more description to lengthen the story out a bit.
That chapter had lots of things happening in it... yet it was only about 1 1/2 A4 pages.

I hope that didn't seem too harsh, but I like your story, and I want to help you improve it