Sorry, I am taking it away. I don't want someone to copy it.

lol its your story but i think since the biging is so wanting to have egg hatch it should be called the hatchling i think but it your story

LOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

not enough time to read it allllllllllll so LLLLLOOOOOOONNNNGGGGGG lol but that a good thing.

Thanks. I appreciate that. I want it to be really long. I like it. Yes that is a good title. I might do it, if that is okay.

it could be called the Twins,

Maybe.

I got the title. It is Fire and Ice.

well it sounds good.

Very catchy title, if it were published it would be flying off the shelves!

Do you really think so. Thanks.

this could be a good game too, lol

(just like many other stories I've seen here so far though.. )

Thanks. My sister lieks it, I never get any compliments from her. That was until I wrote this book.

so that makes it extra good then, hmm?

Yes. She is good at editing. She told me she was going to edit it.

cool!

it took ages to read but wow that is so much better than mine!!!

You'll get better, please dont double post people. Makes me sad --->

Thank you. I knew it would. Yours is good. It takes practice. Believe me. I was horrible.

(Editing this post)

Well I will let you in on a few things.

The series title might be called The Riders, (I had something else, but I just had to forget it. ) Also: Book one is called The Sea of Emerald Dreams. (Someone here gave that to me to use. I won't say who but I thank this person alot. The title holds many secrets in the book.