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Sparty
New Peasant
Joined: December 13th, 2010, 11:41 pm Posts: 22
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Bertran and Ash
First of all I love to RP and second of all this is a character that I made long ago but it has had a few major changes to it.Here is my application.Enjoy!
Name: -Bertran
Age:-19
Gender: -Male
Skills: Magic,sword,bow
Race: -Human/elf
Hair: -Brown
Eyes: -blue
Home Village: -Doesn't have one.Was banished as a kid and has been wandering since.
Parents: -doesn't know them.dies right after birth.Was raised by a guy named Ebirk
Siblings: -doesn't know if he has any
Character Personality: He is full of mixed emotions which makes him go from angered to happy depending on the situation.He usually snaps back at someone who makes smart remarks and often gets in a fight with them and it doesn't take much agging on to make him fight.He is very around a lot of people.He is very cautious to who he gives information to and only sides with people he knows very well.He is easy to talk to when he trusts you but is quiet when he doesn't know people or is suspicious about them.He has a bad temper and takes his fury out on anything that is in his path including people.It takes him awhile before he cools down and the only one he talks to when he is mad is Ash.Ash always makes him feel good and is his best friend.He tends to snap back at smart remarks no matter how bad they are.If you are his friend or ally he will always have your back and will stand with you in any situation.He likes to prolong arguments when he is in a joking mood and will continue to agg onto a argument just to poke fun at people he only does this when he is in a good mood.
Character History: The Rider known as Bertran has a sad history. He was born and raised under the nobility of a duke named Ebirk, but as he grew older he came across the art of magic. Using his newfound power, he started to use it to do unspeakable horrors to his enemies. The nearby townsfolk began to regard Bertran as a monster, and sent the local guard after him.
They hunted long and hard for him, but found him, imprisoned him, flogged him multiple times, and when he tried to escape from the dungeons he was in, was banished to the desert beyond the mountains.
He wandered the desert alone for years, feeding off of the few animals that were buried in the sand, though one day, he found something black jutting partially out of a sand dune. He dug it out to reveal a polished black stone-like object, harder than diamond, and rang a clear tone when struck with a rock. Valuing it's potential worth, he took the stone for himself.
The next night, he was awoken by a squealing noise from the pack he had carried the egg in. The stone had turned out to be an egg, though not just any egg, but the egg of a shining black dragon. He reached his hand out and touched it, forming a bond with the dragon and made him a rider. He named the dragon Ash, and taught it his language when he found it could speak through thought. Once the dragon grew into a terrifying adult, Bertran flew back to the city he was exiled from and laid waste to the castle, and the surrounding land, leaving no one alive but his mentor and friend Ebirk.
The hatred of their exile was still burning inside their hearts, causing them to attack other areas in the surrounding lands. He eventually made it to an unknown valley his anger has somewhat went away and he has felt bad for some of his past actions.He now walks the land staying to himself.
Weapons:Spear.Will not break because of magic put on it.It's handle is brightsteel and so is it's tip.
Sword:Completely black.It is also made of brightsteel.Has a jewel on the bottom of it where he stores massive amounts of energy.
Likes:weapons,magic,storytelling,books,history,fighting,among other things
Dislikes:enemies,cocky people who think they are better than others,people who make smart remarks,things like that
Weakness / Fear: -losing Ash,Ash getting hurt
Animal Companions: -Ash his dragon
Character's Physical Description: Bertran has brown hair and blue green eyes and is 6'7" maybe a little taller.He has a long scar from his forhead across his eye and halfway down his cheek from fighting with a mountain lion while hunting.He is very muscular from being banished for so long and spending his time in the dessert and making everything he needs.He has rounded shoulders and a thick neck and his facial features are thin but not bone thin.He always wears elvin clothes he stole from the ones he killed.
Dreams for the Future: -find all his family
Reason for Dreams: -just to know them
Dragon Name: -Ash Age: -10 Gender:-Male
Parents:-killed before hatching
History: Was born to two black dragons.Fathers name was Vaderan mothers name was Ewar.He was born in the dessert and shortly after being laid his parents were killed by three riders and their dragons for no reason.He sat there for 2 years and was found by a boy around the age of 10.He hatched 2 nights later and bonded with the boy.The boy taught him the humans language so they could converse in their minds.The boy explained his history to him and told him his name.His name was Bertran.Once able to fly they went to the city that Bertran was born in and laid waste to it.Shortly after leaving Bertran named him Ash after all the ash that was left from the burnt city.They then flew around the land and settled in a valley and always went back there to a cabin that was built.Another man lived with them his name was Ebirk he was Bertran's mentor and friend.He had raised Bertran when Bertran's parents were murdered and had taught him magic and all of Bertran's weapon mastery.They now roam around and occasionally go back to the cabin in the valley.
Personality:Ash is a good friend and ally when he trusts you.He is completely faithful to his rider Bertran and hates Bertarn's enemies just as much as his rider does.He does have a somewhat understanding side and will listen to people as long as what they are saying is reasonable unless they are an enemy or something goes against his rider.He is not the type of person you want on you bad side because he is a fierce and dangerous fighter.
Colour: -Black Appearance:He is muscular and charcoal black.He breathes fire the same color he is.He has spikes going from the top of his head going all the way down to the tip of his tail.He has white,razor sharp talons.He has spikes on the tip of his wings and one on his nose.
Armour:Doesn't use any Dreams for future: -to avenge his parents Reasons for dreams: feels his parents death was cruel and plans to tear apart the men who did it Weakness / Fear: - losing Bertran,Bertran getting hurt
Well theres mah application.Hope you like it!
_________________ Accepted Characters: Nuetral:Bertran and Ashhttp://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=9706
Unaccepted Characters: Good:Mathew http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=9842
Last edited by Sparty on December 17th, 2010, 4:25 am, edited 2 times in total.
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December 14th, 2010, 2:04 am |
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dark dragon
RPG Team
Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here!
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Avadius
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Re: Bertran and Ash
Looks pretty good, but you need about 6 more lines in personality .
_________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara
Neutral: Snare
Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night"
Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy.
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December 16th, 2010, 4:07 am |
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Sparty
New Peasant
Joined: December 13th, 2010, 11:41 pm Posts: 22
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Re: Bertran and Ash
Ok sorry I meant to add more but didn't have time to do it.Thanks.
_________________ Accepted Characters: Nuetral:Bertran and Ashhttp://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=9706
Unaccepted Characters: Good:Mathew http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=9842
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December 16th, 2010, 5:32 pm |
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dracoaestas
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Re: Bertran and Ash
You still need a couple more lines on Bertran's Personality and another line on Ash's Physical Description. Otherwise this bio is looking interesting so far.
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And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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December 17th, 2010, 4:12 am |
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Sparty
New Peasant
Joined: December 13th, 2010, 11:41 pm Posts: 22
Gender: Guy
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Re: Bertran and Ash
Ok I fixed what you said and completely redid Ash's appearance the picture would not load when I tried to put it in the appearance.So I redid it completely.
_________________ Accepted Characters: Nuetral:Bertran and Ashhttp://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=9706
Unaccepted Characters: Good:Mathew http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=9842
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December 17th, 2010, 4:26 am |
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dark dragon
RPG Team
Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here!
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Avadius
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Re: Bertran and Ash
Ok, looks good. I accept
_________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara
Neutral: Snare
Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night"
Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy.
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December 17th, 2010, 11:42 pm |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
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Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Faelia
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Re: Bertran and Ash
And for me as well. I Accept. Have fun with these two.
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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December 17th, 2010, 11:44 pm |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
Gender: Girl
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Dragon: Ardel
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Re: Bertran and Ash
I Accept as well. Good work, Sparty, and welcome to the rps!
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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December 18th, 2010, 1:32 am |
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