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Name: - Ariona

Age:- 17

Gender: - Female

Skills: Ariona is a pro at magic and knows the Ancient Langauge very well. She can search ones mind without them barly noticing.

Race: - Elf

Hair: - Blonde; shor, straight.

Eyes: - Green

Home Village: - Ellesmera

Parents: - Maddie and John

Siblings: - She has none.

Character Personality: Ariona is a gentle and kind elf and will gladly help anybody in need. She talks fast but is slow enough for people to understand. She loves animals and wouldn't kill one in her life. And she can also comfort them with her mind. She doesn't want to ride animals exept for dragons and she wants to be a dragon rider. Her family was weathy and gave her the family money before they died in a dragon battle. Even though her parents were killed by them, she still deeply respects dragons and respects them like other elfs. She is loyal to the queen and never diobeys her leader and will fight for her too. She has never felt a need for killing unless it is urgent; she wouldn,t harm a fly. But when it comes to battle she is feicer than ever and will fight for ones life if needed to. She always thought to respect nature and animals; she had taught this to herself. And of course she always deeply respects dragons and their riders.

Character History: When she was born she had a glowing, blue dragon rider mark on her forhead; nobody ever knew how or why. Some thought it was because her mother, Maddie, had been bless by a dragon in secret and kept it hidden. Others believed it was just sheer luck and never cared about it. When Ariona was a child there was a dragon war; and her parents had sadly died from it. With nobody to care for her, she fended for herself, making her own weapons to sell and trade. She also searched the endless forest of Du Weldenvarden in search of the lost dragon riders. When she turned 15 she began to spend her gold on some things that were needed. At the same age she built her own shop: The Swordsmanship of Ellesmera. There she made valueble swords for riders and others. When she turned 17 she left her shop in the care of Nara her best friend. She went of exploring Du Weldenvarden and its secrets. She found a secret dungen where she made her tempoary home for the year. In her home she found a friendly fox of whom she named Nari. The fox kept her company in good and bad times. Now she is still exploring Du Weldenvarden with Nari.

Weapons: Shinninglight: Her sword that she made was a loyal one and went as fast as lightning in battle. It also would shine in the gleaming light of the sun; that is why she called it Shinninglight.

Likes: - Cute baby animals, and loyal friends

Dislikes: - Evil dragons, and spirits

Animal Companions: -
Nari; a fox

Character's Physical Description: A slim preety elf with blonde short hair whitch is straight and gleams in the sun. If you happen to fix your eyes with hers she could make you feel uncomfortable till you let go. Her piercing green gaze can burn away your back if she stared at you. Her body is made for running and moving stealthly; although she never uses her stealth moves. As all elfs are she is flexilbe and strong with a lot of energy.

Dreams for the Future: - To be a dragon rider

Reason for Dreams: - She thinks that dragons are amazing creatures.

Alignment/side: - The Varden

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April 18th, 2007, 2:07 am Profile
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Another nice character idea. :D First thing, "She can search ones mind without them barly noticing." That didn't end in the desired point, i'm afraid. "Barely noticing" implies that they notice very little, and "without" negates whatever follows it. So in effect, you're saying that they "don't (notice very little)," so they're actually noticing a lot. How about just ".. one's mind and they'll barely notice?" One more thing, CP uses "elves," not "elfs." The "dragon rider mark" is known more commonly as the "gedwey ignasia." Anyway, fix all of this, and a little more history preferably, and I say accepted.

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