Name: -Rugaard Bentle

Age:-67

Gender: -Male

Skills: a skilled blacksmith and a medocre fighter, he learned the art of smithing from himself and most of his creations a out of the ordinary, he is also very smart.

Race: - dwarf

Hair: -black

Eyes: -white

Home Village: -fathern dur

Parents: -unkown, his parents died at when he was age 6 and he never talks about it

Siblings: -none that he knows of but it is rumored that he has a sister that was raised by elves

Character Personality:Rugaard is a very intelegant dwarf, unfortunatly he does not care about any but himself because when he was alone no one cared for him. He is a skilled blacksmith but not well known for his odd smithing style and sour attitude. He acationally trains with the wepons he makes and sometimes has to put that skill to use when ever trouble come ari. He hates elves for the compitetion in smithing and when he was a boy he was robed by elves and thinks of them all as the same. he likes to stay alone smithing and spending time with a roaring fire, the fire always helps him relaxe and makes him slightly happy. All year he thinks of ways to protect a fighter and improve even a rookie fighters chances of winning, he thinks even the underdog can survive and win if given the right momentum.

Character History:he was born and raised in fathern dur untill age 6, his family was out in the sun for a change when a traveling shade came and played a game with his parents, how many dwarvish bones could he break without breaking a sweat. Rugaard escaped by hiding in a bush. He spent a few days in that bush and when he finaly got the curage to come out, there stood three elves. He aproached them with caution but they seemed really nice, they gave him food and let him rest. they talked about a grand scheam they had and how Rugaard would be perfect for the job, they tricked him into stealing 50 crowns for them and wile they went off laughing he was now saught out by the gaurds. He eventually paid off the shop that he stole from by doing small jobs in there smithing shop, wich got him inteersted. a few years later he baought his own blacks smith shop on the outskirts of fathern dur, weere most people just leave him alone. A peddler does always come by to pay him for his unique wepons.

Weapons:he uses what ever wepon he has closest, this could include a sword, axe, bow, mace, or spear. When eveer he trains though he has a favorite wepon, its a crossbow he made out of some unknown material, he loves the way its black as night with a shine to it, he uses speacail made bolts for it that he never sells to any one else. He thinks some day he will look into what material it was that he used for it but its on his to do list.

Likes: -being alone, fires, smithing and thinking of new items to smith, and improving his knowledge of wepondry

Dislikes: -elves, large crowds, family matters, and mice

Animal Companions: -none

Character's Physical Description: he is a short dwarf for his age, he is very stong and muscular though, he has a scare on his right arm wich he thinks came from the shade that kiled his parents. his beard is long and braided into three sections that at first seperat then circle round each other then rejoin into one, he is very proud of his beard. he is also missing a few fingers from smithing accidents.

Dreams for the Future: -to live a life alone without war elves

Reason for Dreams: - he loves being alone and hates elves

Alignment/side: -the side that will pay the most

what is the point of this?

Certainly passable for spelling and grammar, I could understand everything. Just be sure that you don't do the same thing in the RPG. And Torkenbrand, I got busted for the same mistake when I first joined. Don't post in other people's applications unless it's your own. I'll let you off this time.

As for the character itself, very interesting that you make a non-combatant. I do believe this is going to be our first in the RPG, so you should feel proud. Everybody here always makes warriors and dragons and Dragon Riders, so having a smith will add a very nice touch to the way the RPG works. Make those changes Aeraldi suggested, and it's accepted by me.