Ignitus Ardoon
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Joined: August 14th, 2007, 9:31 pm Posts: 40 Location: Northwich
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Shrouded Forever
Well, this is going to be the topic where I put my story named "Shrouded Forever". Read if you want, but I don't care, as long as I show it to somebody. At the moment, I've only got a plot, the main six characters, and locations. So, here's the storyline:
A young boy named Blitz is surprised when a family heirloom is passed down to him after his father's death. The alabastor stone, the gift, is nurtured and cherished by Blitz, of whom keeps it warm all the time. One dark day, there is a raid in his home village Slothravgard. His mother is killed, and he runs from the house with his father's sword Orichalum. He see's the egg beginning to hatch, and the silver dragon emerges from the shell. Blitz is then invited to join a group in a place called Ashdar, far off of Slothravgard, to join the Warriors of Light. He is taken as an Apprentice by an Elder named Arradon Silmarh, and he trains Blitz well. Seven years late,r still under Apprenticeship, Arradon is killed, and everyone is accusing Blitz. He is exiled for it, and attempted to be killed by the Elders, but he escapes with his dragon, of whom I am still thinking of a name.
And the characters with their appearence:
Blitz Kasas Parthius Ignitus Olo – Blitz has coal-black hair that is spiralled behind his thin ears. His eyes are brown and drab but hazel when Blitz appears a silhouette. His lips are red and flexible with a charm about them, a sort of fragrance that emits from his face’s glow. His cheekbones are below his eyes with makes him far less than chubby, but rather thin. His chest is raw and strong with his ribs bulging with power from all of the hunting he performed in childhood. He is not fat and nor slim, because his belly sticks out half an inch. His arms are bulky and full of muscle; they are also long and nothing near dangling. His legs are the same size as his arm and also replicas in strength. He commonly wears his trademark thick, black cloak that has a dragon hide brown belt tying it to his waist.
Death’s Lord, Voltrous Sekine – Death’s Lords true name is Voltrous Sekine, but he prefers his nickname that comes from his servants, the Bloodless. He has silver, waist-length hair that shines darkly and has a flaring blackness about it, though it is very bright. His eyes are pupil-less and bare white, nothing in them apart from a stream of mist when looked into deeply. He is slender and has no build to his physique, but he is very strong on his upper body and lower body. His body is pale and streamed with a reddish-black bloodline. He wears a perfectly clean, comfortable black robe down to his legs, but it has been ripped and stops at his knees, so he wears a dark under robe to cover his flayed skin. His sword is inside an upside down scabbard, which hangs from his hood where the pommel is tied with dragon hide rope.
Sceither Lybrakaig Eidooth Sarath – Sceither is a Wyvern, a mythical dragon with two legs and does not have the ability to breath fire. His ears are golden and swift, sharp on their points and on the edge, thin and dangerous. His eyes are nothing but a white background and black, thin pupils decorating the behind. His chest is a fluorescence golden colour that is muscular and powerful with a curve going inwards at the middle, which goes into the form of his fat, strong legs. They are, too, the light colour, but scarred with gashes of blood from warfare and battles. At the end of both of his limbs, Sceither has razor claws, a colour that emits a lustre-white glow in the brightness, and they ride upwards before going down again. He has three claws on each foot and they are silky smooth, like a marble tombstone without a jagged point. His arms are exact replicas of his legs, but without the scars, for they are clean and beautiful with spiky claws on the fists. His back is curved gently and goes down into his legs, like his front. He wears nothing, but sometimes a silver tunic and along his top.
Lorvia Ajuna Cethist – Lorvia has long, curly brown hair and twinkling black eyes that are sharp, yet beautiful. Her image, like Blitz, is tanned and long-figured. She has dark red lips spread along her attractive face. She is one of the most slender in the world, with an average breast and slim belly. Her longs are straight and long, but very flexible, as are her arms, which are just as swirling, for she is a master swordswoman and has the reflexes of a live arrow. Her thigh is large, but average considering her comely body and her jubilant appearance. She tends to push away help, as she believes she can do things on her own, but then again, she is always happy and following order from her higher ranks. She has a secret affection for Blitz as time goes on, as Blitz does in return. She often wears a silver, tunic that look like robes, and she also wears light bronze shoes that reveal her long, well-postured feet.
Danjuro Gzigma Olo – Danjuro is Blitz’s brother, taken by Death’s Lord at birth as he showed great dark power with magic. He has short, blondish-brown hair that is very untidy and ragged. His eyes are a dark hazel colour, making them look notoriously evil. His torso is like Blitz, strong and muscular with his ribs pushing out as a sign of strength. His legs are long and just as powerful, representing and resembling in every way his arms, for they are truly tall and flexible. He is fond of wearing his Bloodless cloak, one that has never been washed. It is a grey robe with a hood at the back, made of dragon hide, which makes it shimmer in even the purest of darkness. He wields a special sword give to him by Death’s Lord, which he treasures greatly, never letting it beyond his grand sight. He made an oath at the age of thirteen to become one of Voltrous’s Bloodless and death at first sight from any Bloodless or Voltrous is the punishment if he fails to maintain it.
Elara Iremand Aramroth – Elara is a lone, female warrior who crosses the land on a dazzling white horse. She is an ally of the School for Wizards Blitz attends; yet she does not go there, for she does not have a dragon. Her hair is blonde and looks, and feels, like fluffy candyfloss. Her eyes are perrywinkle blue and sparkle in fluorescence. Her face is angelic, but pale, with drab, pale red lips. Her body is slim and acrobatic. Her arms are average and swinging with twisting hands that dash like an eagle. Her legs are long and slender with nothing but bone and skin, but they are significant at performing somersaults while in battle. She has a purple piece of cloth over her mouth, so her full face is a mystery and unreleased, so she breathes through her nose. She tends to wear a purple, sleeve-less, flexible robe down to her knees. Silver sandals protect her feet.
And that's basically the plot and characters. Slightly Inheritance Trilogy but a different realm. Post if you have any suggestions or you want to use this topic for spam.
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- Ignitus as he summons a demon whilst in the Hadarac Desert to protect himself from Galbatorix's soldiers.
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