ok heres part of my story

I looked out the window of the family car on our way to our new home in Kansas City. I had to sit with my twerpy little sister Bridget who was singing the weels on the bus for the hudredth time. I had wanted to drive myself there but my mom just said " Sorry Kary ur not old enough to drive from gorgia to missouri." Somtimes she makes me want to scream. My family is the worst I had to leave my best friend and my boyfriend just because my dad got a new job. we've just left St. Louis and now its just a 5 hour drive to KC. St. Louis has this frozen custerd place called Teddrews. They make such good ice cream.
Well we made it to Kansas City and the house we now live in is huge. I already saw some people my age so i wont get lonely. I picked my bedroom its the biggest after the master bedroom.

thats realy good

thanks butim not quite done whith it so ill post the rest later

It's surtenly a good begining....I hope you'll post more of it

thanks and i will

Ayaa likes it. ^-^ It's really good writting, you definatly need to post more. Your very talented Good job.

thank u
and my bros wandring wat thet animay is

its a great beggining let me know when you are finished i would love to read the rest of it!

well actually i just made that part up im trying to find my orijanol but its alot difrint so i think ill keep this draft thanks
well im gonna play morrowind now so by

ok cool c ya later lol

ok by by

Pretty good. I like it.

thank u
and for those who dont know i put real places in my books

cool!

oh and if u watch a show called 8 Simple Rules thats where i got the names Brridget and Kary

i watch it sometimes, i like the names though

thank as i said befor i used the names of the two girls on 8 Simple Rules but the names of the parents r gonna be my mom and dad`s names
i found the origanal im gonna post it 2marrow

cool i'll read it then!

k should i post it here or under somthin else

Mabey you should make a new topic for the rest if you write it (please do!!!!!) Because there are a lot of replys on this page so I think that the next part should have its own topic 4 replys and stuff!
I like storys that are real life I mean I like sifi but books you can relate to are just as cool. that's why your story rocks.!!

hop to read som more of that later you should be a writer one day!

thanks, to the both of u and i am thinking of getting my books published

that would be really cool! Create a new thing and post it there and then we can comment on this site

i posted the origenal story its under "my story"
could som one read it

i did read it and i think you should consider publishing! It would make a great book

thank you and i might

what will you call it if you get it published or havent you thought about it yet?

i have no idia whet to call it

let me know when you have decided!

WHAT I MEANT was that i need help

very very cool writing. It sounds really professional. Sorry, I'm rubbish at titles

thanks hav u read my other verrsion its called my story

Ok what about The wheels of the bus, no ignore that it sounds terrible! A story about me, maybe?? I am not very good at giving stories names although i love writing them!

that sound good i think ill use it

i'm glad what do u picture the front page looking like?

im not drawing any
its still me arya sivitkona but when i canged my email it deregisterd me

For a title how about My Life Sucks? Just kidding.

why did you change your username?

please read my sig

ok! Another chocolate freak?

of corse i luv reeses pb cups i ate 20 bags in one day

i cant identify with you! chocolate i can go without but i cant function without coffee and icecream!

it's really nice

have you picked a title yet?

no not yet i hate coffie and thanks

why caffiene is the best addiction there is

no chocolate is did u know that chocolate has the same power as caffine

yes i know but coffee smells better tastes better and comes in more flavors and textures than chocolate

im gonna try coffi again soon because i think i hated it because my bf put to much creamer in it

That could be let me know what u think

ive noticed its mostly girls who post in this topic
no ofense to any guy who posted here

its a well known fact that girls rule and boys drool!

so true
i found a title for my book ill call it "The Change"

thats sounds cool! its just the sorta title that will grab ur attention and make u curious

that is like so tottaly true thats why im calling it that

have you sent it to a publisher yet?