Here is a story I put together in study hall at school....rather quickly.




Chapter 1

I was 7 years old, when I first developed me craving to be an author. I surpassed everyone in all my classes, especially grammar. But it all changed that day. When the NSA came knocking on my door. I was astounded by the sudden offer, and I had no idea whatsoever to what I was agreeing to.

I was only 16 when I killed my first man. 16. Guilt flooded my very conscience. But, after that 'dreadful' moment I began enjoying it. I actually LAUGHED when I killed someone.

By the age of 17, I had killed my own FAMILY, and I was the worlds number 1 NSA agent. People stopped referring to me as an agent and began to call and treat me like a god. My dream had shattered. I was supposed to be a writer. Even while I was happy at killing people, I was forced to cry myself to sleep. I remembered the moment when I was 7, an innocent little boy who only wanted to be a writer. My life was hectic. Or so I thought. IT was nothing compared to my promotion. I was like a legal assassin.

I had been Russia's most wanted, I had came so close to throwing the world into a devastating World War 3. That one time I accidentally shot the president of Russia. I was fired from the NSA, and I was forced to join a small group of wanted people, trying to prove mine and their innocence, at that point, I actually discovered the true meaning of happiness.

I actually was part of a small family. At that point I had realized the mistake I had committed.

I had killed my parents with my own two hands.

I realized my true goal in life. To destroy the NSA, to save others from committing an idiotic mistake like me. With my small family of Jon, Sarah, Michael, and Amon, I felt invincible. But my life was about to take a huge turn. I was about to enter a world I should have stayed out of. This is my story.

End of Chapter 1
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Hope you liked chapter 1, rather short, I know, but I think it explained a lot..I think...

I sped up the car as if it would help my leave my past behind. The street lights created awkward shadows and an eerie feeling I was thinking. And driving. I drove for about 20 minutes, than, I got tired of thinking, so I switched on the radio, witch Michael had rigged to listen in on police frequencies. I kept flying past channels until I heard one that caught my attention.

General, we are in pursuit or a yellow BMW in region 281x6, we suspect the driver may be Alex Gundum. Please sent another copter to back us up, we can't take any chances with this man.

A voice replied, "I Hear you loud and clear, I have just deployed a copter in your given coordinates."

I jammed off the radio. I was in control of a yellow BMW. I turned on the engine's stealth mode, which of course, Michael had put into my engine several days earlier. I hear the blades of a helicopter whirring above my. I aimed the mirror into the sky and looked at it. I was right, a helicopter was after ME.

I quickly switched the car to auto-drive and pulled out a box from under my seat, and opened it up, I pulled out a 30 shot AXG caliber and an ammunition pack. I jammed the ammunition pack into the gun and shut the box. I shoved it under my seat and rolled down my window. I stuck my hand out, using the mirror to aim, and shot at the man in the window. I hit him, I saw him fall of the copter.

I aimed at the helicopter blades and shot. Damn! I thought.

They were mad. They had began returning the fire. I flinched when a bullet pierced my back window and shot into the seat. These guys weren't playing around. And neither was I.

I stuck my hand out like before and aimed again, and almost dropped my gun when my car took a abrupt steep turn. I had almost hit another car. I pulled my hand in, and took a moment to upload the data to my brain. This was bad.

I stuck my hand out again, and shot, I pulled my hand in and waited for several second, than I heard what I was waiting for, a loud BOOM.

I almost smiled at myself until I heard more blades whirring. "Damn, I wasn't counting on the backup to get hear so damn quickly" I thought aloud. I heard a loud voice on my ear piece. "Alex! Alex! Do you hear me!?"

" I hear you!" I yelled in frustration.

"Good! Are you okay?"

"I guess I'm perfectly alright, excluding the fact I'm being followed by several damn helicopters! Can you hack the helicopter frame and shut them down?" I asked.

"I can try, but these copters are like non I've seen before! They are state of the art! And to think they'd sent such newly developed copters after you. Either they hate you or you pose to much of a threat for them."

"Can you just please try?"

" I already am. Half of the fire walls had glitches in them. I'm guessing the copters were incomplete. Okay...just drag the virus and plant it there...done, just avoid them for 6 minutes. And Alex."

"What?"

"Don't waste your bullets on these, they are absolutely bullet proof."

"Got it."


I pulled of my ear piece and threw it onto the passengers seat. I clicked of Auto-Drive and took control of the wheel.

I zigzagged to make my self less of a target. Several bullets shot down at my car and than, the back window shattered. I cursed to myself and to a risk.

I hit the breaks and turned around. The helicopter kept going strait for about 900 feet before it turned around. I hit the accelerate button and let the car speed up to 300mph. The back window was bringing cool air into the car. I was shaking. IT was to cold.

I kept on going, resisting the urge to slow down so the wind wouldn't affect me. I quickly pulled up the window beside me, and it suddenly got a little warmer. Snot was dripping out of my nose. I quickly grabbed a tissue that was on the passengers seat and wiped it off. I stared at my watch, and saw SEVEN minutes had passed. I jammed the breaks and waited for the car to stop. I couldn't hear the whirring. I waited several minutes to make sure, and found out I did the wrong thing. The helicopters were not down. I grabbed the ear piece and hit accelerate. I put on the ear piece and yelled out Michael's number.


The phone dialed, on the 6th ring he picked up.

"Alex! I don't know what the hell happened, but I'm sending Amon to back you up!"

Good, The action one! I thought and than I saw him, Amon speeding towards me on his motorcycle. He gestured me to lower my cars built in ramp, I did so.

He sped up, and he launched off my ramp toward the copter. He pulled out his gun, and as he was falling shot 3 of the copter pilots.

He fell back down and landed his bike gracefully down onto the pavement.

The other two copters retreated, as if the two of us would do something horrible. The cowered.

I was happy. I got out of my car, grabbing some black spray paint on my way. I went to a nearby wall and drew a black bird flying. It was my symbol, to them, it was evidence, to me, it was my reminder never to turn back. I entered the radius of the street light that was nearby and saw my scarcely visible shadow stretch about 7 feet, stopping halfway through my body when it exited the light's radius.

I walked back to my car, kicking a can I saw on the road. When I reached my car, I kicked the can away and ignited the engine. I drove on, Amon following close behind.

I drove for about half an hour before Amon sped up and came parallel to me. He knocked on my window, keeping hid eyes on the road.

I rolled the window down and listened to him, "We've moved our base, follow me!"

"Why did we move?"

"Our old one was discovered."

Dammit! When will this end? No...It will end when I have destroyed the NSA I thought. I wanted to stop the car right there, and cry. Cry to my hearts content. But I couldn't. I promised myself I wouldn't cry until the NSA was gone. Erased from the very earth.

Amon sped up and led the way. I pulled up my window and followed.

In 20 minutes, we were there. I got out, puling out the key, and followed Amon. He led me to a door, and pulled out two cards. He threw one to me. I caught it and examined it.

In pure gold, I saw my name etched onto it 'Alex'. Amon entered his card into a small slot that was in the wall. I heard a soft clink and the doors opened

Michael, you've really out done yourself this time. I thought

I followed Amon through the building. When we reached the end, I saw michael on his chair, rolling back and forth between his several state of the art computers. The dearth of light made his golden hair seem purple.

"Whats wrong?" I asked.

"I think someone is trying to hack us, 7 of our 19 firewalls are down!" He said, sounding panicky, without looking up.

"Have you entered frame 17ex? It's empty, if someone is trying to hack us, why not just place it in front of a firewall and close it when the hacker enters it?" Asked Amon

"I've tried it! He's to good!He saw right through us!"

I went to Michael and told him to move. He did so, and I went to work. I typed in several things, and paused occasionally to read some of the data, after about 10 minutes, I backed up into a wall.

"I've stopped him from now, currently, his virus is going right back at him." I said, relieved.

"Thank you," Said Michael.

"Your welcome," I replied. "Now, I can use a nap."

"Sure thing, Sarah's setting up your bed right now. Follow Amon, he'll take you."

I did as I was told. When I was in my room, I told Sarah and Amon good night, giving Sarah a kiss. I jumped onto my king sized bed and pulled the sheets over me. I fell into a deep slumber.

End of chapter 2

I'm proud of chapter 3..I haven't written it yet, but Ive thought of some.


Chapter 3.

I woke up to a clicking noise beside me, I looked up and saw Michael sitting there with his laptop, sucked into something. I got up and asked him what he was doing.

"Oh, finally up sleepyhead," He smiled. "I'm strengthening the virus you deflected last night, to hit the person who sent it to us suffer."

He laughed. Strange, it wasn't like Michael to laugh over someone's suffering.

"Where's everyone else?" I asked.

"In the living room. Talking I guess."

"I'm gonna freshen up and go see them, Ok."

"Oh by the way, I put up arrows on the wall to help you navigate."

"'K."

I walked out the door, which apparently, Michael left opened when he entered the room. I saw a sign that said 'restroom' and followed it. I walked and walked until I finally saw a door. I walked over to it and opened it.

I walked in, closing the door behind me. I examined everything around me and thought, Wow...classy. I went over to sink and turned it on, above it, was a, what appeared to be a, 15th century antique. How'd we get this? I thought.

I splashed my face with cool water, it welt wonderful. I looked up in the mirror, and saw something that wasn't me. I saw an old man, with old brown rotten skin, and cracks all over it. I flinched, I stepped back until I banged my head against a coat hanger. I cursed to myself, rubbing my head. I turned around and opened the bathroom door. I walked out and followed the arrows to the living quarters.

There I saw the most dreadful sight. Amon lay in a pool of blood, apparently dead.
I was immensely scared, I looked around and saw Jon and Sarah in a corner, behind them on the walls, blood stains.

I felt something push against me head hard.

"Hello Alex!"

I was surprised at the voice I heard."

"Michael!? Why the hell..did you do this?"

"OF course I did it!"

"Why?"

"I only grant one wish at one's time of death. And I answered you question, which I understand is your wish!" He laughed. "Good bye!"

I heard a BOOM for about a millisecond and than I fell dead.



I jumped. It was only a dream...Rather a nightmare. I was sweating. I rubbed my face and got up. I opened the door and didn't see any signs. I followed the passage from the previous night and saw that in the living room, everyone was sitting and laughing.

Except for Amon. He was the first one to see me. "Alex.." He said.

Everyone heard and turned to look at me. "Alex! you slept for 3 WEEKS!" Michael blurted.

"What!? 3 WEEKS!? How the hell am I still alive?"

Michael poked his fingers together and said, "You know that old tube line from when you were a baby? I had to open it, you wouldn't wake up, it was our only choice to keep you alive."

I rubbed my head. I was immensely frustrated. I heard a loud BOOM.

Whats with all this damn '[BOOMS['!? I thought.

"Wait here, I'm dieing to see some action."

Michael and Sarah were about to complain but Amon stopped them. "Let him go."

He looked at me and smiled. "Go."

"Thanks, I said."

I turned at ran towards the source, which was somewhere in our building. I reached a corner and saw a red glinting light. I ran towards the corner, and continued running. I felt someone shut my mouth with their hand. I looked in front of me and saw a masked man, whom had come out of nowhere approaching me with a knife, behind him, about 40 men. I struggled with whomever was holding me, I even kicked him.

But he just wouldn't let go. The man who was walking toward me said, "Hello, Alex."
The raised his hand and brought it down on my heart.

END OF ALEX's VEIW(And who ever likes Alex, just bear with me, you'll be happy in chapter 4. OK? AND NO, THIS ONE WAS NOT A DREAM!!!!!!!!!!!)

Amon heard a Alex yelling for his last time, he jumped up.

"Whats wrong?" Asked Sarah.

"I think I heard Alex," Said Amon.
Wait here, I'll go check it out."

Amon sprinted through the halls, which by now, he was familiar with. HE reached Alex and saw him sprawled on the floor, in front of him, about 45 men and a fire.

Amon drew his gun and shot a few shots, before jumping around the corner to avoid direct confrontation. He looked around the corner, and saw that none of them were armed.

He jumped out and shot, he shot about 7 of them before he heard a click.

"Here, you can have it." He threw the gun at them and ran towards them. He punched on in the jaw, before ducking down and tripping one. He quickly got up, and punched the guy he tripped, whom was still in the air, into several others, knocking them into the fire. He heard agonizing screams before they died, and faded away. He turned around, and kicked someone sneaking up on him in the knee, the man fell onto his knee, where Amon kicked him in the face, knocking him unconscious. He pulled out another gun, and shot several of them quickly. He heard gunshots behind. He turned. Sarah.

She shot several more shots, skillfully avoiding Amon. Amon turned and tried punching someone in the stomach. But the man caught his arm, and flipped him over. Sarah fired several shots into his chest. No good. Body armor.

Sarah dropped her gun, and saw Alex. Her eyes widened. She fell to her knees, tears rolling down her eyes. Amon got up, seeing the bulky man walking toward Sarah. He ran and blocked Sarah and the man.

Amon jumped, making the man flinch. He smiled, "Just kidding." He said.

He quickly landed and punched the man in the stomach, kicking him in the thigh, milliseconds afterwards. the man toppled, Amon took this moment to Quickly kick him into the fire.

He walked over to Alex and bent down, for the first time in his life, crying.

The turned around and picked up a knife someone had dropped, and examined it. He noticed 3 letters that made him howl in pain on the inside. Alex's biggest enemy.
In huge red letters, was written:

NSA

End of chapter 3.

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I loved chapter 3! YAY! Sorry it's so short, and that Alex is dead. But I'm even prouder of chapter 4.

HE DOES...I have a very suspenseful twist coming up!

Hm...well it's quite good right now and its a very enjoyable read. There are some spots that seem a bit dodgy, but I'm still enjoying each chapter as they come. Very nice twists so far, I like it.

INTO MYSTERIOUS PERSONS VIEW

Dammit! I thought. I crumpled up the sheet of paper that was sitting there, like it was mocking me. I threw it into the basket. I slammed my fist against the table.

The door behind me creaked open. My butler walked in and said, " Sir, you have 1 year to write this book, and your more than half way done. Why don't you take a break?" I turned around. "I need to finish! So I can have at least 11 months of free time!"

My butler sighed. "Yes sir. Sorry I interrupted." He walked out closing the door behind me.

I went back to my book. Thinking back to when I first wanted to become a writer and the age of 15. My head suddenly hurt. I saw a boy, about 6-7...who looked like ME when I was a kid, writing, talking to his mom, saying, "Mommy, I want to be a WRITER." Then everything disappeared, all I saw was the blank sheet of paper in front of me.


WOOW..that was scary... I thought.

I thought of my story, the NSA was being destroyed. And I saw something else.

5 people, laughing. Calling themselves Amon, Alex, Jon, Sarah, and Michael.

AS I half suspected, everything disappeared. I thought about it. Alex...That was MY name...Riiiiiiiiiiing The phone rang. I reached for it and brought it up to my ear.

"Hello?"

"Hey, ALEX, I need you help. You can kinda act, right?"

"Ya, so?"

"Will, my director's junior artist left, could you come down here? It's at an old burned down building at region 281x7."

"Ya, I'll be there in about 10 minutes." I said, rubbing my head. I got up, pushing my chair back. I walked to the door and opened it. I walked down the stairs to my car. A yellow BMW. I saw another one. Me...in a car, holding a gun, shooting at a helicopter chasing me.

I hurried into the car and ignited the engine. I drove to the area my friend had told me. When I parked my car, I got out and walked over to the door, and saw an old security system. Another 'flashback'. I was with the guy name Amon, I remembered from my previous vision.


Another update soon.

Wow! I was not expecting that. That is a very cool twist! Bravo! You just snagged my full attention...!!! That doesn't happen very often in stories, so great job! Can't wait for the next up date!

I knocked on the door. I'm a god dam writer! None of what I'm seeing is true..It's all just...some big old day dreaming. I thought. The door opened. I walked in and examined it. IT was pretty grand. Than something weird happened. I lost control of my body. I...or something walked outside and went behind the building. There were several people. Not my friends. It was from my vision. Those people were real.

The one named Amon was smoking. He saw me and took the cigar out of his mouth. He blew into the air.

"Hey Alex."

I stepped back, to my surprise, I could move my body again.

"Stay the hell away from me! I don't know what the hell you have been showing me, but I DON'T LIKE IT!"

Than I saw it...Rather suddenly uploaded it. I had sudden memories of a life I never had. There it was though. I know I can't remember things that never happened.

Maybe...this was from another life before this? I thought. No, thats preposterous.

"Alex..do you remember?" Amon asked.

"Remember what?"

"Everything."

"I-I don't know. I don't know anything right now. I don't know if this world I'm living in is a fantasy, or the other world I'm seeing."

"None of them are fantasies. They are both the same worlds. In you. You are in those worlds. Remember...If not for me, for Sarah."

Sarah. That was the name. I just suddenly believed everything.

"A-Amon...It's been a long time."

"Thirty long years."

"How come you still look the same?"

"Because we never age...except for Sarah. But she transferred her body to an exact duplicate, so she's still the same age. And looks the same and everything."

"Where are they."

"Follow me."

My legs were wobbly. I didn't know whether to leave my world or go back to my old one. Without thinking, I followed him.

This was it. I was continuing my plan to destroy the NSA. Just like my book.

It's funny. One persons book, can be another person's reality. But in my case, My book was my reality. And I had no clue whatsoever what I had one. I could've continued my life. A writer, who made 3 million dollars on average a year. But no. My friends were more important. It's like I had two lives now. And my first one was telling me to continue with my friendship.


We walked and climbed Until we finally got there. A trailer home. The door burst open. Sarah and Michael jumped out. Sarah ran to be, embracing me and planting a kiss on my lips.

Strange. I thought. In my books, the boy usually kisses the girl...Oh well...


I embraced her back and kissed back. My happy reunion would only last for so long. The NSA was about to blind itself. Leaving itself wide open.

Uh...um...uhm... That was completely unexpected...good job...keep it up!

ya, this is a good passage, i also say to keep it up

Chapter 5(I added to chapter 4 in the same post.)

Soon after the reunion, I found myself in the trailer, already working on the coordinates of the new NSA. The NSA thought I was dead, because the assassins they sent probably reported that they killed me. But the made the mistake of killing me when I was good. I guess fate gave me another chance. How Lucky I am.

"Alex...Are you sure you want to do this? You know that the government can just reestablish the NSA, right?" Michael asked.

"They won't."

"How can you be so sure?"

"Just trust me. And...this may sound stupid, but...I want to take a couple of years break."

"What!?"

"You heard me."

"But..

"I've made my choice. Don't complicate things."

Amon was about the argue but I glared at him.


"Fine..."

"But what are you going to do in 2 years?" Asked Sarah.

"Live."


2 Years Later

My eyes jerked up that morning. I realized it was my last day of peace. Sarah was already awake. I found her in the kitchen, all dressed, with several guns on her.

"Sarah..." I said.

"What?" She asked.

"Will...I know this is going to be very dangerous. Please. Don't come today."

"Alex...I live you. I want to be with you...always."

"I love you to. But what about Roy?"

Roy was our 2 year old son. A strong and healthy child.

"But..."

"Please! You'll know I've destroyed the NSA when everyone else does. ME , AMON, AND JON! THAT IT! YOU AND MICHAEL Are staying HERE!"

She turned of the gas. She walked over to me and placed her hand on my cheek.

"If something occurs. And the NSA is not destroyed, or it is reborn. God be my witness. I'll take Roy and destroy the US government."

I laughed inside. I smiled.

"I truly love you."

She handed me the guns slung over her shoulder, which were on a belt. I took them and slung them over myself.

I took a sower and got dressed in my tactical suit. When I went back down, I gave Sarah a kiss.

I got in my car and Left. Sarah was in tears a that point. I was sad about what I was leaving behind. But I had to...

I got to the trailer, where Amon, Jon, and Michael were waiting.

Amon smiled.

"Alex....It's time to go..."

"Already?"

"Yes."

"Alright."

I wanted to get talk to them but... I guess I wouldn't be able to. Michael stayed at the trailer, while we got in the truck I had bought and left.

This was it.

When we reached the NSA headquarters, I found the security was higher. Oh well. We got out of the car and walked to the gate. I pretended to drop something, really, distracting the guards, whom turned to look at me.

Amon planted the bomb, which Michael had rigged for 25 seconds, and came to me, Jon by him.

"Come on!" Said Jon.

I listened. We walked a little until the guard couldn't see us. Than we started sprinting. Good. IT worked. I heard a loud BOOM. All the guards would be going to the site of the blast.

When that happened, we sneaked in through the back.

This was easier than I thought...until we were blocked. We weren't even in the building and something bad had happened.

I had immediately recognized this man as 2nd junior of the NSA, which meant he could even tell the president what to do. And he was will built.

Amon told me and Jon to stay back. He ran towards the man and kicked him in the face. The man didn't even blink. He munched Amon directly in he face. This time Jon went. The man was mad this time. He threw a punch at Jon, but Jon ducked, dodging it. He Kicked the man in the stomach, using that kick as a propeller for another kick. Like he was walking on a wall.

HE did a back-flip, and as soon as he landed, he received a punch to the temple.

I didn't want to fight. But I had to save my friends. I ran towards him. Kicking him in the back of the leg. He thought it was meant to hurt, and threw a punch at me. Exactly what I wanted. I tripped him...or rather he fell. I kicked him several times in the face, which seemed to have massive affect. He fell unconscious. Not exactly how to fight but...oh well. I thought. I nudged Jon, who was unconscious, awake.

Amon was already awake. As soon as Jon could run, we made it into the building, luckily, the guards were still occupied at the gate. We found an elevator and pressed the up button. While we were waiting, I felt a sharp pain on my arm. I had been shot. The elevator rung. It was here. Perfect.

We went ran into it, barely avoiding a shot to the head, the doors closed.
When we reached the top floor, I discovered our bomb hadn't worked. the top floor was swarming with guards. as soon as the doors opened, we ran behind some crates and ducked. I took out a gun and put on a silencer. I carefully looked and aimed. I shot several times. Perfect. I took down six guards out of the 20 or so.

Trust me. THERE IS A LOOOOOOOOOT more of this story.

I was gonna tell why in chapter 6. No Spoilers.

For me that just made the whole thing fast forward huge time. I don't mind, its still a good plot, but the way you rushed into it so fast was a little bit upsetting. Its still enjoyable, but it was a little too fast pace.
You updating anytime soon?

ya. Sorry, I was in Alaska for a field trip.

Oo, fun. I've never been. Anyway, hope you can update soon.