Name: Audraie Vernote

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Skills: Excellent swordsmanship; unkown to her, she can control the air
Race: Dunidine

Hair: Long, Black with strands of deep, dark purple going through it

Eyes: Violet, with dark thick lashes

Home Village: none, is currently living in a small village close to the Hadarac Desert

Parents: Birth Parents: Unknown
Adoptive Parents:
Father: Solnam Vernote; Smithy
Mother; Cariane Vernote

Siblings: Birth twin sister, Drania, seperated when they were 10
Adoptive brother, Furlorst age 15

Character Personality: Kind, trusting. She is mostly a happy person, & fun to be around.
Audrie's weakness is that if she finds anyone in trouble, she will help them. She is a very giving person. She blurts thing without thinking, sometimes hurting ppl in the process.
After her parents adopted her they tried to keep her sheltered, as a result she is quite naive.
She is very friendly, but doesn't open up right away to everyone.
She is mysterious, atrait she shares with her sister. It is hard to tell when something truely bothers her because she tries to keep a stiff uper lip.

Character History: Found on the doorstep of an elderly female elf's home (Xandra), at the outskirts of Elsmeera when they were babies Audraie and Drania knew nothing of their parents nor of the secret hidden powers they each possesed. There was no note in the basket in which they were found but each of the girls had an enchanted pendant around their necks that glowed brightly when they were close but grew dim when they were appart.Happily raised Audraie and Drania were always very close, but the other elf children always made fun of them because of the marking on their arms. Xandra loved them like any mother would and treated them with the utmost kindness. When they were 10 years old Xandra died. Forced to go to the only elf willing to take them, they went to live with Xandria's nephew, Jangla. Jangla was poor and the only reason he took them in was so he could sell them to slavers. Seperated Audraie and Drania lost touch.

Audraie was sold to a kind couple, Solnam & Cariane. Solnam had bought her to help around the house with Cariane because she was pregnate. But when Cariane lost the baby, Audraie was sent to work with Solnam in his smithy. Audraie was an attractive and kind child and soon the couple discovered she had worked her way into their heart; so they adopted her. In the Smithy they found that Audraie was unussually talened, and enjoyed working with her adopted father. But she was sad, she always wondered where her beloved sister was and if she was okay. 2 months before her 15 birthday a customer came to Solnam's smithy who recognized Audraie. He was old friend of her parents. He told Audray of how her parents were working for the Varden when they were born, they were being chased and had no choice but to let them go. 10 years later they came back to the house where they had left the girls, only to find that the woman there had died and the girls were gone. Their parents were deeply grieved by this news and went on a journey to find them; he hadn't heard from them in 13 months.

When Audraie heard this news she was both happy and sad. She immediatly sent a letter of to the last known whereabouts of her sister and prayed it would get there safely. She never heard back from her. Soon she began to forget all about the letter. When she was 16 Audraie began to be courted by a local boy, Damion. They fell in love and were engaged to be married when a pack of soldiers from Galbotorix came to the village. Damion, along with the other villagers fought them off, but in the process, Damion lost his life. Deeply grieved by this, Audraie became very depressed; Until one day, when she remembered the letter. She decided that she would leave and so she set out on a journey. To where, she doesn't know.

Weapons: 2 excellent swords & 1 dagger, made by her adoptive Father

Likes: blue skies, the ocean. To be around people. Riding her horse.

Dislikes: She despises Galbotorix and all who work for him.
She hates slave traders & greedy people.

Animal Companions: a horse her parents gave her, Donahough

Character's Physical Description: 5"9, has a strange birthmark on her wrist that streches up to her lower arm. She is muscular from working in her father's smithy. Always wears an enchanted violet necklace around her neck.

Dreams for the Future: To find her sister & parents.

Reason for Dreams: She has hope from hearing the customer's story.

Alignment/side: The Varden

Controlling the weather is a bit...powerful

yeah I know. But that's all she can do & she doesnt even knw she can yet.
If u have any suggestions that would coroporate with her sister's power (Drania; controlling the Earth)
I will gladly take them.
What about controlling air?

Controlling air would be fine, but not to the point where you can just take the oxygen out of someones lungs without making yourself tired

I wasn't even thinking of that, just like she could make the winds blow really hard and stuff.

ok, add like 3 more lines to personality, ten it'll be fine.

better?

good, accepted.

YAY! thank you