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zelf
Peasant Elder
Joined: September 24th, 2010, 3:15 pm Posts: 113 Location: smewhere eating a cookie
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Affiliation: Dragonriders
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steven.
Name: - steven
Age:- unknown, he was trapped in the body of a ten year old.
Gender: - male
Skills: He is very good at sneaking into places he has never been caught before. He is also very good with a sword and can hold his own if he has to fight most highly skilled warriors. He knows some magic but rearely uses it, he prefers to use triickery or some other means to fight his battles. but when he does use magic he likes to simple but clever spells.
Race: - half elf ((you will see why both my charactors are half elf later))
Hair: - he has dark brown hair that is fairly short.
Eyes: - he has dark green eyes.
Home Village: - Ellesmeria
Parents: - unkown, but his father was a rider.
Siblings: - kilev
Character Personality: At least 12 lines. He may have jsut been trapped in the body of a ten year old, but he still has the personality of a child and still does many childish things. he alays has a look of innocence about him, but sometimes his true age shows and he does things people would not expect him to do. he also does not let people push him around. if he does not want to do something he will not do it, Unlike his brother, kilev. he likes to talk to people and will start conversations with a complete stranger. but he still keeps his mind carefully sheilded and is always watching the actions of others to avoid getting into trouble. he wares a dark brown cloak when he is in crouded places and he acts as if he is jsut another boy wandering around. he always has a slight smile as if he is up to something and used to speak as if whatever he is tlaking about is the most interesting thing in the world, before he became mute. . it is hard for him to get very angry, But it is also easy to get him to smile and laugh. he does not like to stay in one place long, since people often ask why a boy his age is wandering the streets alone or people notice that there is something different about him, he does not like people to know his true age anonly tells it to people he trusts, so far only one person is alive who knows it and that is kilev. and he does not trust easily, you will need to basicly tell him about five times in the antaint langauge that he can trust you before he will fully beleive you.
Character History: At least 15 lines.
When he was ten years old. He was playing with his brother, kilev in a feild. his father and dragon were gone on some arrand and would not be back for another two days. while they were playing a man happend to cross their path, steven was running after kilev and accidently bumped into him. The man was angry and cursed steven that his body would never age past ten years. at first steven thought he was just trying to scare him. but as the years went by he realized it was true. his body never aged beyond that point, he watched his freinds grow old and die, but he was stuck in his ten year old form. when galbatorix attacked his family, ((as mentiond in kilev's Bio)) he was sperated from his brother and has not seen him for many years. he has travled to many diferent places in search for him. People have told stories about him, calling him "the antaint child" but most have come to beleive his exsistance is a myth. which is what he wanted. he never wanted anyone But kilev to know his real age or anything that mgiht attracted galbatorix or any other evil to him, That might make it harder for him to find kilev. he has scryed kilev, but kilev moves so often it is hardly a ussefull method of finding him. so he continues looking, hopeing that on day he will find him. he will never give up untill someone tells him in the antaint language that his brother is dead, untill then he will keep searching untill he finds him. and he is not going to let anyone stop him. he has not shown himself to anyone lately. but he is still activly searching. Always paying attention to anyone who looks familiure in hopes that it will be kilev. he has even asked the elvs if he had been there at some point. The only luck he got there was that kilev had been there, but had left before he was born. he leanred his skill in magic and swordplay while he was there.
Weapons: At least a 2 line description for each weapon, if it isn't plain.
he has a short sword, which for his sise would be like a normal sised swrod.
Likes: he likes plants and animals.
Dislikes: he dislikes anything that is evil. But most of all he dislikes the empire.
Weakness / Fear: his weakness is, since he is trapped in the body of a ten year old he cannot withstand drect blows like most adults can, he has to think of other ways to avoid attacks when they come directly at him. he cannot just block them. and he is also mute.
Animal Companions: none
Character's Physical Description: At least 5 lines.
he has slightly tan skin, he wares a brown cloak and always keeps his hood up to hide his ears which are slightly more pointed then kilev's. His eyes show both wisdom and childish curiosity. He has a scar on the side of his head, that he got in the accident that caused him to be mute. he only remembers how he got it becuase someone told him later on. he also always has his sword hidden and also a dagger every he goes. When he is in a thick cround he wares another lighter cloaked over the one he already has to help hide his weapons. he has only been noted to have them once. and that was becuase he let the man stare for too long.
Dreams for the Future:
he wants to find his brother kilev and then help overthrow galbatorix.
Reason for Dreams:
he wants to find kilev becuase, kilev is his brother and he can't just forget about him. and he wants to help overthrow the king becuase he jsut watched him kill his parents and he does not want that to happen to anyone els.
Alignment/side: for now he is not in any group. since he is still searching for kiliev. but he has thought about either joining the varden or tagging along with the elves army.
_________________ I am the marshmallow king. fear my puffyness!
Last edited by zelf on November 3rd, 2010, 4:11 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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November 2nd, 2010, 6:39 pm |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
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Dragon: Ardel
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Re: steven.
Good job, zelf. There's just one thing I'd like to point out: in Personality you say he "speaks as if whatever he is talking about is the most interesting thing in the world," but you also say he is mute. Should this sentence say that he used to speak like this? I just wanted to note that, it's not really important.
And since that's not that important, and everything else looks great, I Accept.
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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November 3rd, 2010, 12:59 am |
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zelf
Peasant Elder
Joined: September 24th, 2010, 3:15 pm Posts: 113 Location: smewhere eating a cookie
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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Re: steven.
oh yeah, thanks for pointing that out. I had the idea of haveing him be mute after I had written the personality.
_________________ I am the marshmallow king. fear my puffyness!
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November 3rd, 2010, 4:06 pm |
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dark dragon
RPG Team
Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here!
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Avadius
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Re: steven.
Looks good, I accept
_________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara
Neutral: Snare
Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night"
Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy.
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November 7th, 2010, 6:54 pm |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Faelia
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Re: steven.
Same here. Nice job, zelf.
I Accept.
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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November 8th, 2010, 5:34 am |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Ardel
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Re: steven.
Looks like your newest charry is fully accepted, then, zelf. Hope you enjoy rping him!
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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November 9th, 2010, 3:21 am |
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