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Wise DragonRider
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Post The biggest attempt at poems eva lol
Ok im not any good but i just right poems for the sake of riting poems lol.
Most of them are ones i just ones that show how im feeling while others are just ones i thought up at random moments in my life lol.
I havent done it very long so please dnt laugh!!!!
Im rambling on so im gonna write one:

As the sun falls behind the green earth
A rainbow appears in the sky'
Blues,purples,red and yellow's
All so close and yet so high.

As the sun falls behind green earth
Colours darken and pale,
Yet yellows and reds remain
The colours never fail.

As the sun falls behind green earth
Reds become rosy, yellows become pink
Morning glory has yet to come,
As we all need to think.

As the sun falls behind green earth
Reds turn dark, yellows vanish,
To beyond everyones sight
As all vanishes into eternal night.

Please tell me if this is anygood ot if its bad.

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October 29th, 2006, 8:20 pm Profile
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It's brilliant!!
:D

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October 30th, 2006, 7:33 am Profile
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yay someone apprieciats my amazin work hehehe lol
I got loads more shall i put my other ones on though there not v.gd lol

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October 30th, 2006, 4:48 pm Profile
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definitely!! :D

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Where the gods fear to tread
That where evil makes its bed
That is where they grow and grow
and that is where you must go
(\../)
(O.o)
(")(")
Help me take over the world!!!

we took a wrong turning
it's nobodies fault
we followed our hearts
and now we're lost
we kept on going
no thought of cost
and this is the consequence

please read and comment on my story
http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?t=3206

please read and comment on my songs
http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?t=4283

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November 3rd, 2006, 11:12 am Profile
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