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Rider64
Peasant Elder
Joined: May 15th, 2006, 10:12 pm Posts: 86 Location: In my bunker...underground
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Leaf
(L-ay-f) not leaf of tree
Name: Leaf
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Skills: Nightvision,lighter than usual elf weight.Swordsmanship,archery skills.
Race: elf
Hair: white
Eyes: luminous green
Home Village: Dras Leona
Parents: Kaeddyr-M/Komai-F
Siblings: Comis-Brother-Died
Character Personality: Dark,Quiet,likes to hunt and practice archery and swordsmanship.Has white steed named Raindance,he loves steed like a brother.He also likes to hide.he purposely does something bad infront of soldiers to make a chase.He always wins.He also likes to spar in different disquises.He also likes to gamble and play games to win crowns.I also like long walks on the beach with my horse.also likes to be inventive and makes traps often.Very sarcastic and funny at times.Also very energetic,hardly rus out of energy.Likes to watch the sun rise and fall.the moon too.very assertive and usually gets the imformation quickly.Very resourceful and dare-devilish.
Character History: Born in Hadarac Desert,Mother and Father died and I found a man named Carsaib,he was trained well.He would not tell me who trained him,but he trained me in the art of magic and sorcery.He left because a magically sent message said his master had been killed.I never saw him again.I self-trained myself until i was sure i could do or kill anything.I became a assassin,born to kill on command.I went to the beors and when i saw them i almost fainted.I further journeyed into the mountains.and eventualy met an Urgal chief,he said(roughly translated)We attack Varden.I asked him who his cheif leader was.he said Durza.i went and met this Durza who didnt recognise me(carsaib = Durza)but i recognized him.I tryed to shake hands eith him but he just pushed me aside.He didnt remember a man named Leaf.I left in vain.I traveled back through the Beors and then to Dras Leona where a got a job.I was to kill Marcus Tabor.I obviously succeded.i got hundreds of crowns for that deed.After that i met two creatures name the Ra Zac,they betrayed me and permantly burnt my face with Sithr Oil.I now wear a metal mask over my face.Sence then i have lived my life in exile from Galbatorix,hunting down the Ra Zac.Ive been through the Beors across the hadarac and Surda.Ive even checked some of the outermost islands.I finally found them in the place i started Helgrind.I found out that slaves are taken every month and never come back.I signed up for the position(to the slaves relief)and on the night of the full moon i left for the hills.the ra zac eventually came out,but expecting a slave they were surprised.Using quick,stealthy moves i killed the smaller one with no problem.But to my dismay the other noticed.he tryed to attack but i doged him and ran for saftey.I eventually made it to the borders of Dras Leona but by that time the Ra Zac had alerted Galbatorix and his soldiers.ever scince he sent out almost half of his army i have been in hiding for my trecherous deed to the kings most loyall subjecs.
Weapons: Katar,Ruby encrusted dagger(magical properties?)
Likes: darkness,blood,money
Dislikes: light,happyness
Animal Companions: raven
Character's Physical Description: Thin and muscular.White hair.looks decieving
Dreams for the Future: kill Galbatorix for letting murderers run amok.
Reason for Dreams: Friend and master dissapered because of murder
Clothes: Steel Face mask,White cloak,black cloth rope.Black knee boots(combat style)White skin-tight elvish pants
Thx Glenwing for the Outline.
_________________ May your blades stay sharp.-Brom
If u play the online game MapleStory PM me.
Last edited by Rider64 on May 24th, 2006, 12:41 am, edited 5 times in total.
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May 18th, 2006, 9:26 pm |
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LeonPsycho114
New Peasant
Joined: May 17th, 2006, 10:25 pm Posts: 29 Location: PleasantVille
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i'm not a real judge but your going to need just about everything longer including histroy
_________________ RoCKiN TiLL ThE eND
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May 18th, 2006, 9:55 pm |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Lamp Shade
Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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Do NOT post here unless it is your bio or you are part of the staff.
WAAAAAAAAY more history and personality.
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May 18th, 2006, 11:24 pm |
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Rider64
Peasant Elder
Joined: May 15th, 2006, 10:12 pm Posts: 86 Location: In my bunker...underground
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ill try
_________________ May your blades stay sharp.-Brom
If u play the online game MapleStory PM me.
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May 19th, 2006, 8:12 pm |
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Rider64
Peasant Elder
Joined: May 15th, 2006, 10:12 pm Posts: 86 Location: In my bunker...underground
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How now eh?
_________________ May your blades stay sharp.-Brom
If u play the online game MapleStory PM me.
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May 19th, 2006, 8:38 pm |
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Firetongue
Global Moderator...
Joined: November 28th, 2005, 3:44 pm Posts: 10150 Location: England
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Surdans
Dragon: Llyelia
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Please don't double post.
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May 19th, 2006, 8:41 pm |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Lamp Shade
Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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You still need more.
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May 19th, 2006, 10:20 pm |
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Svit-kona
BAD EMAIL
Joined: January 26th, 2006, 4:43 am Posts: 594 Location: Ellesmera, Du Weldenvarden . . where else?
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More history and personality, and please use spacing between characteristics.
_________________ "He touched his fingers to his lips and said, 'Arya Svit-kona,' using the honorific he had just learned for a woman of great wisdom." pg. 163 of Eldest
Did anyone miss me? Sorry, I was on a couple-week hiatus. Computer crash. I had to go to the library just to do homework . . .
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May 20th, 2006, 1:49 pm |
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Rider64
Peasant Elder
Joined: May 15th, 2006, 10:12 pm Posts: 86 Location: In my bunker...underground
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How much more?
_________________ May your blades stay sharp.-Brom
If u play the online game MapleStory PM me.
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May 21st, 2006, 10:51 pm |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Lamp Shade
Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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Still more history and personality.
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May 22nd, 2006, 11:10 pm |
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Rider64
Peasant Elder
Joined: May 15th, 2006, 10:12 pm Posts: 86 Location: In my bunker...underground
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Good now?
_________________ May your blades stay sharp.-Brom
If u play the online game MapleStory PM me.
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May 24th, 2006, 12:24 am |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Lamp Shade
Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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Now you need a bit more personality.
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May 24th, 2006, 12:35 am |
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Rider64
Peasant Elder
Joined: May 15th, 2006, 10:12 pm Posts: 86 Location: In my bunker...underground
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Good now?
_________________ May your blades stay sharp.-Brom
If u play the online game MapleStory PM me.
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May 24th, 2006, 7:57 pm |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Lamp Shade
Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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Yes, its fine, I guess, but I would've added more.
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May 24th, 2006, 10:51 pm |
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Rider64
Peasant Elder
Joined: May 15th, 2006, 10:12 pm Posts: 86 Location: In my bunker...underground
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Will it be accepted???
_________________ May your blades stay sharp.-Brom
If u play the online game MapleStory PM me.
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May 25th, 2006, 9:00 pm |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Lamp Shade
Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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Don't ask me. If I would be the one accepting, I would say a 75% chance? It's not too bad
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May 25th, 2006, 11:18 pm |
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Rider64
Peasant Elder
Joined: May 15th, 2006, 10:12 pm Posts: 86 Location: In my bunker...underground
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Who accepts??? Glenwing
_________________ May your blades stay sharp.-Brom
If u play the online game MapleStory PM me.
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May 26th, 2006, 1:33 am |
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