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Name: Alvera ( Al-Veeh-raa )
Age:90
Race: Elf
Allegiance: The Varden, The Elves
Home: Ellsmera
Gender: Male
Physical Appearance: Light blue eyes, pitch black hair, tall pointy ears, Stands around 6’1, Muscular from long hours of sparring, pale skin, tendency to get bright red. Is very flexible and has great reflexes
Clothing: To battle Alvera wears tattered and bent armor; a blue cross on the front of his breastplate represents his family name, Tongarda (Ton-gar-duh)
Strengths: Alvera has a obvious strength in battle, he has a strength in leadership, A strength in wisdom, cunning ability to get out of trouble, and no fear of heights.
Weaknesses: Alvera has a weakness in his curiosity, a weakness in relationships, a weakness in being cruel, and a weakness of tomatoes they make Alvera very sick.
Personality: Alvera is an enthusiastic and kind friend; Alvera is a warrior in romance. Alvera always defends what he thinks is write and just. Alvera plans to serve the Varden till his last breathe
Weapons: Alvera fights with Sword, bow, and staff in battle.
Alveras current sword is stained with blood and rests in a purple sheath made for another sword. Alveras bow is made of yew and is very weak; Alveras staff is currently broken in two.
History: Born in Ellsmera father dies when alvera is 5. Alvera lives with his mom in Ellsmera and spars all day with loving brother Hollard. When Alvera is 16 his mother is killed, She was shot between the ribs by a stray arrow. Hollard kills himself two years later. When Alvera is 34 he discovers his great abilities for magic and follows his path of magic until now.
Skills: Alvera likes to practice archery, swordsmanship, and magic. Alvera is good at all of these and his ability to run fast, and his great reflexes help with all of these.

well firstly the codings all wrong. Also please put spaces inbetween fields, and longer personality and history. Also a few minor typos and punctuation mistakes...